ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#4 *EPILOGUE* - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For update-42:

She is one year old! Sighs!
Shama is one lucky kid to have ArSha as parents!😃
Their love has still that ignite that I almost forget the place I sit in and Start wandering in imagination street!
Awww! How Shakti made her calm! I totally could feel the warmth of mother in her! She is one wonderful mommy! Kunwar always doing everything for his two princesses! I love this guy!
I love it when Kunwar held her in arms! It's a overwhelming feeling!😳
Birthday girl is been crying a lot! We could have some hawt shawt romance but shama couldn't see her Mommy papa paying less attention to her! 😆
It seems like a celebration time! 🥳
It was chhotu but powerful update! Quantity doesn't matter when quality is there!😳
Manu! You rock!😎



Hahhahhaa kids always prove to be kabab me haddi specially when they are this little 😆
Yeah hahhaha I rock plus I roll too
Sorry I'm having poor sense of humour now-a-days


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For update-43

Birthday girl! it;s party time! Shama first birthday party! 🥳
I totally am loving bond of Shama and Shakti! Their exclusive gesture talks make me feel awesome!
Powder scene was too good! 😆
Mukti massi! Awww! it sounds so sweet! She seems to share a good bond with her niece!
Kunwar like a best daddy prepared for everything! 😎
What Shama did to cake was amazingly funny! Kid's innocent playing with everything they see! The way she covered herself in cake was adorable!
And then a big moment! She took her first step! A little one but she did! It sounded so great!
Seeing Shama grow is just not amusing for ArSha but for readers too!😳
Too good! Manu! I loved it to core!



Mother and daughter always has a special something in them
You know my niece is just a year old
N whenever I write Shama I imagine her seems that is the dose 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

for update 44:

😭😭 Why? I ask why?😭 Why the hell she is gone??? 😭 I can't believe what she has stated as reason?😭 Shakti is not like this!😭 There is some catch!
I literally cried while reading it! Seeing Kunwar and Shama in misery😭!Oh Manu! You made me cry!
Which success she was talking about????? Seeing her and Shama's bond, Shakti can never ever think of her career over Shama! Leave Kunwar but how come she can leave Shama? There is something more to it!😭
I hate you Shakti Mohan Sharma! Oh God! these words had so much pain!
Manu you succeed in pouring life into words! They seems to portray emotions now!
The way he was searching for her...oh man! I was crying!😭
And while reading that video message part, My burst up totally! 😭
Manu! Congrats for surpassing every limit of write awesome! You nailed it!🤗



Oh Adu! I'm sorry to make you cry but story of a life has every spice in them
Thank You so much Adu, you always manage to pep up me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For update 45:

She actually did it! She left him for very reason she mentioned! Sorry to say but she failed me! I love you Manu for writing humans not Gods! I loved how you wrote her mistaking human but not mahan types! *But I still think that there is more to it" She has some more reason to take this hard decision!*My optimistically typical instinct*😆
Shakti is back in town! After four years, How many times she'd died in these 4 years! How much guilt, loath she must have felt all these years! 😭
That flashback where she danced! Ah-mazingly written! You were fab in writing dance! It was treat to read it!😳
I didn't get one thing! Why she needed to be away for finding her passion for dance! I mean Kunwar or Shama never been an obstacle in way to her dreams! I wanna know her side of reasoning!🤔
Pain and how much she misses him, it came so beautifully!😳
I am feeling pain and congestion in my chest from last two updates! manu! You really are a exceptional writer! it's hard to make me feel that way! I don't even feel that much intensity while watching something that amazing!😳
Kudos to you!👏



Hhahahha hopefully your optimistically typical insist will reach its destination 😆
Thank you so much sweetie for this, I sometimes wonder do I deserve this or my I'm too lucky to have you 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For update 46:

I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! Shaku can't be going for her dreams! It was cancer!😭 Oh my poor baby! She suffered alone in her most vulnerable state! Shaku! 😭😭
That much sacrifice! I really hope Kunwar understands!😭
Asha! She was as per her name! Her words had depth and answers to all questions!
Shakti is all ready to go back and meet her loved ones! Her family would forgive and understand in minutes but I am doubtful if Kunwar could understand or not! He will simply fill with pain and distrust that why she didn't let him take care of her in cancer! Why she took the decision alone! Oh my boy!
I am feeling bad for both of them! 😭
As always it was superb Manu!👏
love ya! 🤗



Obviously Kunwar will have his urn to negotiate their upcoming life
I was feeling that feel too while writing 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For update 47:

Nothing waits for you! *sighs*
She wished of a disaster and it came true! I don't blame Kunwar to marry Charlie! I tired hating him but I couldn't! I can't blame him! I think a lover didn't let down the love but a father grew up to sky to give his daughter a perfect weather! 😳
I felt bad after knowing how a decision has made their life irreparable! Shakti's decision to disappear and Kunwar's decision to move on for Shama! What a game of fate!
Now they are that fr that nothing can make them come closer! I think Shama can! I think MANU can! yes! Get the hint and make these two restless souls find peace! Make them once again ArSha! Enough of suffering for these two!😭
I kinda feeling that I am in some layered self of mine where I am debating with myself over what just happened in update! 🤓
Manu! You have taken the story to another level! It's my favorite story! No doubts why! It gives me growth! 😳
Jeete raho beta! Live long my favorite writer!
You are a blessing to me!🤗



Sorry to correct you darls but amar and charlie are not yet married
they are going to...
Hhahahha yes Manu can 😆
Hhahaha thank You for your precious ashirwaad Adu
I have not enough words to thank You 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Kunwar-Shakti's feelings were brilliantly portrayed...I was actually sobbing throughout the whole update...and the song was just...Perfect!



Thank you so much Vedika 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hola all 🤗

This is really important to let you all know Amar and Charlie are not yet married.
What Amar told Shakti was about their up-coming marriage .
I hope that made you guys a little calm. 😃
I wrote it in a haste, so might not come as per expectations
sorry for that.

Thank you everyone who took their time and place a comment here.
Its highly appreciated


This update is dedicated to ;-
spicy_rays & khushbooluvarsha


P.S. Resers kindly unres asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago


Done 😊

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