ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#4 *EPILOGUE* - Page 45

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

Awesome
I can't seen shakti crying
Make it patch up fast
Udate asap

Thank You
Aye! Aye! Captain 😆

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

Awesome and Beautiful Update...Loved it...Waiting for the next Update...

Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: zona_malik

FABOULOUS

the song,da way u portrayed emotions..inshort everyfink

loved it

update soon

Thank You 😊

Originally posted by: TANHA_H

lovely update

👏👏👏

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Nirju99

ab shakti wapas aarahi hai toh
dono ko phirse 1 kardo

Hhahah ok dear 😊

Originally posted by: pallavi.14

that was really high on emotions...
and i really loved it... guessed something like this only fr Arsha meet..
and both's pain and shattered soul was described really well...
love it...
update soon. waiting for next one...

thanx fr pm

Thanks Pallavi 😊

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

First of all! Beat me officially for being sooo late!me back with my essay reviews but this time they are little briefed!

for update-39

Wow! This is the word!

Her nausea problem in pregnancy, how she can't feel the nostalgia! Awww..I felt for her! Being pregnant is not easy, that's what I got to learn from the update! Time when she was alone in house suffering with this utter weakness, you described it so perfectly Manu! I totally loved this flash back!

She fell asleep in bathroom! Awww! It'd be so relieving to see Kunwar in front of eyes after such a sleep! He is a total sweetheart! Calm and mature to handle her in this time! His love is her only strength!

Her plead of telling her story with "I love it when! I loved this game! Kunwar totally left in awww with his sweet talks!

It was sweet update Manu! Rushing to read next!

You were successful in making me wander in ArShaland of your DTROL! *Me happy hoppy*

Adu 🤗
Hahhahha will beat u baad me 😆 abhi uchal uchal ke comment padhing
My girl back with lovely monkeys 😆

Tere comment padhke mein hamesha over the moon walal situation me pahuch jaati hu
Seems u give summary of my update with a full spoon of tareef hahhahahha
Awww... I 'm glad I could 😃

Originally posted by: cool_star14

SHOCKED !!
Kunwar has moved on with Charlie...😲
i was exited for Arsha's meeting..
d song very well portrayed d feelings d emotions of Shakti...
waiting for d next update..

Will give you one thank you dear 😊

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For update -40

awww! Can you get more than perfect writer? I think you just did!

It was amazingly sweet update! I am in love with it! You know you have made pregnancy a fascination phase of life! Manu! Your updates tell how gem of a person you are! Though I knew it already but still, your readers can get a view of you in your stories! Simple yet fascinating!

It was amazing to read how Shakti feels about her pregnancy!

The first baby kick and her amusement about it! Kunwar's extreme careful nature and their talk about baby! Kunwar wants a girl! So typical of a father!

That kiss to belly was adorable! And Kunwar's irk with word adorable! Lolz! It was so cute! Their naughty talk! A perfect blend of everything!

You nailed it Manu! You were as always phenomenal with this update! I totally loved it!

Awww... was it really that blushy! blushy! 😳
Thank you... 🤗
I can proudly say one thing now without experiencing this I have made it beautiful 😆

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For update-41

Am I having a good day? Yes I am! It's treat to read your updates back to back! Each update is filled with so real and human emotions! This update surpassed the heights of sweetness!

Puppy???!!! Oh mamma! You have made this story even more special for me! I lub puppies! White puppy I can imagine him! Awww! He was so cute!

Kunwar is late in this crucial hour! This man is surely needed scolding!

Shakti's condition was so painful! Aww! I felt for her! Kunwar was even worst! Men are weak! I am 100% certain now!

It was so real the way you showed him trembling! Shakti's family made the scenario so apt and complete!

Finally! A girl baby! Yayayay! Kunwar's family is complete! I mean of both of them!

Sweet little angel! Aww! i can imagine!
It was amazing to go through this phase of DTROL! Honestly speaking I am overwhelmed!

Love you Manu for giving us this story!

I must say I'm having a good day coz I'm getting to read your back to back replies
Hhahhahah Puppy poppy 😆 I lobe them too 😛
Love you Adu for making this story more special for me 🤗