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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Nice update... So khuhsii is in boston n want to know that he miss her or not awww

Continue soon

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@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#722

so great Arnav Singh Raizada been caught by his employee checking on for another employee whom he have failed to see from two days.. wow.. loved Humera... awesome chapters from 15 to 20.. sorry for late reply.. loved all the chapters.. 😃

thanks for pm always 😊

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

OMG I just love this. Miss Naaz is very observant I must say. Cannot wait to read further! Thanks for the pm.

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Thread marking.

Came here under the recommendation of NB, so with no doubt it must be excellent.

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Ecc, I am waiting to see how his party is going to be, will it be Sheetal, you write the feelings and settings so well, the story just flows thru, and each of the characters, perfect.

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

More than Shyam,I am drawn towards Rudra.There is something in his character which make him standout in the story.

I am loving how both Khushi,and Arnav missing each other.

As always your update is so beautifully written and balanced.

:)

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adhu11

@adhu11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

so ASR started missing khushi .interesting.rudra is planning something for khushi for his benefit .waiting for the next update

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

ASR missing her already... wow..

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Alright! i read the prev chap .. the Shyam bit ... but could not comment then!

Must say the characterisation you come up with is awesome! i said the same for Rudra's description as well! though negative in their roles ... you make them appear so strong in their own spaces ... that it is difficult to abhor the character!

Must appreciate you for that you know!

Now what do we have here in chap 20!

oooh! i was waiting for this bit ... but at the same time i dint want an entire chap to be dedicated to their 'missing each other' scene! and i was not disappointed!

I liked the brief touch up on KK and Rudra... though a small bit ... but was quite infomative and spoke volumes abt them and their relationship!

Man!! the guy does sound dangerous! i really hope he does not hamper with Khushi's life like he did with Payal's ... but offcourse relief is that he too acknowledges the same...

Already the path Arhi are treading along has too many obstructions to clear ... i really do not want Rudra to hinder more! *sigh* like thats not gonna happen now!

Miss Naaz! that was very perceptive of you!! :)

ASR!! i am sure you dint see that coming! he he he

Good one Chaitu!

cant wait to know whats lined up next!