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@princessunara

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#921

Hay i am reading this, can u pls plsss keep this for just 1 more week pls? I am really catching up with all ur stories..
Will forget everythn else n read this as fast as i cam, but dont leave me in the lurch pls

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#922

comment under construction ..sorry for inconvenience 😛

i read your OS today and went to your profile just to eat your brain but i ended up reading your status

tell me one thing ! Is it some kind of viral infection ? this ''removed '' thing ? 😳 ? Now I strongly believe that apart from heavy population and pollution .. mumbai s environment has some very dangerous '' anti-posting on IF '' virus.. and it makes a person very determined and stubborn simultaneously ... so i can only request you to please go on a vacation or move to some other city so that i may ask you to not remove this unbelievably awesome story from Forum 😳

ok coming to the story .. i m reading it right now .. lets see if i can finish it before you remove it 😉 RACE ? ! 😉 ;P

and ya .. since i have less time .. i skipped the prologue and will be skipping all your author s note as well 😛 ... so you wont get any comments or appreciation for that !.. your loss ! .. *shrugs shoulders**

reading and commenting in hurry .. so..

chapter 1 :

What a chapter sir ji ! 👏 classic ! ... wah wah wah .. dey ghuma k .. ghuma k .. ghuma k .. dy ghuma k 😆 .. aha first chapter mai thapad .. dhishkiyaoo .. LOL .. rocking han .. thapad sy dar nai lgta sahab ..payar sy lagta hai .. :P yu sallu fan ? waisy well deserved slap .. 👍🏼 i liked the bravo and decent khushi .. o ya .. and arnav hihi .. i can like any kind of arnav anytime .. 😳 .. chapter was dabangg ! .. i want to tell k like the way yu compared n contrasted dehli n mumbai n the way yu wrote about khushi s past .. but my mind is just thinking about the thapad thing .. it was the highlight rather the sunlight of the chapter 😆 .. good good han

chapter 2 :

what was that ? 😆 his cheek was still red ? kafi zoor sy chapa khushi ny 😆 anyways i feel that yu are cruel to arnav .. and favor khushi 😳 .. in first chapter he gets a slap .. now he is being embarassed ..kinda.:P .. yu kno it was embarrassing when Mrs dixit asked him about his laal gaal .. :P and to top it all .. khushi got an upper hand again .. 🤔 he was grateful to her for the reply .. he was somewhat impressed and later guilty too ..
what is the client s name ? i feel it would be ''sheetal ''🤢.. and from the conversation i concluded that the model wanted to be free from AR s contract and defame it .. i think it was her actual motive .. ya .. all the discussion that Mrs . Dixit did had a bottom line k .. cancel contract and pay two month salary to the model .. also the damage has already been done.. AR ka naam tou kharab ho hi gya .. and model ko uska paisa bhi mill gaye ga and now easily job bhi .. hope this arnav is not brainless and will do kuch na kuch ..

Mr . Gill s musings over arnav shows that arnav here is just as he was in the show ? haina ? i bet people dont really change arnav in fictions .. its khushi thy usually modify ..

arnav s mom is alive / good hai .. khushi will get to see a mom in her mom in law .hopefully ..

what up wth arnav s past ? wo apartment mai kya hai ? what happened 4-5 years ago .. jan'ny k lye padhye LLL 😆

chapter 3

krishankant chaturvedi .. ( heavy name han ;P ) why is khushi not a gupta
sweet chapter 😳as far as khushi s caring nature is concerned .. whats up between rudra n payal 😕 ..o ya .. i liked that khushi is richie rich yet has no nobita -ness ( she wants to work on her own .. ;P ) and khushi is also very caring .. 😊 ..this father daughter bonding is good.. but ..pta nai.. natural fel nai hai .. 😒.. madhumati sounds funny .. wanna kno more

p.s this chapter sounded so calm and thora bohot spiceless without any excitement (ya i missed arnav)... first chapter of the story gave an impression that the entire story would be exciting nd some what adventurous :P but here i see and elderly depressed man not wanting his daughter n sister to poke nose in his privacy

Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 10 years ago