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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

u call it rediculous...🤔

i dont think so... instead this ws one of d most beautiful write-ups i hv ever felt till now... d way u jotted down d emotions is jst awesome... really luved it.

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awsome os
it seems lyk extend part of anky's os
luvd it
thankx 4 d pm

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

This is a well written one shot with a depressive plot. Your plots are nearly always very simple and the flow of your prose is nearly always flawless. There are no seems, whatsoever in what you write. This however laden with angst, is a plain and crisp prose. That's your forte, and you do this well. (:

The title is aptly chosen and this is the first Reyansh fiction I have read and had exclusively him in my head. Since I dun like him much I would imagine someone else in my head, I thought. But your words made me do otherwise. I mean this as a compliment, by the way. 😆

Thanks for the PM.

Kanks