Arhi SS: Finding Love #1 - COMPLETED

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Read chapter 1-2, it is superb!

Loved the start... Khushi in par with Arnav and his family...wanting to do MBA in harward just like Arnav...awesome!

Your descriptions are beautiful. I can picturise the scenes in my head as I read👏

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

Read chapter 3-4, I seriously can't believe I missed such a beautiful story.

Love how Khushi is smitten by Arnav's looks and charm just as we all are😳

Hmmm, sheetal?😲

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

Read chapter 5-6

Nidhi, as I was reading I realised story telling was an art. It doesn't have to be complicated. And you dear,have done such a good job.

The way Arnav and Khushi communicate is just perfect... her little insecurities, not knowing what he is up to, him teasing her ...😳

And finally he asks her out on a date😳

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

Read chapter 7-8

Omg, I love their conversations...how Khushi blurts out what she feels without intending to.

Her feelings of anger at the thought that he had not given their date much thought...how so real!

And the date itself was superb...couldn't have been better. 😳

Very much Arnav Singh raizada style.

Loved how she could not hold herself back and kissed him on his lips😳

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

And Chapter 8(B to D) continues:

And I thought their dinner under the stars on valentine's night couldn't be more perfect. But there was more!

Loved his gift and most of all his confession...asking her to be with him...Loved how honest he was.

And then he takes her to the charity event where she meets her favourite Salman Khan in private. Shows how much he loves her.

Hate Lavanya and her kind. Loved how you have portrayed Khushi's insecurities around Lavanya. Absolutely loved how she braves herself and tells Arnav to continue with his impending work as she did not want anyone including her family to think any less of him.

Nidhi, You are such a brilliant writer👏

Hats off to you!

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

Read Chapter 9:

Love how restless and impatient Arnav is to get back to delhi to meet his dearest Khushi.

Love Khushi is all insecure...but the moment she hears him, the faith in him returns full on. I am so happy she doesn't fall for Lavanya's trap...Jealousy.

And now the letter from Harvard? 😕

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

Read Chapter 10:

Love how he wants to set things right...clear the air...and love the setting he chooses...the privacy it brings.

Khushi is unable to contain herself as she sees him...Oh the passion they share...so romantic and hot😳

Love how Khushi tells him how she feels...what she feels without any inhibitions...and asks him frankly how he intends to deal with Lavanya wanting him.

Arnav is clueless about Lavanya's intentions...And so gets annoyed...The whole conversation was so real, Nidhi. Superb👏 . It was like a scene from some one's life.

And he is stumped when he gets to know he has been the only one in her life...Says it all.