I see through you (Swaron OS) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Diii *sigh* this is what we want to see on swaron, so well written, so beautiful and so divine, yet so simple and sweet. This is the wish of every swaron fan, we want to see them togehter, thru thick and thin.. the part where swayam said ki one day we will kick this out and sharons answer was so touching, i was moved dii, you know to capture the swaron essence always. Thanks so much for such a lovely OS, love you🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awesome os
I really want something like this to happen in d3 when swayam came to know that sharon have asthma.
It was indeed an amazing os.Sharon's fear of loosing swayam proves that how much she love him.When she get to know that swayam knows everything n now he will leave her.She scared n morever she can't even think her life without his love.This is the purity of their love.They love each other without limits.
Loved their confession.
Loved the os
Keep write more such os
Ps. pls update missing life
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
This is exactly the kind of thing you'd expect Swayum to pull off. But I do not see SwaRon getting closure anytime in the near future. So basically here and there sometimes it is nice to read this short, crisp and neat pieces of writing. The upside of simple writing is that it gives a visual edge to the prose. The reader is reading and whipping up pictures easily in their head. So, it's wondrous really, simple and very well written. (:


Thanks for the PM.

Kankshita



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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Hey megsy!!!
Lovely os girl!!
Your writing always touches me!!
Very beautifully penned!
High on emotions nd swaron passion too!
His reassurance the pain Sharon is his breath afteall!
Very nice !!
Keep up your brilliant writing nd do write more.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Wow di this was a lovely OS! A different take on the present story! I wish the CVs would take some inspiration from this and change their storyline😆 Ur OS sums what we SwaRon fans want to see on TV. Thanks for writing this! It was great!😃

P.S - Sorry for the late comment, checked the PM now😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome os
I hope it happens in d3 also:)
U penned it down beautifully.thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
hey sorry for late comment yar

i read ur os it was amazing
really love d way u write
the letter write by swayam for sharon was amazing
he pour out all his love in d letter
he tell her he know her, understand her, feel her love in each denial, he know why she away from dance
swayam show his love by letter
sharon pouring all her love through kiss nd she know if he with her thn she doesn't require any one
love d ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@megsy: Nyc OS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: D3fication

Oh boy. You have NO idea how much I love this. This is exactly how i imagine Swayam and Sharon finally cutting the chase, giving in. You know the best part about your writing? Its very Swayam and Sharon. You write true to their characters. And thats an awesome quality to have in a piece of writing- being true to the characters.

You're very talented. Looking forward to reading more of your writings! Please write more! :)


thank you soo much for your lovely words and appreciation 😊 i try my best to stick to the core character and glad you could recognise that! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Diii *sigh* this is what we want to see on swaron, so well written, so beautiful and so divine, yet so simple and sweet. This is the wish of every swaron fan, we want to see them togehter, thru thick and thin.. the part where swayam said ki one day we will kick this out and sharons answer was so touching, i was moved dii, you know to capture the swaron essence always. Thanks so much for such a lovely OS, love you🤗


thank you soo much suku suku for ur lovely words... so glad to know that my writing could touch you and move you😊

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