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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

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I love the Swayam's battle between mind and heart 😆

Agree with sharon's thought about swayam, one thing right now she needs is patience patience and more patience 😊

Swayam and sharon convo was nice.. Him answering coldly towards her- and she , trying to be calm , strong to handle him...

If it had been me, I would have thrown his wallet at his face and turned back 🤣 Poor sharon has more patience than me to handle him , on the other hand his inner battle is too much for him to handle 😆

He didn't realize but his heart was feeling like dancing. His heart thought maybe the ointment which heals pain has come in his life, and his mind was too shocked to react. It didn't have any idea why she is been so sweet to him and not wanting any materialistic things from him.

Liked these line and loved when heart won over mind ..phewww😆

Sharon's effort finally paid off... Angry young man opened his heart for a nano second and had a smile in the end 😳

Looking forward for the shopping😳

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I M LOVING THIS FF
Coming to update
Swayam-Mr. workoholic but I liked the part where he instantly guessed that sharon come to meet him.Poor swayam after sharon's entry in his life he always struck between mind n heart 😆.I really liked swayam's heart reaction n povs about sharon hehe she is beautifull n she is soo excited to marry him..:p
Loved the way sharon handled swayam n his behaviour.Hope she succeed to convert this akadu swayam into joyful swayam
Waiting for next part

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Your updates make me want to read more nd more nd more ..
Are ye itni jaldi kyu khatam ho gaya :(
sharon is a sweetheart,
loved it..
Waiting for nxt update.. :p:D

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.....pujan.....

@.....pujan.....

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

sorry for late reply...

ur concept is really awesome...

ur both updates r mindblowing...

update soon...

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Lovely update..love how you have penned down the contrast between Swayam's mind and heart. Love how Sharon decided to stay positive and patient and wants to start with his trust and friendship. They are going shopping nice start. Looking forward to read the next update. Thnx for the PM, update soon. 😊

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

hey i read ur both d updates n thy r awesome yar

in first chappy
where swayam mesmerized by sharons beauty bt due to past memories his mind take over her heart he left from there

swayam parents ready to tie knot of marriage with swayam bt cold swayam told them she require only money
bt finally he agreed for marriage for sake of his parents

swayam kind hearted yar, swayam told everything to sharon about swayam nd she ready to take challenge

in 2nd chappy
i really didn't like cold swayam, where he only try show her his money by hiding his emotions for her

i like sharon d way she stated herself as she is his family
nd she just want make friendship with him with bearing all d pain given by him

she have control her emotions for his happiness nd her too
whn she told him she require only his happiness on which small smile crept on his face which made her day

fivestar trick of sharon was fab yar

i love d updates

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

hey Ani🤗

Fantastic chapter👏

swayam angry baba ko gussa kyun aata hai😆

but angry baba ka dil bhi bacha hai ji 🤣always support our sharon but baba ka dimag dabangg hai always remind him about the betrayal

who is this female beep😡 who betrayed our cute and loving swayam & changed him to an arrogant person but i'm sure sharon's love❤️ & care will bring back the old swayam the caring and loving swayam may be majnu 😉 .

swaron convo was very cute and beautifully penned down👏

sharon is really sweet caring loving and calm person i totally loved her character👍🏼

The five star scene remind me a very wonderful TanHa interview in which Sneha gave the five star to Shantanu & then his 1000 watt smile

update soon

Edited by arch2012 - 12 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Hei, I heard the song in the first post and am so glad that you managed to put it in !!

Coming to the update, loved how you wrote the constant fights that Swayam had with his mind and his heart as he tries to figure what Sharon wants from him !! Kudos to Sharon for having so much patience and somewhat succeeding in the first step of letting Swayam open up to her !!

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Hey anindita!

Another fabulous update!

Tumhara concept bahut alag aur refreshing v mature hai!

The constant battle between swayams heart nd mind was really well penned!!

Sharons answers were so prompt nd perfect!

She is already affecting him!

Both r fighting a mental battle!

Sharon wants to make him love her nd he is trying not to love her!

Gr8 job nd keep up this fantastic worl.

Do update soon nd thanks for the PM.

You r one of the sweetest writer on if who takes the pain of replying to everyone's comment.

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Ausum update.. loved it😊
i loved d way Sharon's character Sweet-cute girl.. d way she has choosed to change swayam n it started working positivly..😃
she has prepared herself mentally full of positivity.. calm sharon... she has handled him so well n Calmly.. (it made me rem of how swayam used handle his siren in d3)
sharon wants to present him a gift of his choice n in return wants him to be her true friend.. liked it wen she said she was his family.. she presented him a packet of five star dat was cute...😳
Swayam's battle b/w his mind n heart was nicely put up..👍🏼
will b waitg nxt update Swaron shoppg..