pyaar ya dosti?(swaron&taarey ff)ch12uptd - Page 8

awesome update renu, 👏👏 what is the taarey past? pls reveal soon. wow taarey hug, rey staying at taayam house . taarey ki takkar. llhh, rey shirtless. precap intresting swaron n taarey . pls pls pls update soon. thanks 4 pm me.

Originally posted by: ssruthi

hi dear

ur story is interesting

i thought taani wiil rage at swayam fr his fight

nd taarey convo was on lead dear

hi..

well dats gng 2 happn in de nxt chpter...4r sure..😆...thanks..

Originally posted by: Tahira-2013

ooow taarey are sooo sweet and swaron sooo cute

you are amazing writer

brilliant job plzzz update soon

ya agree dey r...thank u 😊

Originally posted by: Cutiepiesuman

Realy very nice story n amazing concpet njoy n it was divine 2 read it but ek baat pakki hai bcoz yr writin skill meri eng ki tho pakka waat lagne wali hai :-P:-P:-P hehehehe just kiddin realy very gud beingin eagearly w8in 4 next updateB-) pls pm me when updatedB-)

thank u so much...yupe i'll surly pm u ..wen i update...

Originally posted by: shahz

Awsome chapter!!! can't wait to find out about taarey past hope you won't keep us waiting too long.

thank u..nope i won't...i'll reavel it by 7 or 8 chaptr...

Originally posted by: vibhaaa

awesome update renu, 👏👏 what is the taarey past? pls reveal soon. wow taarey hug, rey staying at taayam house . taarey ki takkar. llhh, rey shirtless. precap intresting swaron n taarey . pls pls pls update soon. thanks 4 pm me.

thanks...yupe will revel it soon...

ch 3: maa durga ki avatar

aftr a sleep less n8 finlly sharon get sum tme 2 sleep...she clses her eyes and was abt 2 fall asleep she got a call 4rm swayam..
swayam(shoutng):sharonnn
sharon:ya..i can hear..am not deaf..don't scream...
swayam:ya ..i knw dat..but pls save me 4r ur BFF yaar..she is gng killng me..and y do u people kept crckt bats in ur house?..any ways.. pls opn de door of ur room ..
sharon:wat? ur at my home?
swayam:yupe..now no more qustn pls opn de door ..she is back of me...
sharon :okay... okay 1 min...

sharon opn de door and c swayam & taani runing all ovr de house...and she went in b/w swayam & taani...and tryng 2 stop taani..
sharon:taanu dear wat u dng ...he is ur bro not ur enemy..y r u tryng 2 hit him?
taani:oh shar ..pls hat ja..i have 2 take an lessn 4r my bro so dat he doesn't repeat such mistkes...(tryng 2 move sharon)
swayam: pls save me sharon...(chckng her 4r top 2 bottom..sharon was wearng a shrt dress) BTW pehele meney kabi kaha hey kya ki u luk too hot?
sharon(blushng):oh really?
swayam:yupe..u r really hot..
sharon:thanks..
taani:oye.. hello mr.swayam shekawath...how many tmes i have told u not 2 flrt wid my best frnd?u r gng 2 get two xtra 4r dis...(trys 2 hit him but sharon stops her)
sharon:hey taanu chill yaar..it okay na...lev it ..
taani:arey shar u knw na?how much i was worried abt dis stupd yestrdy...wat if sum thng happns 2 him..wat shld i answr mom &dady?
sharon:taanu chill drlng ..r u gng 2 kill me r wat?
taani: aja tho ye gaya meri hat mey...(swayam runs 4rm dere..and taani runs behnd him shutng..)
here rey is distrub by all dis..irrtd rey cmes 2 sharon room and cng aall dis he says..
rey: wat de hell guys?wats gng on here? will sum one xpln?(swayam runs behnd rey&hides)
swayam:wo acvtlly ..my sis is full on angry on me abt yestrdy f8...now she want s2 teach me a lessn yaar..pls save me 4rm her ..
rey:hey swayam tu apni behan si dartha hey?wat dis man?
swayam:u don't abt her yaar..agar gussa aya tho maa durga hojathi hey meri behan...
rey:(2 himself)muje patha hey ki wo shrt temprd hey..muje nahi tho aur kisko patha hoga meri taanu ke baremey..2swayam :oh really ..i don't knw yaar..
taani:hello xcuse me agar tumari dicuss hoga tho hatogey ..i need 2 talk 2 my bro..
swayam 2 rey :no yaar..she is gng 2 hit me hard...pls kuch kari na..(rey cng his crckt bat in taani's hand..)
rey:hey taani:gve my crckt bat back 2 me...if not i don't knw wat i'll do..gve my bat back 2 me...(taani noded in no..and strtd rung..rey ran back of her..both wer runs around de room..
rey fnlly caught her &strtd ticklng her)
taani:haha..rey stop it pls.. stop it rey...haha
rey:den gve my bat back 2 me...
taani:nooo..
rey:den am not gng 2stop..
sharon 2 swayam:dey r lukng cute na? it had been a vry lng tme since i have seen dem lyk dis..
swayam(lost in sharon's beauti):ya ture ...agreed...
(sharo luks at swayam&swayam luks at sharon...swaron share LLHH momnt...in dis ticklng prcss acdntly de bat in taani's hand hits rey's head...hearng de sund swaron come to der sense..)
taani:oh god ..rey r u okay.? am sry really sry...i didn't mean 2 do dat..am sry..(cupid his face and strtd blow in de place wer de bat hitd..both share a LLHH..soon rey coms in his snse)
rey (tryng 2 remve her hands off his face):no its okay..am f9..

taani(tears strtd fall 4rm her eyes):no rey am really..

rey:no its okay taani...

sharon 2 her self:y taanu is fellng so sad as if she had cmmtd de biggst mistke evr? wat evr..(she truns 2 swayam):swayam kya tu pls neche jakara ice leavogey ?

swayam:ya sure...(swayam went 4rm dere)
sharon:hey taanu chill..bro is alrght ..(swayam was back wid ice&putd de head on de plce wer rey got hurtd..)
rey:ouchhh..hey swayam its paing yaar...
swayam:okay sry sry...BTW thanks dude at last becos of u my sis 4rgot evrythng...
rey(gves a smle):no prb..
taani:bhai ur not gng 2 escpe so esly...(gvs an evl smle.)
swayam strtd rung &taani ran behnd him..cng dis sharey lukd at each othr and smld...

precap:swaron in jungle..

swayam:y do u hate me so much miss.signhania...?

taani 2 herslf:sry rey ...am sry..i want u back in my lyf but i can't get u back...but rey ..wat wuld u do if ur in my plce?if u wer askd 2 choose 1 thng b/w frndshp &luv wat wuld u choose?
i knw i have brkn ur heart...but i don't have othr optns rey...i knw ur still angry on me.. rey can't we atleast be frnds?(now she was sobng badly)

taani dacng while...rey watchng her serctly..

silnt readr aleast hit lyk ..& aftr readng pls do cmmnt..
luv,
renu

seems that taarey are in love in past..
loved Taani's ma durga avtar..
bichara rey mar khana tha swayam ko aur pit gaya vo,,,,,
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.

aww...rey jus knows his taanu too well =)

Originally posted by: dh19

seems that taarey are in love in past..
loved Taani's ma durga avtar..
bichara rey mar khana tha swayam ko aur pit gaya vo,,,,,
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.

yupe der wer...me to luvd her avtar...ya bichara...