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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

beautiful update loved the update loved how he reassured her that by no means he thought that i so hope for him to find out what roy mother said about her loved the understanding that has grown between them and the kisses loved it beautiful update love how asr realized it was him and roy was only her friend thanks for the pm loved the update

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Beautiful update...
love how they are taking their relationship slow, steady and strong..

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

super duper update i like how you give their minds inner workings on the progress they made in their relationship...

will they ever talk without hesitations😉that day they will be complete and i agree that cant happen in a day that is the pace of the story you have set...that makes this story stand out too!

i loved this whole update not melodramatic or over the top declarations of love and companionship...it was sweet smooth and very what do they say natural progression of things..keep that coming!

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Thank God she didn't regret the kiss in a true sense you know that would have made arnav angry and hurt. I love that he is so protective and perceptive of her. and I love that how she implicitly trust him, and aww our khushiji is so beaten by the love bug. ha this going to be fun. can't wait to read the rest

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foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

The most anticipated update!! Khushi is a sweet heart feeling all embarrassed and apologizing for kissing, and to top it all she is trying to clarify any doubts about her morals and upbringing as well, that actually shows the impact of the insults she received at Akash's house! I so wanted to see Khushi sharing what happened with Arnav and I thought he also wouldn't give up until he gets hold of the root cause for her to talk abou her morals, but now we are seeing a completely different Arnav who is giving space to her rather than forcing to give answers, good change in him and a rapid change in their relationship as well cauz of the kiss they shared.

When Khushi was asking whether its ok to kiss before the marriage, shows how innocent she is and no wonder arnav fell more in love with her!!! Khushi's is uneasiness in the morning was portrayed nicely, she been clumsy and Arnav acknowledging everything with a sinful smirk😊 the room scene gave lot of stability to Khushi's doubtful mind I think she feels belonged and protected with Arnav, good that she realized that so she will be more open about what she feels for him. Want to see more scenes of Arnav teasing Khushi and of course the big pending conversation taking place really eager to find out Arnav's reaction towards the whole thing and how Khushi will handle the situation! Fantastic update as always and update sooon😃

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Fantastic followup to the passionate encounter. Very natural and realistic. Well written as ever. Well done.

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: foesb
The most anticipated update!! Khushi is a sweet heart feeling all embarrassed and apologizing for kissing, and to top it all she is trying to clarify any doubts about her morals and upbringing as well, that actually shows the impact of the insults she received at Akash's house! I so wanted to see Khushi sharing what happened with Arnav and I thought he also wouldn't give up until he gets hold of the root cause for her to talk abou her morals, but now we are seeing a completely different Arnav who is giving space to her rather than forcing to give answers, good change in him and a rapid change in their relationship as well cauz of the kiss they shared.

When Khushi was asking whether its ok to kiss before the marriage, shows how innocent she is and no wonder arnav fell more in love with her!!! Khushi's is uneasiness in the morning was portrayed nicely, she been clumsy and Arnav acknowledging everything with a sinful smirk😊 the room scene gave lot of stability to Khushi's doubtful mind I think she feels belonged and protected with Arnav, good that she realized that so she will be more open about what she feels for him. Want to see more scenes of Arnav teasing Khushi and of course the big pending conversation taking place really eager to find out Arnav's reaction towards the whole thing and how Khushi will handle the situation! Fantastic update as always and update sooon😃

Well said!

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

res!!

Edited..

'I just did not realize. It was .. I don't know. My upbringing was not ... but ... I do have values in me. I'll not cross my limits. Trust me, it'll not happen again. Sorry' she rapidly said in a single breath and urged her legs to take her away before the tears start spilling out.

Poor Khushi..

That scar went deep..

Really? Is it okay to ... I mean before marriage?' she could not bring herself to say the word, dying of shyness in the embrace of Arnavji who she had wildly kissed just moments before.

'Yes, I am your fiance. In fact it would have been weird if you would have NOT kissed me back. That would have been bad, like really bad' he smirked, reveling in the blush on her face and innocence in her questions.

Awww-est this was.

She was so adorably innocent.. And Arnav was well, Arnav..

'I can guess that this is your first kiss. And even if it was not your first time, it wouldn't have mattered to me' he assured her. 'And why would I want to share custody of the kids with you if I doubt your value system' he stated.

She just smiled in response to his declaration , his trust on her, a smile reaching her heart and reflecting in her eyes.

'Khushi, about earlier. I am sorry. Not the kiss, before that. I should have informed you' he hesitantly added after a few seconds.

'Arnavji, can we talk about all this in morning? You should sleep now and a sorry is not going to suffice for your behavior. We need to talk at length' she said with a new found authority, separating herself from his hold.

I like how he reassured her that he does trust her completely.

And the apology and then for the first time in your story Khushi realizes the right she has over Arnav.It was simple and honest. Beautiful😃

This discussion is not over Khushi. Good Night' he pecked her forehead as if it was a regular occurrence, and left for his room.

She has got to learn self preservation soon. It's Arnav we are talking about here.. He just isn't gonna let it go.

Their individual feelings on the kiss was awesome.

The morning after their first kiss was so adorable.

Loved it.

If Khushi was by any chance counting on returning to normal after Arnavji left for office, it did not work out that way as he decided to work from home that day. And to add to her woes, she was asked to come to his room whenever she was free.

'Come in Khushi. You don't have to knock every time, this is your room too' he said in response to her knock, flustering her some more.

'Ji you wanted to talk' she replied while twisting the end of her duppatta mercilessly.

'Are you planning to stand there all the while we talk?' he asked reclining back on the recliner, his eyes amused at her nervousness.

The walk from the door to the edge of the bed, under Arnavji's scrutiny, felt as unnerving as modelling on a ramp with a thousand spectators.

'Are you okay Khushi?' he could not help but poke, looking at all-in-control Khushi so haphazard today. Actually, he was secretly liking that the kiss had still not worn out of her system.

'Of course' she replied still butchering her duppatta.

'So where were we last night' he ambiguously started.

Her eyes shot up and were ready to burst out of their sockets. She could not believe his audacity to bring 'all that' up, and that too so casually.

'What? You said we will talk in morning. About ... my drive and you telling me about other people' he finished innocently, suppressing a laugh that was bubbling in his throat at her reaction.

'Oh ... Okay' she closed her eyes, today was definitely not her day, she sighed.

Yup. Definitely not her day!!😆

'I told you nobody. That's how orphans are perceived' she was not going to tell on pathetic Roy family. They are not even worth that.

Yes.They are not worth anything. Not her emotions, feelings or anything. All they deserve is a dull apathy.

How they promised each other stuff. What they don't realize is that they are promising so much more..

She knew he will always be the temperamental Arnav Singh Raizada, but he was also comforting, flirty and protective with her, and she was so looking forward to a life time with him. Is this is the feeling that people call as Love? But then she love other people too, and it did not feel like THIS. This time, there is a need for his approval of her feelings. Like if he does not approve of her feelings, her life will have no value, and the mere thought made her heart hurt. She knew it was long in the making, but her encounter with Roy family and his sudden disappearance, have made her clearly see him for what he has become to her now, an anchor of her sanity, the center of her universe.

If this is how love feels like, then she sure is falling hard and fast in love with her fiance, she realized making her heart skip a beat.

That was beautifully done.That complete acceptance..

Breaking physical boundaries last night, had helped them cross a few emotional ones too.

👏 Awesome line.

I like how you have channeled this update exclusively for that necessary jump in their relationship to the next level. With all the emotions, feelings it encompasses.

Awesome update.

Loved it..

Thanks for the PM..

Also, I have a feeling that Arnav is gonna find out about the dinner fiasco from Akash himself??

Please update soon..

P.S. I would love to read anything you write😃

Edited by --BumbleBee-- - 12 years ago

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Awwhh what an adorable update!!!

Things between them have change so much in night that they strtd feeling their right on each other...much.like a married couple!!

This update was definitely worth waiting for!!

Finally she falls in love!!!

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Wonderful update.. Khushi's reaction after kiss was awesome and love the way she listened to Arnav and calm down from her kissing panic attack 😊 I hope once Arnav got to know Akash family's deeds, akash's job n body remains at place 😉 Eagerly waiting for next steps in their relationships... If you can, please add kids in their story, may be something like they help them taking the next step. Its just a suggestion, its your story and I absolutely love the way you are carrying it forward. 😊

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