Raizada and Sons [5] - Link to thread 6 on Pg152 - Page 22

i loved this update sooo much...every scene was so entertaining...first of all viren and sheetal..the title of the update actually suits them...viren is so disgusting...he is still after khushi...i so wish arnav to punch the hell of him...then his evil match...sheetal...the daayan was checking out arnav...

Ewww...sheetal ix sooo disgusting...of course same as Viren...
but the ending was sooo adorable...
as usual, arhi are the best...

too good...

Khushi married to Viren, the thought only is puke-inducing, But then cannot expect anything better then this from the vile-mind Viren...he himself is pathetic and he wants a good wife, irony much...Viren and Sheetal are perfect match for each other... but i was really scared reading that Viren still has designs on Khushi and Sheetal is eyeing Arnav... i hope they dont get any opportunity to come in between these two...

i love the homely feel you always add to your stories...here when the ladies were sitting inside the Kitchen and then Arnav comes to call them, also picking up Avni...it was the awww moment...

I agree with how Khushi felt looking at Sheetal, it can be very un-nerving to see a woman ogling at your husband...i just wish Arnav takes her seriously cause looking at the way Sheetal is, m sure she is gonna try to get close to Arnav in future...also since Viren has designs on Khushi, they might try to separate the leads...

gosh one Suraj was enough, now we have two more with more sinister minds... anyways I hope if when Viren-Sheetal tries to disturb Arnav-Khushi marital life, Suraj comes to their rescue as it is he can't stand Khushi in pain and has accepted that Khushi and Arnav will always remain together...

Originally posted by: vgedin

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Arnav must be jumping with joy, naa ? He is generally the insecure and jealous one, always tries to mask it and then has crazy sex. Not that Khushi is insecure, yet her reaction to Sheetal must have thrilled him to no end. And Khushi thought it was only Arnav who was territorial? :D :D

Evil begets evil, indeed. Viren has found his perfect match in Sheetal, he continues to desire Khushi while Sheetal is "disrobing Arnav with her eyes". Khushi does call her Chudail, but what I liked about the update was how you sketched Sheetal and Viren. They were not just uni-dimensionally negative characters. Viren, while a pervert is insightful and perceptive about Khushi and the relationship she shares with Arnav; and Sheetal, while unapologetic about her lifestyle, is definitely no hypocrite and is very practical.

Hm, Arnav picked up Avni without leaving a chocolate for Kalindi? Haw! 😲

I love scenes with kids, especially Arnav and the kids. Also Arnav and Indira. And the last scene was a treat, so cute :D

Damn Khushi is in demand! Holy heck and Arnav too apparently, from this Sheetal girl

I love how everyone in the family can see the love these two share for each other <3 Viren should be jealous!

Viren and Sheetal make me want to vomit, I felt dirty reading about those two...ugh

Alright so Suraj, Sheetal and Viren, Can't wait to see how we get rid of this evil group!

haha awesome!
finally viren found his solemate 😆
serves him right!
loved arnav n kushi part and that kiss was too good!

Viren and Sheetal are truly a match, though it seems she just might be too much for even him. That should teach him a lesson or two...I was actually laughing at their interaction seeing him on a bit of a back foot.

Very beautifully written...loved the update...loved the way she was mumbling "Chudail and Daayan"...so now able to see Khushi's jealousy, she is too cute ...as seen Arnav part of jealousy...now her turn comes...loved it...cute children scene with Khushi and Indira..very true Viren got his evil match... a perfect match...unbelievable, he is still love with Khushi who is happily married'.he knows they made for each other but still wanted to have Khushi

"EVIL"😡

Waiting for the next update'.

Cheers😛

Well What way change of tide!