Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 5)

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

I got my first place as usual ! 😆 I woke 1/2 an hour early just for this I am off to sleep now for a while.

Ahem quite a long chapter & I loved it ! keep the length going 😃

ArHi relationship has really gone forward in leaps & bounds 😛

awaiting the next chapter Anonymous ji

Edited by Arhi-Did-IT - 12 years ago

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

res...

another fantastic update...

ohh...Arhi kissed...😳...rather khushi kissed arnav...

Loved Arhi convo after the kiss with Khushi apologising and Arnav explaining...Khushi is so innocent...arnav being naughty the next morning asking her where were we last night...

Khushi being khushi still the selfless soul does not disclose to arnav abt the roy family...

Glad that arnav's insecurities are laid to rest a bit...at least till next time...😉

Finally khushi realising her feelings for Arnav...so happy...

its been a big leap in Arhi relationship...looking forward to reading abt how their relationship blooms...

Waiting for next update...pzl update soon...😊

Edited by musicfan5 - 12 years ago

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

res😎

Edit:

This part was so BRILLIANT!!!

Everything from the beginning, to their conversation at night, to both of their internal thoughts in the bedroom, to the morning, to the last conversation...Everything was so awesome!

When I saw that you had updated, I had the biggest smile on my face and it got bigger (if possible) as I was reading:)

I wonder when Khushi will tell Arnav about Akash and what happened to Khushi. I am happy to read that Arnav said he is giving her time to let him know and I am curious to read about his reactions when Khushi decides to tell him.

Seriously, this update was so so good. I especially like part when Khushi is talking about Arnav and how she can trust him and understand him. The last line was so awesome. My heart started beating a little bit faster by my excitement and Khushi's realization!

Brilliant Job!!

Keep up the great work:)

Re-edit:

This was my 1300 post! Wow, I never knew I would ever get this many posts. It is a milestone😆

Edited by dmg123 - 12 years ago

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

wen i sed ill wake up early in d morning i did...my good morning to u is d witness..bt den u updated n i was dying to read dat i frgt to ress...
no problm though m first on d nxt page..lol...
dis update was fantastic fabulous...loved it a lot...

how do u write so well...
i hav olready read it thrice...
thankgod u clear d misunderstanding abt d kiss...fear was grippin me wen i thot things vl b awkard..gud arnav explained its normal...
yaay khushi is in love finally.
may b nxt chp abt khushi telling arnav abt aakash n arnav acting upon it...
n nxt to nxt vl b declaration of d most awaited undying love...
please make d declaration soon...i cant wait that to happen..

n yeah like sum ppl sed i want an honeymoon too in mkm itself...plsss

plss update d nxt chp soon...

Edited by massu91 - 12 years ago

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

wow

i was stalking ur ff in the afternoon to chek if u have updated lol so wanted to read it

thank u for updating it and loved it man

it was awosome arnav is a smart ass eh

pooor khushi lol this ff is turning the opposite of wht i had thought

Edited by jazmeen - 12 years ago

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

awesome update! I'm so glad Arnav and Khushi finally talked and Arnav cleared up all her doubts about the kiss. Yay she is falling in love with him. I hope they confess soon! I really want Khushi to tell Arnav about Akash. They are going to be married soon, so they shouldn't hide anything from each other. Can't wait to read the next part!

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

I just read all of your FF, great portrayal of characters, two people who are made to live together due to unforeseen circumstances in life with their loved ones,, and now they have fallen in love ..new discoveries a first kiss and the harsh realty of the real world, where people just love to hurt others with their mindless gossip...