I see through you (Swaron OS)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I see through you...


Sharon came running to her locker, coughing and panting. She opened her locker in a jiffy and reached to her inhaler. This pump was a life breather to her. As she picked up the inhaler, she saw a red envelop below it. She hesitantly reached to it.

Just one look at the red envelop, she knew that it was Swayams. Millions of thoughts passed her mind that moment. She gasped hard as realization seeped in her that Swayam has seen her pump. She realized that now she won't be able to hide anything any longer from him.

She looked at the letter for a moment and slowly turned her face and looked at the inhaler in her other hand.

She lost her balance, still coughing and held on to the locker door for support. Her body failed to support her anymore and she slowly sank down, the letter in one hand and the inhaler in the other, she slid down and sat on the floor.

She didn't realize when the inhaler slid off her hand and fell on the ground. With a tear rolling down her cheek, she slowly opened the letter. Thousands of fears crossed her mind.

What if, what if Swayam no longer loves me? What if he has left me? What if this is a goodbye?

But this is what you wanted right, Sharon, this is exactly what you wanted.

She read the letter while still breathing hard and with hazy eyes as tears refused to cease.

You know what? Have you forgotten that I can see through you?

I could see you were running away from me...I could see you were running away from your friends...I could see you were running away from dance...I could see all though you Sharon!

I could hear your cry through your screams...I could feel you crave through every denial of yours to dance...i could see your love in every rejection of yours... I could see all though you Sharon!

Have you forgotten how much this mad guy loves you?

Have you forgotten this crazy guys words?

Have you forgotten all my promises?

Have you forgotten that I could see all though you Sharon!

Do you know what you are to me?

This pump in your hand, it makes you breathe right?

YOU are MY inhaler'!!

I won't be able to breathe without you.

Have you forgotten that I can see through you?

Itni si baat ke liye itna durr jaa rahi thi, pagli? Main hoon na, harr waqt tumhare saath'

Sharon had forgotten all about taking the puff to soothe her attack down. She dint need it anymore.

She closed her eyes as tears rolled down her cheeks and placed a long kiss on the letter.

Suddenly she felt a pair of hands holding her by her arms.

She opened her eyes slowly to find a pair of eyes, filled with tears and a pair of lips where a sweet smile played.

Swayam pierced through her eyes, held the letter and removed it from her hands.

He chin-ed her up with his finger and said while pointing towards his lips,

" Waha nahi, yaha! "

Sharon cupped his face in a jiffy and placed her quivering lips on his.

Swayam slowly pulled her into a deep kiss, soothing her back with his hands.

Sharon dug her nails in Swayams back, still sobbing though the kiss.

Swayam rubbed her back slowly and calmed her down.

He breathed life into her quenching lungs though his warm breath.

Sharon calmed down after a while.

Both kept kissing each other, pouring all their love.

They broke the kiss after a while and Sharon hugged him tight.

Swayam ran his hands through her hair, caressing and calming her down.

He reached out to the inhaler lying on the floor, looked at Sharon and said,

" I promise you one day we will kick this out of our lives. "

Sharon looked deep in his eyes and said,

" I don't need it anymore already! I have you, my breath, my life! "

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Megha



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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for deeps 😊

Hey Di...🤗

I am really ashamed of myself for unreserving my comment on this wonderful OS so so late...though i was the fist one to read this..i suggested changes in the title as well...i don't know Di..m not able to think straight from last few days..hence the delay..hope u can forgive me...u r one of the gifted writer present here who have the caliber to describe many emotions through one sentence ...one single phrase and u convey it all...goshh..i love ur writing..just so beautiful...


Coming to this OS...this is not just another One shot on SWARON..it holds the hopes of one whole fanbase ...we all want to see the current sequence unfold like this...i loved the beginning when she ran towards the locker room..to reach her inhaler ...only to find HIS letter there...what follows is just magic...

What if, what if Swayam no longer loves me? What if he has left me? What if this is a goodbye?

But this is what you wanted right, Sharon, this is exactly what you wanted.


She loves him..she knows him..what she doesn't know is the depth pf HIS LOVE..for her..

You know what? Have you forgotten that I can see through you?

Di when i read this piece ..these words gave me goosepimples all over ..he sees through her ...no matter what she does to hide her feelings from him..be rude..be arrogant ..he never ceases to read her like an open book...



Do you know what you are to me?

This pump in your hand, it makes you breathe right?

YOU are MY inhaler'!!

I won't be able to breathe without you.

Have you forgotten that I can see through you?

Itni si baat ke liye itna durr jaa rahi thi, pagli? Main hoon na, harr waqt tumhare saath'

Yeah she makes him breath..so rightly u said ...SHE IS HIS INHALER..He inhales life through her ...his heart beats for her...every beat just chants her name..the last line made me smile...when he called her pagli..aww...the madness of love ...makes u do things u never dreamed about doing...who thought SHARON RAI PRAKASH..the DIVA herself will be so hopelessly in love with HIM that she will think about his pain before hers...


He chin-ed her up with his finger and said while pointing towards his lips,

" Waha nahi, yaha! "

Sharon cupped his face in a jiffy and placed her quivering lips on his.

Swayam slowly pulled her into a deep kiss, soothing her back with his hands.

Sharon dug her nails in Swayams back, still sobbing though the kiss.

Swayam rubbed her back slowly and calmed her down.

He breathed life into her quenching lungs though his warm breath.

Sharon calmed down after a while.

Both kept kissing each other, pouring all their love.



.Awww..Dii..this was the most wonderfully written kiss and so aptly placed in any SS OS ...loved it..when he said wahan nehi yahan...she was pouring her love to his letter when the man himself was standing in front of HER ...he truly breathed life into her ...


He reached out to the inhaler lying on the floor, looked at Sharon and said,

" I promise you one day we will kick this out of our lives. "

Sharon looked deep in his eyes and said,

" I don't need it anymore already! I have you, my breath, my life! "

.These lines again made me realize why this heavenly pair made me fall for them..and make me have faith in love..though a fiction the depth portrayed in their story in something extra ordinary ...his promise and her reply ...she dont need the inhaler as he is there to inhale life to her...he is her breath ..her life...thanx for making me fall for love..again and again..love SWARON..love u Dii

This is by far ur best piece ...waiting to see many more from u ..

PS-I am really sorry for being late...

Luv
Deep
Edited by megsy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome os by my dido
touching one,connecting us to swaron
keep writing more
love yaa
Edited by sweetcherry95 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ooops..u resed for me😛
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Twinku Dii 🤗
Awesome Awesome Awesome update'..The beginning of this OS reminded me of the scene after yaadein sequence'.Sharon coughing and taking her inhaler'..when Sharon saw the red envelope and thousand of fears crossed her mind, you have clearly shown her fear of losing Swayam'..and I hope in d3 we get to see d same when Swayam comes to know about Sharon's illness'..

I could see you were running away from me...I could see you were running away from your friends...I could see you were running away from dance...I could see all though you Sharon!

I could hear your cry through your screams...I could feel you crave through every denial of yours to dance...i could see your love in every rejection of yours... I could see all though you Sharon!


This lines were awesomely penned down'..Sharon instead of knowing that Swayam can read her like a open book, tried to hide her feelings from so many days''Loved the way Swayam gave her a assurance that he is always there beside her and both will face this problem and kick the inhaler out of their lives'..Awwiiieee Just loved them'.this couple just makes me go awe'.. 😳

You have beautifully penned down their emotions, their pain, their love for each other, was just mind blowing'..I always love you work dii, and m a kind of person who can't express and always short of words'..So just going to see that it was a fantabulous update'..

But Twinku next time we want a bigger update from you, this was a chotu sa OS''But still it was short and sweet..But next time we want big and sweet...

Luv u ❤️

Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey cute ❤️ di 🤗

sorry for the late reply

its an awesome se bhi awesome os ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

thnx for writing such a sweet os...yup swayam n sharon r each oder's life
n swaron r our inhaler ❤️...swayam cant get any cute den dis...hayye kya likhe hain swayam ne letter mein...matlab aapne 😉...mein mar jawah ☺️

n den sharon kissing him...was d best part ...again i m in swaron dreamland

thnx di for taking me der

luv

ur shona 😊

Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 12 years ago
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unres

Gudiya dii...🤗
What should i say...just one word awesome...😊
This is something similar to what i want in d3...the day swayam comes to know about her illness, the day he will stand near her giving her an assurance that she is not alone to face it...and finally the day they will be together...

coming to the update...starting with sharon coughing and taking her inhaler reminded me of the scene after yaadein sequence...aww i still feel sorry for her in that scene...and the same emotions were brought when i read it here as well...
then she sees the red envelope...oh and she already knew it was swayam's...the words in the letter brought me into tears..."i can see through u"...as the title...this was even the line that was catchy in the letter...

I could see you were running away from me...I could see you were running away from your friends...I could see you were running away from dance...I could see all though you Sharon!

I could hear your cry through your screams...I could feel you crave through every denial of yours to dance...i could see your love in every rejection of yours... I could see all though you Sharon! 👍🏼

and then comes her man...from whom she was trying to hide her feelings since so many days...but she dint know that he knew her like an open book...he was always there with her and yet again to prove that right he is there near her to console her, to be her moral support...

and the last line where she claimed that swayam is her breath and her life made me go all crazy over swaron again...😳

All in all beautifully penned down, but dii it was such a chotu update..next time make sure its gonna be big enough for me to give a bigger comment...😛

Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for himi my singing rockstar! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

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This is one of the most beautiful os i have ever read. Its short yet its soo complete.
The title itself made me do a lil dance.
When I began reading I could imagine every word u hav written there happening in front of my eyes. Gosh, This is beautiful.

Swayam, I love the way he can read her lyk a crystal. And i would giv anythig to hav this scene in the show. Great work😃
Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unreserved Page 2 😳. The comment above the comment above this 😆
Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago

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