Arhi SS: Finding Love #1 - COMPLETED

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#701

OMG this the worse end of a beautiful date

la was really a witch

im feeling bad for khushi

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

how dare lavanya makes khushi feel like she was a third wheel, when she herself she was the one unwanted around them

fabulous update, loved arnav's concern for khushi but he is right its the worst way to end a date and that too their first date!

just imagining state of mind, leaving her arnav with one of his ex-girlfriend! so many insecurities swimming in her mind right now!

looking forward to the next update:)

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45678

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

awesome update. oh khushi is insecre.

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Deepusingh08

@Deepusingh08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Sorry for late reply dear!!

Thats a fab update...Sheetal, La both are present to test Arnav 😉

Felt bad for Khushi...but bravo she acted like a mature woman. Yayy im excited for upcoming update...

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Your best chapter till date :)

The interplay of emotions between Khushi, Lavanya and Arnav was brilliant. Khushi's insecurity, Lavanya's expectations and Arnav's uneasiness at Khushi shelling herself up was so nicely written.

"Khushi I need you to tell me you're ok with this. I will not let you leave otherwise. I'll call uncle and ask him to allow you to stay here. I cannot let you leave if you're upset. I told you earlier that work is important to me, but so are you!"

Khushi didn't know what to do. A part of her just wanted to cry like a 5 year old and beg him to come home with her, the other part wanted to be a mature adult that could handle anything and everything that was thrown her way. Unfortunately she chose to go with the latter.

These lines brought about my verdict that this is the best chapter. Such flow of thoughts and such practical/normal emotions and proper turn of events you have penned here!

I really like your writing. Please update soon!!!

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Ahh Khushi is so understanding!

The emotions and feelings that you portrayed in this chapter thru Khushi and a little with Lavanya were depicted very nicely. The details were amazing and you did a great job getting the right emotions across!

Beautifully done! Continue soon :)