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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Wow great start...pheli mulakat mein hi thappad 😆...waiting to know arnav's reaction on his mistake...

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

simply amazing.loved it
keep writing ;

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Chaitu i just wanna come and hug you !!!🤗

You are off to a flying start !!!

I cannot begin to say how much i enjoyed reading this update!!

The first half you dealt with setting the pace for Khushi's character and that was brilliantly put across.

I am already in love with her !!

Everything about her , her dressing,her sense of calm demeanor , her thoughts on her family for whom she set aside her personal preferences,her sense of righteousness everything is Perfection Personified.

Then comes the ever fuming ASR ... at first i thought he would be the opposing lawyer but then he is what he is !!😆

Patience was never his call and he got a very good and fitting reward for that.

He will be staggered to know that this pretty little thing who slapped him is not a model but a Lawyer... that will be like another slap for him!!

Great job sweetie !!!⭐️

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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gurukhush

@gurukhush

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

WAIT...🤢... That was incredible😃😃 Khushi Kumari at her fiery best... And the Hulk felt and really deserved that thhappad..😆😆 Well written.. this FF sure promises exciting times ahead,. Just keep that pace going..

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Anandi Rahman

@CrazyDollAnandi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

What the? 😲 (on behalf of ASR)
But Valentine Day par zor ka thapper 😲
Loved it 😃
Poor Arnav 😛 . Bol ne se pehle kuch to socha karo 😆

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Khusi just slapped Arnav??????? Pls continue

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Saima

@Diaphanous

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Wow! I really like this feisty Khushi. And loved it. It's nice reason something tht isn't so lovey-dovey, although I'm working on a Valetine's OS, so I shouldn't be talking. Lol

Anyways, great update.