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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear🤗 Another FF from you….WOW m super excited to read this FF
The concept was super amazing,This FF seems really interesting
Coming to the first chappy it was Awesome, Love at first sight..wow diff is Sharon already accepted her feelings….and Swayam the angry young man who denied it…Goshh
Sharon is in so love that she is even ready to marry him after knowing everything, She didn't even think about the pain she have to go through after this marriage…..M loving Sharon's character in this FF….And Swayam's Parents are soo sweet dey didn't hide anything about Swayam's past to Sharon...Sharon is taking a big risk…but She the only one who can change Swayam…so hope she succeeds as m sure she will succeed 😊
Luv Simi ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome chappyyy... 😳
saru swayam and sweet sharon... <3 this...
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Sweety pie update jaldi jaldi jata tarpaw mat.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Next time itnaaa... bara update dana ki padta padta main thak jawn... 😃 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful update dear...👏

n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Liked what I read, as u said this is a serious ff and perhaps that is the fact thatz got me hooked to this one already...definitely looking forward to how ur gonna deal with this story...update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey My Cutie pie...🤗

Such a beautiful beginning...m loving the fact that u r writing another FF along with DHT ...awww...the concept is much more mature and I know u have full caliber to handle it..

Swayam being negative about marriage...due to his past relation...their parents are playing cupid between them..loved the way sharon is already in love with him... through childhood stories ...

Now that she has accpeted the challenge ..m sure this is gonna be a beautiful swaron ride...love u baby...lovely part...update soon..

Luv
Ur Di


Hi di 🤗thank you so much for ur lovely comment n having faith in me..i hope i could do justice to this FF 😳 thanks a ton di..love u loads ❤️


Originally posted by: arch2012

me second this time😆

beautiful update👏Anindita
love at first sight for both of them😉 but only difference is that sharon accepted her feelings whereas swayam angry baba denied it😆
you update fast,very fast😃i love you for that yaar🤗
kaash tumahare paas swaron(TanHa) ki suitable pics hoti to add here then
i'll be in the dreamland
boring yes i'll get bored if I've to wait for the updates😃 u see waiting is boring so update soon😉
take care

😆 swayam angry baba...what an innovative name..btw i will try to update ASAP..but when my exams will be round or project work will be round at that time the update will be a bit late.. 😳 thank you so ur comment 😃


Originally posted by: d3lover90

What a great start..
Your writing style is too good..
Lovd d sharon..
Nd story is going to b awsm nd it is provd by d first chap only.

Thank you so much saloni for ur lovely comment and ur kind words 😃


Neeraj for the first time u didn't unres ur res..have u forgotten about it 😛


Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

amazing start

just love it
i can see an optimistic sharon

Thank you so much aruba for ur sweet comment 😃


Originally posted by: sadafarsha

Very nice update and its not at all boring this ff is very attractive I want to read more plzzz do continue and do pm me when u update next part

Thank you so much for ur encouragement dear and for ur comment also 😃


Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

res:

Unres:
Loved Loved Loved the start 👍🏼 ... Swayam the Angry young man doesnt want marry anyone neither trust anyone🤔...But I am definately looking for his battle between brain and heart in this one , which I already saw the glimpse of 😆
I liked sharon in this..Sweet -cute girl who always like him from begining... Looking forward to see how she changes him , 😳
Wish we had Tanha pictures for this 😆 Neverthless its only TANHA i imagine when I read anything on swaron 😆 so no probs 😳

Hey dear thank you so much for ur kind words and lovely comment..n yes u will get to see battle between brain n heart of his in this chapter n may be many more 😛 i too wish we had TanHa scenes which would have been appropriate for this FF..but nevertheless. I too write imagining them in my mind so when u will read i hope u will be able to connect to TanHa 😳


Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome update di
I know this is different from DHT but still i start liking this ff
Looks like swayam too feel something when he saw sharon well not his fault any guy would fall after seeing her especially in saree.Sharon toh full on fida over him.Its good that swayam mom told everything to sharon n sharon finally agreed to marry him.
Waiting for next part.Update soon

Hey sadiya thank you so much for ur encouragement..i am glad u r liking this FF..thank you for ur lovely comment 😃


Thank you so much dear 😃


Originally posted by: sanstina

Awesome update 😊

Swayam's heart stopped while looking at Sharon n Sharon blushed feeling his gaze
Swayam's parents forcing him to marry Sharon
Sharon felt hurt to see Swayam changed so much but she agreed to marry him

Hey tina thank you so much for ur lovely comment 😃


Originally posted by: lassipriya

nice start ani..👍🏼
s its different from DHT but nt boring.. ur a beautiful writter readg ff makes feel like im readg a fairy tale with d pics in ur update.. n s i will miss d pics part in dis ff of urs..
now cumg to d update
liked sharon character..swayam's parents r so sweet n carg dey dont want to hide abt swayam past from sharon.. n sharon agrees for d marriage looks like she is already in deep love with him..
😊

Thank you so much for ur lovely comment di 😃 i will too miss adding pics in this FF 😔


Originally posted by: ABBY92

Already loving the start. Love the way you portrayed how Swayam's heart actually warmed up to Sharon on first sight but then his mind took over and he went back to his shell. Sharon is taking big risk but if anyone can change Swayam, it's Sharon and I know she will succeed in doing so !!

Hey abi 🤗 thank you so much for ur lovely comment 😃 did u listen to the music which i added in the post?? 😊


Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

Anni, this time a short comment but as soon you will give updates i will increase the length as it has just started and i can't comment something detailed about it!! 😳

love the update! of course Swayam must be looking angel in white net saari!! 😊

please haan koi runa dhuna mat daalna iss FF main!! 😆

OYEEE!!! How dare you to attach the SwaRon BG tune in prologue and 1st chap!! I got all eary remembering that beautiful and out of the world SwaRon!! Got missing TanHa like hell!! 😭

Hey Tanya 🤗 oye u made Sharon swayam how can swayam wear a white net sari but i am sure if he does wear it he will look amazing in it too..after all he is swayam.. don't worry rona dhona nahi hoda iss FF me..😊 n i miss them too like hell...thats why i watch TanHa wala SwaRon scenes over n over again ❤️


Originally posted by: sweet_sanju

Nice update
Suhana informed Sharon about swayam's past nd behaviour change
Sharon wants to marry swayam
Sharon already in love with swayam
continue soon
thax for d pm

Thank you so much dear for ur sweet comment 😃


Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

Amazing start Ani!
very well written .
I loved how u have scripted Sharon's character, I hope she will be able to break through the tough nut swayam .
will be waiting for the next part, update soon ...
thanks for the PM .

Hey tanuka 🤗 thank you so much for ur kind words..though we both shouldn't say thanks to each other..but we have done that..😛 so i will do it in ur way..TY so much for ur lovely comment 😳


Originally posted by: AninditaTanHa

Hey anu🥳 u updated

i hope this ff too will be a huge success like DHT gal😃

u are doing great in both of ur FFS!!! 👏
m loving it 😳


and awesome update by the way 😊

update soon dear

love,
anny



Thank you so much anindita for ur encouragement and kind words..thanks a ton 😃

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much dear 😃


Originally posted by: booksfreak07

I loved it!! Loved it means loved it!
It's been so long since I read something on swaron, I've stopped watching the show so rarely come on this forum. But I love the concept of your FF. it has inspired me I start writing again.
Awesome job, keep PMing me 😊

Hey dear thats a huge thing u said..i love ur writing n if u will start writing again then i will be more than happy..so plz do start writing again..thank you so much for ur kind words...thanks a ton..n surely i will pm u..😃


Originally posted by: marauder

Interesting update. Both of them are dramatically opposite but still have felt the same emotions. Thats the power of love. THe concept of Swayam being bound and affected by his past and afraid of any change is interesting. And meanwhile Sharon is already in love with him. This is going to be rocking. I liked how Swayam's past and present was revealed on a comparing note from Sharon's POV . It really helps to get an idea of Swayam better. Awesome start.

Thank you so much shishir for ur lovely comment..n yes the power of love is something above everything.. thanks a ton 😃


Originally posted by: tejukor

Hey andi...first give me a hug... 🤗 ...u know why i hugged u...bcoz of this awesome update n voh update itna bada likhne k liye...bcoz I was so engrossed in it k I don't even notice that my family members had their dinner...n that too without me..lovely re sachhi ...toh when will u update its next part
Plzzz update n pm me ha...plz n love u loads...

Hey dear here is ur hug 🤗 n thanks a ton for ur lovely comment 😃 thats really sad ur family had dinner without u 😳


Originally posted by: AmRiTa_S

Anindita glad you updated 😊 love the pehla nasha as it reminded me of TanHa wala SwaRon. Lovely update..Swayam was happy to see Sharon but his past and his experience is stopping him from trusting people again thats sad. On the other hand Sharon is already in love with him aww. Excited to know how everything will turn out. Very well written. Thnx for the PM..update soon. 😊 😊


P.S I will miss picz but i do understand why u can't use them 😊

Hey amrita thank you so much for ur lovely comment 😃 n thanks a ton for ur kind words..to be honest i will also miss adding pics of TanHa 😔 thanks for understanding 😳


Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Loving the start :-) eeks SwaRon getting married

Love you work whether its fun loving or serious

Nikki <3

Hey nikki thank you so much for ur kind words dear..i am glad u like reading my FF's 😳 thanks a ton dear 😃

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

Awesome start anny!

Loving the concept!
Swayam is really heartbroken.
Hope sharons love for him will make him Change his perception!
Nd Sharon is so much in love with him nd so blushy blushy!
Do update soon nd thanks for the PM.
About last times error its ok nd know that your super writing needs no images to enhance it.
Waiting to know gonna happen.
Keep it up!

Raj thank you so much for ur lovely comment and for ur kind words 😃 though i am not that good the way u r saying 😳 but thanks a ton..😊


Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

hey awesome update ani 🤗


wuld luv to see how sharon is gonna make swayam fall in love wid her...it was nice to see sharon sharmying n all ☺️

it such a nice thing to read abt marrried swaron n dat to a 🥺 swayam n a chulbuli sharon ❤️

continue soon 😊

Hey shrutika 🤗 thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear..nice way of saying 💔 swayam n chulbuli Sharon 😆



Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

Hey dear🤗 Another FF from you'.WOW m super excited to read this FF
The concept was super amazing,This FF seems really interesting
Coming to the first chappy it was Awesome, Love at first sight..wow diff is Sharon already accepted her feelings'.and Swayam the angry young man who denied it'Goshh
Sharon is in so love that she is even ready to marry him after knowing everything, She didn't even think about the pain she have to go through after this marriage'..M loving Sharon's character in this FF'.And Swayam's Parents are soo sweet dey didn't hide anything about Swayam's past to Sharon...Sharon is taking a big risk'but She the only one who can change Swayam'so hope she succeeds as m sure she will succeed 😊
Luv Simi ❤️

Hey simi 🤗 thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear..thanks a ton 😃

Originally posted by: Love_shantu

Awesome chappyyy... 😳
saru swayam and sweet sharon... <3 this...
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Sweety pie update jaldi jaldi jata tarpaw mat.. 😃

Next time itnaaa... bara update dana ki padta padta main thak jawn... 😃 😛

😆 tum kyun thakna chahti ho??? Btw i will try to write a big update the next time..n i think this one i mean the one which u will read is big enough 😳 thanks a ton for ur lovely comment dear 😃



Originally posted by: Neha_Sr

beautiful update dear...👏


n thanks for the pm

Thank you so much neha..i am glad u liked it 😃


Originally posted by: TANHA_H

beautiful update👏

Thank you so much dear..😃

Originally posted by: meevee

Liked what I read, as u said this is a serious ff and perhaps that is the fact thatz got me hooked to this one already...definitely looking forward to how ur gonna deal with this story...update soon😊

Hey meera di..thank you so much for ur lovely comment 😃 i am glad u liked it 😊




Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

It was around 9:30 in the morning. Swayam was walking by the passage of his office, that office which every people wanted to work in. Their company is one of the famous companies in the India and well known to the world.

He pressed the button of the lift and was waiting for it to come when the receptionist came and told him that a lady is waiting for him from the past half an hour outside his cabin. He asked her who she is and she said the lady has told him that she is family.

His heart started to pound on his chest. His heart was thinking "can Sharon come to meet him. But why she would?".

His mind replied "may be she wants to borrow money from him".

His heart replied "no mom said she is not that type of girl".

His mind snapped back "oh shut up, every girl and every people runs after money. Just like Priya".

The thought of Priya made his heart silent as it remembered about the immense pain it has to face because of her.

Swayam couldn't take this fight any more. He mentally shut both them up and started to tap on door of the lift lightly with his fingers.

"where the hell is the lift? Why its taking so much time."

The lift's door opened in few seconds and he went in and pressed the button for the 7th floor.

After few seconds the door of the lift opened and the sight made his heart happy.

His heart said "see she is here and look she is looking so beautiful". Sharon was wearing a baby pink salwar suit with embroidery design on it.

He saw her nervously moving from here and there. His heart said "why she is so tensed".

His mind replied "see I told you because she wants something from him and what else can it be other than money".

He again mentally slapped both of them to keep quite. He went out of the lift and was walking into his cabin when Sharon called him.

"Swayam.."

He didn't turn back or look at her. He sternly told her..

"Come in my cabin and take a seat."

She did as he said. He removed his coat and kept it on the head rest of his chair.

He asked her sternly "what do you want from me?"

Sharon knew she will have to keep lot of patience to handle him and his temper. She mentally prepared herself for this challenge, which she has done with his destiny. She challenged it that she will change Swayam and his thinking. Its his destiny who has hurt him beyond limit because of which he has changed so much. She challenges it that she will not let it hurt him anymore. She will bring happiness in his life and she will make him happy, bearing all the pain which he will give her. She will happily with open hands take all his pain but never will let him get hurt again.

Swayam saw that she was lost somewhere. So he moved his hand in front of her eyes.

"Are you in here with me or just your body is present here. I have nothing to do with it so speak up."

"Yeah I am here and I am sorry. By the way hi I am Sharon Raiprakash."

She forwards her right hand. He hold her right hand with his and at that moment he felt shiver run down his body. He quickly pulled his hand back.

"Listen cut all these and come straight to the point why you are here and please make it short. I don't have time to waste."

"Swayam do you think talking with family members are a waste of time?"

He was confused by her question. So he asked her confused "family member? Who family member?"

"Me. I am going to be your better half Swayam."

Swayams heart told him "wow I think she is really happy with this marriage"

His mind replied "she has to. After all Swayam is one of the eligible bachelors of India".

"SHUT UP."

She shivers out of fear, but she told herself to be strong. "Did I say something wrong?"

"No I wasn't talking to you. Forget it." He takes a deep breath "just forget all these things and tell me why you are here."

"I am here to ask you when you are free today?"

"Free for what?"

"So that we can go for shopping."

"Ok so you want money for the shopping?" He asked her angrily. "FINE HERE IS MY CREDIT CARD. TAKE IT."

He with a frustration on his face took out his wallet from his pocket and throws it on the table in front of her.

"TAKE ANY OF THE CREDIT CARDS OF WHICH EVER BANK YOU LIKE AND PLEASE LEAVE, I HAVE WORK TO DO." He snaps at her.

"I don't want your credit card Swayam, I want you for the shopping." She said quietly to him.

"WHAT WILL I DO THERE? OH YEAH RIGHT IF I WILL NOT GO THEN WHO WILL SIGN. YOU NEED MY SIGNATURE, RIGHT? FINE I AM GIVING YOU CASH. HOW MUCH MONEY DO YOU NEED? JUST TELL ME AND THEN LEAVE."

"Swayam I meant I don't need your cash or credit card. I have always wished when my lov..i mean my marriage will be fixed and I will come to know who my life partner is, I will buy him a gift of his own choice. I don't know your choice right now so for that reason I want you to accompany me to the mall."

He was shocked.

His heart said " wow she really is a wonderful girl. She wants to buy you a gift. In Priya's case she always wanted gifts from you. She used to always take, take and take. But she.."

His mind shouted "just stop flying and put your feet back on the ground. Today she is saying she wants to give something to Swayam and from tomorrow she will also take, take and take from him. This is just an act. Just like Priya used to act with him".

Again the pain given by Priya silent's his heart.

Swayam was now fed up with these fights between his heart and mind.

"Listen Miss Raiprakash can you please tell me what deal do you want?"

She was totally confused. "Deal?"

"Yes deal. You are giving me gift with your one hand so tell me what do you want to take from the other one?"

It was really becoming difficult for her to take this cold behavior from him. She was feeling like crying. But she again told her to be strong. This situation will change and so will he.

"ok the deal is I will give you a gift and in return you will make me your friend."

"Friend? And what will you do with my friendship?" He asked her confused. "What will it give to you?"

"What your parent's relationship with you gives you Swayam?"

"happiness."

"Your friendship will give me that, 'Happiness'."

He was stunned. His friendship, his presence can give her happiness. She only wants his friendship and not money? May be not. May be these are just dramas to reach to his bank account.

"Fine what else?"

"Nothing. I just want you to support me in every way like a true friend. So will you come for the shopping today?"

"Yeah I guess so."

"Still not sure?"

"Ok fine I will come. He said. "Which mall?"

"What is the only thing you want?"

"True love."

Saying this he bits his tongue and Sharon feels she has reached the second level of this challenge.

"Listen I will come with you but buy whatever you want for me. I don't want anything."

She grins mentally watching the way he is hiding his feelings. "fine with me. So tell me the time."

"6:30 sharp here in my office. I don't like people who are not punctual."

"Don't worry, I won't be late." She said with a smile. "So I guess I should go now."

"Yeah I guess too."

She stood up for leaving his cabin when he asked.

"You want any gift?"

"You gave me the best gift of this world."

He asked confused. "what did I give you?"

"Your friendship."

A small smile crept on his face. He didn't realize but his heart was feeling like dancing. His heart thought maybe the ointment which heals pain has come in his life, and his mind was too shocked to react. It didn't have any idea why she is been so sweet to him and not wanting any materialistic things from him. That small smile on his face washed away all those pain which she was feeling because of his cold behavior. She felt relaxed and happy at the same time. Relaxed because she was getting the confidence to make his destiny lose and make him happy and happy because she was happy to see him happy.

"So bye for now, have a wonderful day ahead."

"Yeah same to you."

"Start you official work having this."

She brought out a packet of five star from the back pocket of her purse and gave it to him. His face lits up seeing it.

He said excitedly. "hey I love five star."

It was a pleasurable sight for Sharon to see him like that. That smile and that excitement reflected on her face. But then again in a second he became serious.

He said sternly "thank you."

Her face fell. But she convinced herself to stay positive. She told her that there will be one day when he will not hide his feelings and will open up to her.

"Its ok. Bye. See you in the evening."

"Yeah bye."

Please forgive me for my mistakes. Do hit the like button and leave your precious comment. Thank you.

NEXT
Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Amazing chapter !
nicely written.
loved how sharon patiently took every tantrum of swayam and handles swayam calmly .
sharon ke dialogues were really nice . she wants friendship in return from swayam.😊
eager to read abt their shoping outing together .
will be waiting for the next part , update soon..
thanks for the PM.


Res for deepika di, tanuka and tania
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