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Posted: 12 years ago
Great part.. hope Khushi will understand Shyam's intention before its too late..
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Posted: 12 years ago

The moment I read the chapter name,I knew it would be about Shyam.He is one cunning man.No wonder,Arnav the shrewd man that he is,can read him through to not trust him enough with important matters.

I liked the way you put down his thoughts.It was like plotting down dots and then joining them to form an image i.e shyam.

Humera was right all along.He does lust after Khushi,not only her but I guess something happened as shyam recollected with Humera that got her his bad impression.I hope humera catches evidence soon.

So its clear that Shyam is after control in company.He is ready to wait and use Nakul if it establishes his purpose.He is a cheap man.I feel Anjali never loved him,there has to be some past,and only for sake of her family she married him.That explains her lack of interest when the rishta was done.Even nowI wont be surprised if she knows about his affairs,and may be thats why she is unhappy.

The thoughts of shyam regarding shantanu and Arnav relationship makes me think ki in future he wil create rift betn them.He wil use Khushi for this,the wicked mind he has.
Edited by GrumpyBee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very very interesting! Just started reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chapter. I like chaturvedi! Pls could u pm me when u update this as well? I have added u to my buddy list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very fabulous update. So a total insight of shyam's history. Humera rightly called him is SMJ 😡 how slimy and creepy a person can be. I dont have any words for this snake 🤬 😆 Oh my, my so shyam was behind that model fiasco just to get into arnav's good books😲though I never doubted was little skeptical about the reason.

But few things in this update are nagging me. First why did anjali agree to marry snake without much ado? Why anjali put forth a condition to stay at RM even after marriage ?( I hate this thing, for obvious reasons 😉 ), is nakul really shyam's son? Why do raizada siblings dont like him? What made arnav put him away from all important things as far as RE is concerned? Why is anjali not bothered about shyam's adultery? ( which I guess she already has an inkling about it)

Humera is such a good friend who wants to save khushi from that snake. Such a contrary ain't it? Khushi doesn't openup much yet where as humera is on a mission to protect her as if khushi gives two hoots to that snake 😆

Arnav less episode . Thanks for the pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This has to be one of the best written character descriptions of Mr Jha. You strength certainly lies in your ability to write solid characters and explain their past history, motivations and conflicts. To me Shyam is an interesting character. His dubiousness lies in his ability to stay charming and sweet, yet manipulative behind the facade. One of the things I could never digest in the show was how a smart man like Arnav could never figure out Shyam. Thanks for taking care of that in your story.

I love how this story is multilayered, as a reader I just dont know what to expect.


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Posted: 12 years ago
It's getting really really interesting!beautiful writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is really interesting! I am hooked big time!
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a beautiful chapter and seeing the heading I knew it would be about Shyam and I was right. Very well written! Loved it. I read all the chapters in one go. Pls pls pls pm me with updates! I am hooked big time! Thanks for such a wonderful story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an amazing chapter
I just love Swasti and her boo boo
Would love to see the lunch with shaan and khushi
ASR roaming the halls looking for khushi
Hilarious
Edited by badfaith4u - 12 years ago

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