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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Frankly am not much of a sucker for politics esp. of corporate type but have tremendous faith in u so gonna follow this one,hoping it to be as fulfilling as is "It's meant to be ..eventually".

thnx 4 pm.

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

really interesting prologue

congrats for new ff

😊

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Disha

@dishashah4176

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

interesting prologue would love to read ahead

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Chaitu... I'm waiting for your valentine's day special...

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Snehal

@madhumi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

😊...

vl unres tomorw pakka...😆

******************uNrEs******************

😛..i guess hav changed the definition of tomorw in here..lol..sorry baba...firstly i block the first spot n thn make u poke me repeatedly to unres...m genuinely sorry..but u knw y..ho na..😳

n...Girl...i was curious wht u meant by the FF title whn i read the prologue..but now..😆...jus spell them a statement n there shows up all the mess tht arnav so royally created in here...surely their love life is a maze...tad complicated..lol..

n as for the chapter title..wow..tht was preety in sync...haha..wht a greeting..gosh the pleasantries n chivlaries must be sulking in corner whn it comes to our arshi..my god...a slap..really chaitu...😲😆

well..first thing first..i simply loved the way u beagn wt the chap..a fair amount of thought must have put by u to give such a nice background to khushi's life n also shortly her approach to life..loved the delhi part immensely😃..m curious to know her past too..how she had come this far n whts with law as distance learning..😕

so..u also gave a sneak peek of refrnc job bagging thing..hehe..how kind of indians...while u go all ahgered to grab one whn u apply in othr nations..mera bharat mahan..😆

arnav...hayeee..u simply reminded me of intil IPK days..n tht ASRwht he used to be..commanding n a dominationg..n ofcrse the famous anger..but lemme fairly warn u..no way in hell m taking a sensible khushi here n a more spontaneous arnie here..enough of ur KKG obsession..my boy is a legend..got u ..😈

well...n here i can prove u being biased..oh how elegantly n admiringly u explained her outfit n wht about my arnie..doesnt he dress sexy enough..hun...🥺

n how dare u make him wait...hawww..do u realise u made THE ASR wait..u r so gone chaitu..🤢🤣

n his outburst..hehe..agreed he goes haywire in rage...n d damn frustration is cherry n top..oh how adoring he looks whn angry...n KKg u were jus at wrong place to be poured on by his wrath..😆

Interesting...ahem..so now..lets c how u take this further...😉😉

n surprisingly il jus hav to drop in at pg.18 to c how have u messed some more wt my arnie's image..here i come to take ur class..mind u..😆😆

cheers...!!!!!!!! <3

P.S : i guess thr's name confusion wt arnie's lawyer..is it Mr.Gill or Mr.Singh..kindly crosscheck.

Edited by madhumi - 12 years ago

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Gunjan

@..Gunjan..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Res
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What was that ? Seriously what was that ?
Such an update on valentines day should be considered a crime :D...no...no..but atleast the first chapter was not expected to be like this !!
Phela chapter phele mulakat aur thapaad !!!
Anyways still nice update
Will be waiting for the next update
:)

Edited by fan123GUNJ - 12 years ago

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stories.1408

@stories.1408

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Oh I loved it immensely.plz update d next part soon

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

LOVED THE UPDATE...

WOULD LIKE TO SEEARNAV'S REACTION ON KNOWING HIS MISTAKE...

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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Res

Edited-

OMG!!! What an Update !!! Better than a hundred mushy mushy lovey doviey OS's and updates 😆

This was a dhamaka update! Chaitalee you rocked it !!

This is what I meant, when I said 'Slam Bam Wham' !!
That's what happens when the Fire meets a Tornado !! 😉
A good exchange of fireworks, Arnav with words and Khushi with a tight slap! 😆

This update reminded me of the IPK ArHi's first meet, where Arnav went on accusing Khushi, but then that Khushi was meek, this Khushi certainly takes no nonsense!!😃

Khushi is smart, elegant, sophisticated and rich!!! Was bored of Khushi being portrayed poor financially, weak, and a damsel in distress. 🤢

So, Khushi just relocated from states, and is finding it difficult to adjust. Does she have a dark past?😲

I might have said it a hundred times, and you might have gone numb to it listening, but what the hell, let me repeat it again, Girl you write beautifully!!!

And going by Arnav's character I'm sure he is not going to apologize for what he said, even if the misunderstanding clears 😆

I was so wanting more of this update, I never wanted it to end but it had to, why do all good things have to have an end???😡

*sheepishly asks* Can I borrow an ounce of your brains 😆

Edited by sweetly_sour - 12 years ago