Arshi SS: An Awakening Thread 1 **Awarded** - Page 42

Hmm so Khushi picks up on the important fact that her father was uncomfortable around Shyam!! Wonder when she will find out the truth.

is khushi going to tell arnav about shyam

hope arnav and khushi will work together to bring shyam down

Very nice, I like the steps Aranv and Khushi are taking towards each other...I like thst Khushi is questioning babuji s reaction and trying to figure out the connection ! I like it when the characters use their intelligence!

Oh.. Fianlly we got an update after such a long time! Not much Arshi interactions though.
What is that evil Shyam upto? Looking forward to coffee tea date.
Pl update soon this time.

hope Khushi talks to Arnav soon.. Shyam is planning something and AK need to stop it..

Time to bring down Shyam, he is such a creep. Superb update, amazing!

Wonderful FF.

I read the whole 13 chapters in one go and to say I loved the whole concept will be an understatement... the new approach to the terrace scene which I hated too... you have presented this story in a very unique way... It's beautifully written ... I love the pace as the story is not moving too quickly... I love the detail... Arnav and khushi's characterisation which is so well done they are almost as same as they were in the show yet different in a very positive way... I am so glad I found this FF and read it... I am thoroughly injoying this lovely story... I love the fact nothing is hurried and they are taking their time in realising their feelings.
Description of the emotions and the feelings are so wonderfully written.

I am glad although Shyam is there in the story but you have not given him much screen space... I am wondering and hoping him not to be successful in his evil plans... I am also so glad that though he harbours feelings to possess Khushi... We only read through his monologue about that and he has not harressed Khushi directly too much.

I Absolutly love where this story is heading...will be waiting for their chat over coffee and where it leads... hope Arnav does not get too shocked and behaves in ASRish manner in anger... What ever you plan for the story will be awesome... I am so happy that Khushi has decided to confide in Arnav about the whole sorry incident.

Will you consider to add me to your PM list, I have send you buddy request as I don't want to miss future updates.
Thank you for writing this lovely FF.

Hey! Glad to see you back, hope all is well at your end.. I wonder what Shyam is up to.. I'm worried for Khushi.. Will Arnav find out about him soon?

Oh wow, Khushi is gonna ask Arnav out for coffee to talk about them, I love her guts.. Very much eager for next chapter, hope you update soon. Thanks for the pm.. :)

awesome update! it was very interesting! i wish khushi had caught much more of the conversation that only of that name laal bhai!