FF : Ascent Chapter 4 page 38 on March 31st

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taani16

@taani16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome start ... i can say amazing...

cant wait for next one...

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice prologue.Did Arnav see Khushi?

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

very interesting and different update! loved the first part, was very beautifully written. hope u continue soon

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834074

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nyc start... do pm me!!!!! :)

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ayaazukideewani

@ayaazukideewani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

very nice update
plz continue soon and pm me

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

very interesting start
continue soon please
and thank u for pm me

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Mahnoor

@rockprincess123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I wass sooo drawn to the whole chapter!!! 😊The beginning was extremely gripping and I was soo eager to find out what was going to happen next!! I think that the basic foundation for a good storyline is the begining/introduction/prologue which is the first and foremost opportunity to engage readers and you did exactly that my dear!!! 👏 👏

I felt Arnav's pain... bless his soul!! He seems to have gone through a lot! 😭 😭 😭

I am eagerly hoping that this girl is Khushi and I have got a good feeling it is going to be her!! 😛

Update soonn!!!

Edited by rockprincess123 - 12 years ago