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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really love it! Love the concept and everything
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Chapter 5

Taani is in the house, she goes to her room and starts cleaning herself up. When she is done cleaning up she changes her clothes.

This is what she wears.

http://www.cbazaar.com/salwar-kameez/anarkali/angrakha-style-purple-anarkali-suit-p-slsmv9114.html

As soon as she's ready she leaves her room and goes to find her bhai.

Taani- Bhai where are you

Swayam yells at her from his room.

Swayam- I am in my room, hold on, I'll be out in one second

Swayam gets out of his room and meets Taani in the living room.

Swayam- Ready to go
Taani- Yes, ICE CREAM

Hearing Taanis outburst Swayam starts laughing at his sisters cuteness.

Swayam- You think I'm crazy, have you looked in a mirror lately
Taani- Not funny bhai, now no more wasting time lets go for some ice cream
Swayam- Alright, alright, let's go

They both leave for ice cream.

A few hours later at Sharons house.

In the living room.

Rey- Ok guys we all know what the plan is
Sharon- Our plan is to get on our hands and knees and beg for forgiveness
Simmi- Ya, it's not a difficult plan
Rey- I know one of you guys is going to mess up
Vicky- Oi have some faith in us
All of them- Ya, have some faith
Rey- Whatever, Sharon try calling Swayam
Sharon- Ya ok

Sharon dials Swayams number and waits for him to answer, but no answer.

Sharon- He didn't pick up, Rey you try
Rey- Ya hold on

Rey also tries calling Swayam, but he also does not get an answer.

Rey- No answer
Sharon- He is still angry, it looks like
Rey- No worries our plan will work
Aashi- Ya, perfect types
Rey- Ok let's go to Swayams house

The whole gang leaves for Swayams house.
They arrive at Swayams house and they ring the doorbell.
Taani answers the door.

She is wearing this.

http://www.underarmour.com/shop/ca/en/womens-rib-tank/pid1210874-001

Taani- Oh hi

Before anyone can say anything, they hear Swayams voice

Swayam- Taani who is it
Taani- Your friends

Swayam comes to the door and sees what Taanis wearing.

Swayam- Taani go to your room
Taani- Bhai
Swayam- Taani go

Taani goes to her room.

The gang and Swayam are left at the door.

Swayam- What are you guys doing here
Rey- Dude don't be like that, we came to see you. Come on let us in
Swayam- Ya, ya come in

They all go to the living room and sit down.

Swayam- What are all of you really doing here

Suddenly they all get on their knees and start begging for Swayams forgiveness.

Swayam- Guys, Guys, GUYS STOP

They all stop upon hearing Swayam yell, they don't want his anger to get worse.

Taani runs out of the room hearing her brother yell.

Taani- Bhai what happened, why is everyone on the floor

They all stare at Taani, the boys except Rey can't help staring at her. Even though she is wearing pants and a modest tank top.

Swayam- Nothing happenned, go in your room or put a shirt on
Taani- Bhai, there is nothing wrong with my shirt
Swayam- Taani please
Taani- Fine

Taani leaves the room.

Rinni- Swayam there's was nothing wrong with her shirt

All of them look at her, giving her a shut your mouth look.

Swayam- Anyways, guys stop. I cooled down, I am not angry anymore
Sharon- Good now your back to normal
Swayam- Ya I am

Swayam and Sharon share a moment, but Rey accidentally ruins it.

Rey- I don't know about you, but I'm hungry. All this worrying made me hungry
Simmi- Do you always have to ruin the moment
Rey- What, never mind let's go out for some food
All the gang (except Swayam)- ya, lets go
Swayam- Let me invite my sister, that way I can introduce everyone

Swayam calls Taani. She comes out the room with a button up over her tank top.

Taani- Yes, Bhai
Swayam- We are all hungry, so we decided to go out for food
Taani- No you cannot
Swayam- Why Taani
Taani- If Bua heard you she would hit you, because it's unhealthy and I am well and able to cook. And as long as I am living here, I will cook
Swayam- Ok, I can't disagree, guys what about you
Sharon- I have no problem, let's see how well your sister can cook
Rey- Sounds like a good idea
Swayam- Anyways guys, this is my sister Taani
Taani- hi, everyone
Swayam- This is Rey, Sharon, Simmi, Aashi, Neha, Rinni, Amar, Nil, Bharat and Vicky
The gang- Hi Taani
Taani- I'll get food started
All the girls- We'll come help

All the girls go in the kitchen.

In the living room with the boys.

All the boys are sitting on the couches.

Rey- Swayam you have been hiding a lot from us
Bharat- You never told us you had such a stunning sister
Swayam- Oi, shut up, that's my sister
Nil- Swayam don't mind him, he's always saying stupid things
Rey- Anyways what else have you been hiding
Swayam- Dude nothing, I just never thought it was important to say
Rey- After todays reaction, she looks pretty damn important to me
Swayam- Oi, Stay away from my little sister, look for someone else
Rey- No problem, I told you time and time again, I don't want another relationship, please at least you understand
Swayam- Ok, ok

In the kitchen.

The girls are helping Taani do various things.

Sharon- So Taani your brother never mentioned you
Taani- Ya bhai has been pretty busy following his dreams and his life here
Sharon- So why are you here
Taani- My family decided to send me here and I wanted to come
Sharon- Thats cool
Rinni- Welcome, we are sorry about today
Taani- It's ok, it's tradition

Sharon looks away feeling guilty, because she misunderstood her relationship with Swayam and did something mean out of jealousy. She feels like it's her fault.

Sharon- YA sorry
Taani- No sorrys taken, it's no ones fault, anyways my future babhi shouldn't say sorry.
Sharon- WHAT
All the other girls- WHAT

Precap
What did Taani mean?

Thanks for reading the 5th chapter. I will have the sixth one up later. So until then be patient.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Honestly I really love all Bro-sis bonds. they are too special, & especially when you have sooo many OVER PROTECTIVE TYPICAL INDIAN BHAI's, TRUST me I just love that.
& Your story has that. Loved your story. Keep it up. & plz PM me as well.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Hey sorry I don't know your name, but chapter 4 was fantastic omg Swayam is so protective of Taani and love how all the boys can't help but stare at her. Aww Taani trying to calm her bhai down and feeling sorry for the gang is so like her always the sweetest and the most kind hearted person. Bhai taking her for ice cream and Taani has to give Swayam a kiss that was simply adorable. U write very well, I love this chapter.
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Chapter 5 got me 🤣 it waz so hilarious omg Swayam is overly protective, poor Taani has to cover up lol he is too much, but he love Taani sooo much so I forgive him for that part lol. Possessive bhai side came out so fast when the boys make their little comments on Taani and it was awesome when he tell Rey to stay away from his little sister. Lol I already feel sorry for Rey when he fall for Taani which he will soon cause who can resist that innocent flower lol. Another fabulous update love this part as well. Now u got me hook to your story so plz update asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Omg dis was jst awesme! Thnxx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 6

Taani- You really thought I wouldn't notice
Sharon- Not notice what
Taani- Your feelings for my Bhai

Sharon is clearly worried, what if Taani told Swayam.

Taani- Don't worry, I won't tell Swayam, but I'm glad someone like you likes him

Sharon is blushing at Taanis comment.

Rinni- Finally someone else knows, maybe this story will now progress
Simmi- You are always saying weird things
Neha- Neha thinking Taani will doing big help
Sharon- Girls let's stop please
Aashi- Ok we're done
Taani- You guys go in the living room, i'll just set the things up, No I don't need help so don't ask
Sharon- OK,ok ( she says laughing )

The girls leave Taani, Taani starts setting the table.

In the living Room.

The girls arrive and sit down.

Swayam- Where is Taani
Sharon- She told us to come here so she could set up the table
Rey- Sharon, I hope you didn't ruin the food
Sharon- Shut up Rey
Swayam- Rey don't be mean
Vicky- I know my Kagu made great food
Neha- Neha Thanking Babu
The rest- OMG
Rey- ok guys whatever, we'll start rehearsals tomorrow
Swayam- Sounds good
Sharon- Tomorrow morning at 6
All- Yes

They are just relaxing, when the hear Taani singing Jee le Zaraa.

Sharon- Wow that girl can sing
Rey- But why is she singing that song
Sharon- What do you mean
Rey- It's not a very happy song
Swayam- She usually sings songs she likes, she doesn't care about the message
Simmi- Anyways, she has a very pretty voice
Amar, Bharat, Nil- Angel
Swayam- My sister is off limits
Simmi- Swayam calm down, you'll scare off any suitors
Swayam- That is the point she is too young
Rinni- She is our age though

Before anyone could say anything else, Taani called them for diner.

At the diner table.

Vicky- Omg, Taani, I am coming to your house everyday for food
Swayam- No way am I letting you come to my house
Rey- um Taani thanks for the food
Taani- No problem
Bharat- No thank you very much, but it's getting late and we should get home, we have college tomorrow

They all finish and leave the house.

Swayam- I am so tired
Taani- I know, thank goodness you and your friends are back to normal

Swayam laughs at Taani for being so worried about his friendship.

Swayam- Don't worry, now go to bed, we have college tomorrow

Precap
Her first real day

Thank you for reading. Comments, suggestions, ideas and criticisms welcome, but please be kind about it.

This chapter is just a filler.

In the next chapter the real stuff start.
Edited by nene1709 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Omg Swayam is too funny lol him protecting Taani like she is a baby lol. Aww Taani approve of her future babhi nice. Fab update plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
chap -4,5,6
loved it.
loved taayam bond over possessive and overprotective bhai.
bichare boys ka sach me band bajne wala hai...
pls. do pm me and cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
i loved it seriously amazing
u r an awesome writer yr
do continue soon n pm me if possible...😊

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