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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Hey!!!!!!!!!
this sounds like the feisty Khushi we missed in the serial...
One who'll prove herself...



Originally posted by: arpita20

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As many of you agreed with my wish..i am going to start my Dream SS
that is Realization of Arnav Singh Raijada

Please check this link
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3420479/is-it-only-my-wish-or-yours-too


Part 1


khushi was still waiting for Arnav...
Yes,he had promised her :"i will come khushi..."

All of RM members left...
No one was there to console her...
that her arnavji will not come...
Di,jiji-all tried to make her understand that All was finished...
It's almost dawn now...

Khushi's amma-bauji,buaji after trying a lot to take her from mandap,just closed their eyes to take some rest...

Khushi woke up..
Near fire-kundali,she waited for him from almost 12 hours...
but he ditched her...
yes...
everytime it's him who took all decision...

Deal
Marriage

Khushi visualized how he forcefully married her for the first time...

Khushi muttered
:"you destroy my every dream arnavji...kyun?"

She slowly stood up..seeing everybody were sleeping,she slowly left that mandap...


She went mandir...

and sat there
:"Devi Maiyaa...
i am alone here in this whole world...
are you listening?

You snatched everything from me...
my parents...
my family
my love...
"
she paused for a while...

What is love Devi Maiyaa...?
Is it love that happened between us?"

A ray of sun light hit her faces...
It's day's first light...
The light of energy,hope,survival of human in earth...
She looked at Sun...

and thought
:"it's source of our survival...
but it's only one...
no one is there to accompany it...
chanda mama to sham ko..."

She just screamed:"How can i live without you arnavji...?
you are my life...
but am i not your life?
"
she thought for a while..
:"if i am also your life..you can't keep yourself away from me..no no..
you don;t love me arnavji...
if it's your love,
you couldn't judge me without listening anything,
you married me for 6 months...
my status is really cheap
and seeing your di's suicide attempt,you could not say
"sab tumhari galti hai
tum meri jindagi mein ayi kyun?
mai tumse milha kyun?
all is your fault"

She shivered thinking how he threatened her for payel-akash marriage...

"No Mr.Raijada,you will not see my face any more..."

:"i will go far from you...my jiji,amma,bauji from everyone
i will prove that my status is far better than yours Mr.Raijada..."

Devi Maiyaa,please be with me forever..."

And she started her journey to prove herself best in everything than Arnav Singh Raijada...


On the other side,arnav was in his mother's garden whole night...

He thought every single moment that he spent with khushi...

After concluding that khushi is innocent,he went mandap on morning...

hearing about her missing...he madly searched every probable places...
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.
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.
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almost one week passed..
but there was no sign of her...
It's eleventh day of khushi's missing,aman called him on morning.
after her missing,arnav did not go even in office..
he cut aman's call,then
her got the message from aman that he received one letter..
and it's sent by khushi..


How's this?
Please share your opinions here soon..
Don't forget to hit 'like' button also😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: princessunara


nice start.. do continue it:-)



feeling glad that you read this SS..
i will surely continue😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: arpita20



yeah..i just wanted to write a SS where Khushi should realize her true potential...
and it will not be easy for Arnav to get back khushi..
thnx for sharing your view..and i will continue soon😳

I hope you will stick to ''it will not be easy for Arnav to get back Khushi'' as in your last ff you didnot inspite of Khushi was alone in her preganancy and for 7 years and gone through a lot. And moreover I hate it when the person who is actually responsible for everything will not suffer as much the person who is innocent yet paid the prize.

Looking forward to next part...update soon...
Edited by adorablerujul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
this is very nice start ... i totaly loved ur SS concept ... do continue and plz pm me ... thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice, please pm me when u continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: adorablerujul

I hope you will stick to ''it will not be easy for Arnav to get back Khushi'' as in your last ff you didnot inspite of Khushi was alone in her preganancy and for 7 years and gone through a lot. And moreover I hate it when the person who is actually responsible for everything will not suffer as much the person who is innocent yet paid the prize.

Looking forward to next part...update soon...



That was different FF...

this SS is different..
and i will try to write above mentioned points that is "Realization of ASR"'
stay tuned with it

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: samia19

nice, please pm me when u continue


surely i will send u pm😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Great start.. thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Wowww!!!!
Dil ko thandak pad gayi jii!!!!! 😃😃
Poor soul Khushi! 😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Nice concept
im looking forward for thiz SS
continue soon

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