FF : Ascent Chapter 4 page 38 on March 31st

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

awesome start loved it very interesting add me in can't wait to read more

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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juju710

@juju710

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awesome part! update soon please. it's very interesting so continue :) :)

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Great start dear ! Carry on !

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Wow this is your first piece of writing !! It's fabulous ...the girl probably is a lookalike of his wife ??? May be may be not but khushi for sure...
Plz pm me updates 😳

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

As promised I read your first chapter. Interesting start .. Are you planning to continue?

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Music_Junkie

@Music_Junkie

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ssyahoo
As promised I read your first chapter. Interesting start .. Are you planning to continue?

yes i do intend to continue the fiction, held up with studies, Exams around the corner.

Edited by summer_breeze - 12 years ago

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

awww khushi is dead 😔

hop[e ye ladki bhi khushi hi ho ,,pta ni kaise per khushi ho 😳

intersting start

loved it

thnks for pm🤗

link bhi theek tha aur concept bhi A-one tha so ignore ni kiya 😃

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My name is Student

@-Soleil-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Amazing start! :D

Can't wait for more! :)

It's really amazing!

Update soon!

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Reema

@Ree1306

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Yes I really loved the concept..! Something completely different which I have come across..! Update soon..! 😊

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varshamaharaj

@varshamaharaj

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

very interesting concept!!!!!i sincerely hope its kushi herself and not her look alike!!!look alike or another gal wont do for me but kushi herself lol...the way u described arnav feelings were absloutely amazing n perfect and emotional...