This is real. Taarey ff - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Welcome to the forum.
nice start and bit different.
loved taani's possessive brother's they loved & care for her so much.
pls, do cont. soon. and if possible do pm me.
Edited by dh19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved da concept plz update n pm me soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, feel sorry for taani.. But looking forward to her coming to Mumbai, can't wait to read the next par, pls don't soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

Next morning, Taani wakes up in a good mood

Taani- Good morning mama, papa. Can you believe it, I am going to mumbai

She starts singing lazy lamhe to bring some fun to her morning.

Her singing envelopes the house in a happy and fun atmosphere. The members of the house feel elated hearing her singing so early in the morning.

Gaurav- Taani BREAKFAST, NO TIME FOR LAZY LAMHE, YOU HAVE SCHOOL

Taani - (pouting) YES BHAI

Taani finishes getting dressed and joins her family for breakfast.

Taani notices that Swayam is not at the table.

Taani- Where is Swayam
Raj- He left for Mumbai last night
Taani- (pouting) I thought we were going to go together
Arjun- Taani we have to get your paperwork in order first and Swayam has college, you can't make him miss that right
Taani- Yes bhai
Vishal- Taani hurry and finish your food I will drop you to school
Taani- Give me 5minutes
Vishale- Make that three

Taani and Vishal leave the house.

While she is gone Raj, Arjun and Gaurav finish all the arrangements.

Taani comes back from school.

She freshens up then spends time with her family.

In the living room.

Jay- Taani, you will leave for Mumbai on Saturday night and you will arrive Sunday morning
Karan- Your train ticket is booked and confirmed
Taani- Four days till I leave, I should finish packing soon
Bua- Yes, you don't want to do it last minute

The family has diner then Taani goes to her room to pack, after some packing she falls asleep.

Saturday Morning

Raj- TAAANI

Taani comes running down the stairs.

Taani- Yes bhai
Raj- Did you finish packing
Taani- Yes
Raj- Your train is tonight, when you arrive take the rickshaw and go straight to your Swayam bhais house. You don't have to worry about the transfer, Swayam took care of everything
Taani- ok, I am going to go rest
Raj- Wait
Taani- Yes
Raj- Swayam does not know you are coming on sunday, he is out of Mumbai and he'll be back on Monday. Don't worry everything is arranged. Swayam and Kaka prepared the room for you and kaka will open the door for you, he will also give you a key.
Taani- ok, I am going to go rest
Raj- Taani, I am not done
Taani-(at this point she is very bored with her bhais constant reminders) Sorry bhai
Raj- All of your brothers and I have a gift for you
Taani- GIFT
Raj- Close your eyes

Taani closes her eyes and Raj places a small box in her hands. Taani opens her eyes and excitedly opens the box.

Taani- (she squeals) Bhai a CELLPHONE
Raj- Haan, all of our numbers are saved in there and we all have your number including Swayam
Taani- ( slightly teary) thank you bhai
Raj- ( smiles at his sisters cuteness) now you can go rest, I'll call you when it's time to go
Taani- thank you bhai

Taani leaves to go rest.

It's finally time for Taani to leave.

Raj- TAANI HURRY UP
Taani- JI BHAI

In her room

Taani- Mama, Papa, I am starting a new chapter in my life please give me your blessings, thank you

Taani says her goodbyes at the house and she leaves for the station with her brothers.

At the station.

Raj- Take care of yourself
Karan- If anything call, we will always answer
Gaurav- Make sure to contact us often
Arjun- Don't neglect your studies
Jay- Our baby is leaving, you have to promise to talk to us often, Swayam will take good care of you
Vishal- Enjoy Mumbai, love, laugn, sing and dance. Enjoy yourself and take care
All of her brothers glare at Vishal

Taani laughs

Taani- I promise, its time to go, bye
All of them- Take care

On the train. Taani sits in her compartment and thinks about her new life.

Sunday

She arrives in The morning. After talking her luggage and hailing a rickshaw she finally arrives at her Swayam bhais house.

She rings the bell and Kaka opens the door.

Kaka- Taani, its been a while since you were last here. Welcome
Taani- Its nice to see you kaka
Kaka- I will show you your room
Taani-Thank you

Taani settles in her room and relaxes.
She starts to prepare herself for the next.
She finally goes to sleep.

Precap: Her first day

Thank you for reading the second chapter. Suggestions, comments, Ideas and criticisms welcome, but please be kind about it.

Sorry this chapter is a bit short, but by the end of the day I hope to have ch 3 up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
wwaaoo its something different..!
taani is soo sweeettt n her brotherss love her soo much..!
plzz continue n update sooon...!
n do pm me plzz
Edited by arina23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
wow! i really like it...thanks for the PM =) and do continue soon =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it.
loved taani and her brothers convo.
they loved her sooo much.
pata nahi rey 7 possessive bhi ko kaise handle kar payega.. ek swayam ko to vo muskil se handle kar pata hai.
thanks for the pm and do update soon.
Edited by dh19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
are u seerious i mean u write well and im sure no one CRITICISE you cmon...it was actually superbbb speecially d ovrr possessive bros of taani..:-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
hey nice update dear.. :-) update soon n thanx for the pm.. n pm me when u'll update.. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yar your story is superb . taani is too much pampered. But i think there is one jenuine problem. How will poor rey handle 7 overprotective and overpossesive brothers? bechara show mai ankela swyam ko handle karne me problem face karta hai , here not one too but total seven... really give me the updates and pls pm me.

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