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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Uff finally I finish reading all three parts wow they all were amazing. Taani have 7 brothers and six of them is overly possessive aww I can feel her pain lol. But I love how they all love and care for her sooo much her happiness is their happiness its so adorable. I feel kinda bad for Taani ex bf lol but I'm sure he deserve every beating.
Aww Swayam saving Taani from falling and all the boys just drooling over her is awesome lol. Love their bonding, and Sharon so jealous my my lol that was hilarious. Hmm everyone found Swayam beautiful but our Rey didn't say anything wow. Poor Taani getting ragged and over possessive and protective bhai is so angry. Plz continue soon, you're doing a super duper amazing job. I love all three parts.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Jus read the last 2 parts, poor taani being ragged, but I love protective brother swayam, how sweet, I wonder aage jaake rey ka kya hoga, I mean she has 7 over protective brothers, bechara rey uski toh band baj jayegi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
oow such a cute love story and 7 brother poor rey swayam hahaha shut up sharon hahhaa that was good imagine if something like that happen in serial
FAB JOB PLZZZ UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
oh god it was so awesome i loved it
swayam possessive avtar was amazing
continue soon dear plzzz
waiting 4 next part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
wwaao great update...!
swayam iss soo caring brother..!
plzz update ssoonn..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
too nice dear
ur chaps r consistent
nd update depends on d story line
if u think 2 giv a break
den cut it short
else continue
bt u write really well
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Part 1:
Oh my! Awesome start! Loved it! Taani ke kitne saare bhais hai... She is lucky i guess!!! Gonna read the next chaps now!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Chap 2:
Loved it! Loved how caring Taani's brotthers are! Waiting for the Taani-Mayank past to be revieled soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Amazing!! I love Swayam ka possessive bhai mode!! And this dialogue was just THE BEST!!!

F ANYONE THROWS ANYMORE FOOD AT MY SISTER, I WILL MURDER THEM, I WILL MAKE SURE THEIR BODY IS UNRECOGNIZABLE

Update soon n pm me.. Sent buddy req.!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 4

The gang clearly shocked by Swayams anger and the fact that he has a sister, were trying to do some damage control.

Rey-Dude chill, we are really sorry we honestly didn't know you had a sister and we really didn't know she was going to be attending this school
Sharon- Ya Swayam, we are really very sorry
Rey- Sorry, sorry, we honestly didn't mean it

Swayam, still angry about the incident, does not want to deal with his friends. He does not have any patience left and clearly does want to talk to his friends.

Swayam- Why are you apologizing to me, am I the one with food on my body. You should be saying sorry to her
The gang- We are so sorry Swayams sister
Swayam- You know she has a name

Taani standing right behind her bhai, feeling sorry for her bhais friends and wanting to help out, decides to appease the situation. She feels bad for his friends who are clearly shocked by her bhais anger, they obviously look like they have never seen him angry.

Taani- Bhai, leave it. It's ok, it's customary right. No harm done, I am clearly not hurt. And of course they don't know my name, we haven't met yet, Bhai please calm down, please

The gang is very surprised that Taani would stick up for them. They are also mesmerized by her sweet voice, they never heard a voice like that. She has a very melodic voice.

Swayam not impressed of his friends and does not want to hear Taani protecting the people who hurt her. He does not want to speak to his friends.

Swayam- Taani enough, I don't want to hear it. We are going home, come on, hurry up.

Swayam walks towards her and gently takes her hand and leads her out of the college.

At the canteen now clear of Swayam and Taani

Rey- We made a big mess guys
Sharon- Now what do we do
Rey- We have to get Swayam to forgive us
Bharat- His sister is so nice, trying to protect from Swayams anger
Vicky- Oi majnu, shut up
Amar- She is vely nice
Nil- What the hell, you guys are always saying stupid things
Rinni- She has a very nice voice
Aashi- Omg yes, very sweet types voice
Simmi- Hey crazys, we have to think about a way to get Swayam to forgive us
Rey- Ya, Simmi is right, no matter how sweet her voice, we are focused on Swayam
Boys- OOOUUU, Rey is interested in a girl, finally
Rey- Shut up, what nonsense, she is Swayams sister, use your brains once in a while
Sharon- STOP getting off topic
Rey- She is right, our mission is Swayam
Everyone to Rey- So what to we do

All of them looking at him with big expecting eyess.

Rey- um, um, hey let me think, why are you guys always putting me on the spot
Sharon- No pressure
Rey- Ya right no pressure, why don't you help Sharon
Sharon- Because obviously you are better at planning these kinds of things duh
Rey- Fine, fine

After a few minutes of thinking comes up with a plan.

Rey- Guys I got it

They all rush up to him.

Rey- Hey, hey give me some space

They loosen the circle.

Rey- Thank you. Now all we have to do is go to Swayams house and beg for forgiveness
Sharon- Rey that is a horrible plan
Rey- Well try to come up with something better, I mean we have never seen Swayam angry, so I don't know what the best course of action is. This is the best option
Sharon- Fine, we will all meet up at my house then go to Swayams house
Neha- Neha liking plan Sharon and Rey having
Vicky- My kagu is sho sweet
NIl- Now who is the majnu
Vicky- Shut up
Rey- Guys, guys, we will see each other in a couple of hours, ok bye

Meanwhile with Swayam and Taani. Swayam is driving them to the house.

In the car.

Taani- Bhai, you shouldn't have gotten angry at your friends, they were following tradition
Swayam- Taani, I don't care who is who, One thing for sure, no one messes with my sister ok
Taani- Bhai, please not you to, I have six extremely overprotective bhais in Jodhpur, I don't need one here. I don't care what anyone says, Vishal is just as bad as you guys, he just doesn't want to admit it
Swayam- Taani, that is not possible, I will always be your older brother
Taani- Uggh, why do all my bhais have to be typical indian bhais
Swayam- It's for your own good, don't complain

Taani pouting, because Swayam distracted her from the conversation at hand.

Taani- Bhai, stop trying to distract me, you are going to say sorry to your friends for yelling at them
Swayam- Taani, no I am not it is their fault, stop pushing this subject, it is over now
Taani- For you yes, but I feel bad for your friends who didn't know. And got the end of your anger. Poor
Swayam- Don't finish that sentence, they are not helpless. My anger was justified ok.
Taani- No it was
Swayam- Taani stop arguing, I will get you ice cream, so please stop bothering me about this
Taani- Fine whatever, but you have to get me whatever I want
Swayam- Always princess, do you even have to ask
Taani- Bhai, I am not a princess
Swayam- Yes you are and you are never allowed to with me on that, now stop talking. We are home, go get cleaned up and we will go ice cream
Taani- Yes bhai

They arrive and as Taani is stepping out of the car, Swayam starts saying something.

Swayam- Taani, you are forgetting something.
Taani- What bhai

Swayam is pointing at his cheek with a teasing impatient expression. Seeing this Taani smiles and gives her brother a big kiss on his cheek.

Swayam- There is that smile, I have been dying to see
Taani- BHai, you're crazy
Swayam- That I know, now go inside and clean up

Taani goes inside and Swayam goes to park the car.

Thank you for reading the fourth chapter. I hope you enjoyed this one. I'm kinda hoping for more Taayam scenes, because I find their bond so adorable. I was fangirling over todays Taarey scene, man I wish it was longer. Anyways, comments, suggestions, ideas and criticims welcome, but please be kind about it. I should have the next chapter up in a few hours and maybe I'll be able to put a third chapter up today.

For future reference, I will pm those on my buddy list, so if you want regular updates add me. And if you don't want updates you can tell me.
Edited by nene1709 - 12 years ago

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