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subi.dhanabala

@subi.dhanabala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Nice update..missing arshi a lot..pls dont make shashi worse..he is a great fatherly figure(in the show too).. It wuld be nice if arnav is also enveloped in his warmth...
Waiting for nxt update..

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Lovely updates.. Shyam is very evil.. Damn him.. 😡 cliff hanger nd all huh? u better giv nxt update soon.. i m vry anxious for shashi..

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Sad...master gupta is no more😭...i thought shayam will kill him sometime...but dint think he'll kill him this early...what now...what will khushi's family do...how will they survive? will khushi work again in castle to support her family...hmmm...

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Mouktika

@Mouktika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

Wow u even gave mr Prakash a beautiful love story very nice.

Though the Story is moving ahead u r not leaving any detail unexplained which makes the readers stick to it till the end

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vrinda-95

@vrinda-95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Shocking last line;hope he is alive.Jaiprakash and the vegetable seller! Nice couple!
Thanks for the pm.

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

Good one dear Aquiline...

Finally shass got an answer for her query about the future of the little acquaintance between JP and the market-girl... 😉

Love is indeed in the air... tonight... JP, one of the loyal servant of First Lord proclaiming his love and even getting an instant acknowledgement from his beloved ..." way to go JP".

Master Shashi... all cold and numbed... paralysed in terror?...lost his consciousness due to the immense shock... aftermath effects of witnessing the dangerous transformed General?

Looking forward to know more about the night's events... Take care.

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Girl you have developed a new liking for this evilness nowadays 😭
CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please please I want to know what happens next 😊

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Niks

@NiksAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#548

I knew ...i knew...had ths bad feelings tht he gonna be dead...oooh but why...???💔

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sansu

@sansu

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#549

hi!!!

atlast im here to catch the update...

u are really on a match making mood this season right??...

seriously!!...jay prakash???...i was like "blank"...😆😆

that was hilarious for me at first!!!...

but, even with that you had made something very beautiful!!!>..

the man's words were amazing...he is really strong n he seems to have thought about it before...

it was cute!!...it was joyful n it was fun !!!...

this ball nught is over-flowing with emotions on all sides!!!...

most of it being love n its consequences!!!...

did you really have this planned out before??...did you not lol when thinking of a pair for jay prakash?...

i know that it was a serious conversation though it was light-hearted...

but, just the thought of this n im like-----🤣

atlast!!!...

we have come to know where the poor father ended...but, is he alive dear??...dont scare me now!!!...that was a good man with a good heart!!!...

but, what is everybody gonna think about this???

will khushi have doubts on lordy??...hope she doesnt!!!!

yea dear!!!...we know the story is safe in your hands orelse we would have locked it away in the highest room of the tallest tower...!!😉😆

lovely update!!...

waiting for more!!!🤗!🤗

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#550

Hey!

As always, well-written and concise.

Enjoyable, captivating.

The scene between the girl and JayPrakash was sooo adorable and pretty amusing.

She's a clever one. Yes she is. Has a sense of humour, personality. Him ... well he has a way with his words doesn't he ... 😆

Woah! So Mr Gupta has been left to ... die ... ofcourse not!

I mean thankfully JayPrakash was curious enough and possibly brave enough to go and see what was outside, lying on the ground ... in this horrid weather ... sends shivers up the spine