Arhi SS: Finding Love #1 - COMPLETED

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

It was a really interesting update...what's a fairytale without a good ol' witch...?! 😊

Your Khushi is adorable...and you penned down really well the mental conflict between her mature and childish sides...

Looking forward to see what tricks La has up her sleeves...and how Arnav and Khushi deal with her...

Awesome part...already looking forward to the next...

BTW...nice to know you have a 6 month old too...besides our 007, we have something else in common too...!..😊

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basanti108

@basanti108

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Awww such an amazing update...I feel sorry for khushi and as much as arnav will be there for khushi I dont think he will realise khushi pain and think about how she would feel in the situation between him and la...I think la should be shown into her place...update soon I really want to know what will happen next...the story very addictive...can't wait to read more😃

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Oh the date has come to an end. Lavanya is such a b*tch! I hope Arnav puts her in her place.

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fhussain237

@fhussain237

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

Great update
Its such a shame lavanya came n ruined the perfect date
Khushi is so cute trying to be mature n going back to delhi
Im looking forward to read the next update
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

The first time I read your story, I had 8 parts to read at once, and I was still left wanting more. What do you expect this time, with just one little part to read! I read it 3 times already. I WANT MORE! 😭

And this part was a sad one, too. Of course I know every story needs some drama, but the dream date was going so good...it's a pity it had to end like this.

Anyway, knowing that this is a flashback does help. Once again, you wrote beautifully. I loved the emotions you portrayed and of course Khushi's struggle to be more grown-up than she really feels.

And you are such a sweetheart, not only do you respond to all comments and then PM the responses, you actually sent a PM that you would be updating soon. You really are a sweetheart!

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Lavanya is such a b*t*h

But Arnav wants Khushi and not La so she
can take a flying leap of a cliff

cant wait for your update

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nikhila

@sanjanasree

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

hey very nice story
i have just read it
it was very nice
please pm me

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barauni

@barauni

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#718

i can see that u r online now so r u going to update it now soon?????????????

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

Aww poor khushi, that was actually a bitter ending to a super romantic date but I know, our Arnie will make it upto Khushi. We really needed a vamp to make the love story spicy so it was an interesting twist. Loved the update, well done. 😊

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#720

Ugh! I hate the fact that Lavanya came back, and now he wants Arnav back! Like hell! who does she think Arnav is? A piece of toy that she could throw away when she didn't want, and play with it again when she wants?!

Awe... Khushi is being the supportive girlfriend! But this is not the time honey! She needs to bring out her wild side and put her foot down with Arnav. Why is Lavanya working with AR anyways?