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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ii..Shilpa..ii

Wowww!!!!
Dil ko thandak pad gayi jii!!!!! 😃😃
Poor soul Khushi! 😭😭



thank you for sharing your view
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting...
continue soon..
thanx fr the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey i loved part 1!!!i always wanted to see n ff were kushi wudnt give in so very easily..also i cant wait to for her to become sucessful but also at the same time being her bubbly self but i think that wud be hard to do..lol...but i loved ur story so far!!waiting for part 2 eagerly!!!and o plz add me to ur buddy list!!preeety plz!and thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start...
Continue soon & plz pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshamaharaj

hey i loved part 1!!!i always wanted to see n ff were kushi wudnt give in so very easily..also i cant wait to for her to become sucessful but also at the same time being her bubbly self but i think that wud be hard to do..lol...but i loved ur story so far!!waiting for part 2 eagerly!!!and o plz add me to ur buddy list!!preeety plz!and thanks.



i will try to stick in "Realization of ASR" subject...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start, very interesting
do continue and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start..
Waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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An interesting beginning. I loved the title of your SS. What is this realization of ASR? We were cheated of it in the show, and almost everyone was disappointed in the 2 sec apology she received and her subsequent "forgiveness and forgetfulness" of his entire shabby treatment of her which should have made the difference in their relationship. She was made to accept all his abuse with a grin and bear it attitude which bordered in the shameful ignorance of treating women with disdain. I am so, so glad that you are going to give it a different outlook. I can't wait to find out how it is going to come about. I am so, so glad that you have tried to make Kushi into a woman who will take no more crap (again - a vast difference from the doormat she was made to be in the show! A servant, no less!)
I cannot wait to see how your SS unfolds. What is in the letter? And why would Aman receive it? And why is ASR behaving like a "Devdas?" He's one to cry over spilled milk, isn't he? I hope Kushi comes back with a bang! (Although, of course I want them to be together, but he should realize [aha!] what he did was unacceptable!)
Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PERFECT START😊PLS CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kbtr

An interesting beginning. I loved the title of your SS. What is this realization of ASR? We were cheated of it in the show, and almost everyone was disappointed in the 2 sec apology she received and her subsequent "forgiveness and forgetfulness" of his entire shabby treatment of her which should have made the difference in their relationship. She was made to accept all his abuse with a grin and bear it attitude which bordered in the shameful ignorance of treating women with disdain. I am so, so glad that you are going to give it a different outlook. I can't wait to find out how it is going to come about. I am so, so glad that you have tried to make Kushi into a woman who will take no more crap (again - a vast difference from the doormat she was made to be in the show! A servant, no less!)

I cannot wait to see how your SS unfolds. What is in the letter? And why would Aman receive it? And why is ASR behaving like a "Devdas?" He's one to cry over spilled milk, isn't he? I hope Kushi comes back with a bang! (Although, of course I want them to be together, but he should realize [aha!] what he did was unacceptable!)
Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next update.



just wait and watch...
i will sure write next part soon...

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