ArHi FF:5:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

A QUIL ...YOU UPDATED ,WOW

LET ME READ N COME BACK😉

AAH !!!! AT LAST THE BEAST COULD HOUND HIS KILL

IN THE DARK OF THE NIGHT

IN THE PRIVACY OF HIS BEDCHAMBERS

IN THE SILENCE THAT HAD THE LOUDEST NOISE

IN THE COLDNESS THAT FROZE THE MOMENT

IN HIS ARMS LAY THE BEAUTY

IN THE LONELY LIGHT OF A SINGLE CANDLE THAT SHONE

IN THE DULLNESS OF THE MIRROR STOOD THE BEAST STARING HARD

IN THE DEPTH OF HIS HEART HE HELD A NEW FEELING

IN THE HEAT OF THE MOMENT THE LORD LOST HIMSELF IN HER INNOCENT GRACE

IN NO TIME HE BLAMED HIS DEED UPON THE MISS

IN HIS HARD BODY EXISTS A SOFT HEART THAT THUDS LOUDER THAN EVER

IN HIS DISPLAY OF AFFECTION LIES THE FETISH DESIRE

IN THE HARD SHELL REMAINS LOCKED THE TENDER SIDE OF THE LORD

N MISS KHUSHI IS YET

THE CULPRIT

THE ONE WHO ERRS

THE ONE WHO ENTICED THE BEAST

THE ONE AT THE RECEIVING END

THE ONE WHO LOVES BUT CAN'T SAY IT

THE ONE WHO CARES FOR A LONE CANDLE BEING BURNT FOR NO REASON

THE ONE WHO IS SUBJECT TO HIS RAW PASSION

THE ONE MAULED LIKE A ROSE UNDER THE FOOT

THE ONE WHO LOVETH THE LORD BUT CAN'T CONFESS IT EVEN TO HERSELF

THE ONE WHO CARRIES THE MARKS OF HIS NUDE PASSION

THE ONE WHOSE NECK WAS ADORNED BY THE NECK PIECE IN ONE MINUTE

N WAS BRUTALLY SCRATCHED IN THE NEXT

THE ONE WHO REALIZED WHO HAD GIVEN HER THE DEEP BRUISES ONCE TOO MANY

THE ONE WHO GOT SCORCHED BY THE SHEER HEAT EMITTING FROM THE BEAST

THE ONE BEING SAVORED BY THE SEDUCTIVE HUNGER

WHILE READING THIS PARTICULAR CHAPTER I COULD ONLY PICTURE

''THE BEAUTY N THE BEAST'' ALL ALONG

O M A 😲...A QUIL N SOUL MUST FAINT READING THIS LENGTHY COMMENT

MAUSAM VIBHAAG KE ANUSAAR KAL ARHASIA PRADESH MEIN ZABARDAST TOOFAAN AANE KI SAMBHAVNA HAI

THANKS FOR THE TREAT GIRLS

KKKA

Edited by KKKA - 12 years ago

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

a lovely re-incarnation of the most poignant romantic scene to have embraced indian tv. although here arnav got a taste of khushi. it should be intoxicating and arnav's desire for khushi should know no bounds now

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

hey linny...welcome back...wow...lin that was...ermmm...hot scorching hot...and just like khushi we are burning too...god what was that...and lordy gets a chance to kiss her,that too in the neck...but why does he always aims the neck, it reminds of vampires(kidding)...why oh why that someone should interrupt them...oh..*pulls my Hair*...

but that was extremely arshilicious and totally worth the wait...and u tell u havent written any hot updates but this was perfect ...it was super good...

he really did kiss her near that grapes thingy right??and khushi realised it, and now this...oh poor girl...but lordy why does he have to blame khushi,after doing all the stuff he blames her, but great she gave it upto him...but but lavanya was at the door and she heard their convo and did she heard all??

lin update soon...i want to know the aftermath...

p.s:hope you are well now...😳take care

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Arnav's truth will be out soon i feel

Loved the update

I hope the women was Anjali n La

I cant see her hurt more

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Swetyz

@Swetyz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

That's really beautiful update...
This scene its one ofmy favourites and the way you presented is fantastic...
Its really brilliant...
poor Lavanya...how mUch did she have to suffer...
My heart goesfor her...
And finally khushi knew that those marks are from arnav and not any insects...
But what is the curse for which these marks appear when he kisses her...

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9424976

@9424976

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Oh Lin you did even better then I expected, and I have high expectations of you! ahahaha

I loved the use of light, the candles, the wind,fog, darkness,etc. It was all used very well and helped set the mood, give it an intimate sense. Good job on that!
The necklace, I was waiting for this moment ever since you introduced it to us okay. And I just loved how Khushi was in front of the mirror and Arnav came out of nowhere, and then he just put the necklace on her. Looking for her reaction, an approval, happiness, something?
And then Khushi was feeling it too, Arnav's eyes on her, how he held her so dearly.
Arnav's desire finally made him lose control, or was it the beast within him? This I would like to know. I wasn't expecting kisses, so that was a great surprise. And oh gosh Im blushing but wowza was that perfect or what. Very similar to the day in the forest, Arnav's lust/desire, how it was slow and fast at the same time. Khushi's reaction to his actions, this time she wasn't asleep so there are no excuses! Poor thing, this is all new for her.
Khushi! Oh dear Lavanya, I am sorry you had to witness the exchange between Arhi when you called her name. But what great timing! NOT.
Again, Khushi realizes what kind of situation she was in, feeling disgusted/ashamed with herself? Or him? The whole situation rather. Even through her tears, she couldn't understand his extremely horrible statements, and the realization that he had done this before and it is in fact his fault allowed her get all fiery and she ran out (without seeing La I assume)
Arnav, gosh man. Why would you blame this on her? It was obvious that yes, that close proximately, the timing, Khushi herself, etc. made you lose control but that is not her fault. And then I loved the look he had, from frustrated to bewildered to feeling...somewhat horrifed? He saw the marks on her neck (oh gosh why were those marks hurting Khushi? It was the beast then wasn't it b/c it caused her harm??) and felt awful. And I love how he tried to...tried to do something, idk what but he outstretched his hand towards her...twice he tried to...and she just ran out. I am curious as to what he wanted to say?
And now we wait. Oh gosh what will happen. What will Arnav, Khushi, and Lavanya do? say? feel? so many questions oh gosh!
Overall, yes, it did make me get the "feels" and omg MY EMOSHUNS Lin. woah. You are really good at such "HOT" (LOL) scenes. Do more pretty please? hehe pretty pretty please.

Loved it Lin!
* Lady in the Hood makes an appearance after a long time, heck I forgot when the last time was that she came aboard! She must be feeling happy, another stepping stone to this path!

Edited by 9424976 - 12 years ago

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

OMG this was AMAZING

hot

intense

lost for words

wonderful scene

I can picture it in my mind

were those love-bites or does this have something to do with his curse?

the lady was Lavanya?

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123vava

@123vava

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

😃😃😃😃😃

😳

ooo mannn i love it...such a sizzling hottt updateee...i was stalking for ur post all these daysss and got such a fruitful updateee...i can imagine our arshiii...loveee uuu

nddd i cant wait less updateee sooonnn

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Amazingly well written. I am so happy that you focused on the irresistible attraction between them that nearly sweeps them off their feet. Thank God the purity remained intact. Well done. Keep it coming.