I see through you (Swaron OS)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Pankhuri Priyam

@SwaRonpankhuri

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

loved it beautifully written..hope swayam gets to knw abt this asthma thing asap..its realy annoying coz dis asthma drama is stupid

Quote

Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Di this was beautiful!!!
U know wat u r an amazing writr!!😊
Da whole letter part was superb...
Amazingly penned!!😊
Muahh di!!luvd it...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

wow awesome os dear...👏

loved the letter which swayam wrote to Sharon...❤️

sharon truly is his inhaler...

the ending part where Sharon says she doesn't need the inhaler anymore as she has swayam with her...is just the awww moment...⭐️

swaron truly r made for each other...❤️

loved reading this os...⭐️ ❤️

thanks for the pm..😊

keep coming up with these awesome works!!! 👍🏼

Quote

cynosure27

@cynosure27

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I seriously love reading your works. You pen down each feeling so beautifully. This was yet again awesome. Hope such passionate scenes happen in the show as well. Please keep writing more often. Thanks and stay blessed!😊

Quote

swapna

@shan16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

very well written...dis will be the best scene ever ...if it really happens on D3...what a visual treat it will b to see swaron together tackling all d hurdles...!!

Best lines i loved in dis OS...

"I could see you were running away from me...I could see you were running away from your friends...I could see you were running away from dance...I could see all though you Sharon!

I could hear your cry through your screams...I could feel you crave through every denial of yours to dance...i could see your love in every rejection of yours... I could see all though you Sharon!"

This pump in your hand, it makes you breathe right?

YOU are MY inhaler'!!

I won't be able to breathe without you.

" I promise you one day we will kick this out of our lives. "

" I don't need it anymore already! I have you, my breath, my life! "

Simply WOWWW

Edited by shan16 - 12 years ago

Quote

Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Comment edited on page 1

Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago

Quote

Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

I dont watch D3 anymore so not aware of the storyline. I guess this OS has something to do with the current storyline..

whatever I liked it ..

Quote

Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

lovely os and beautifully written

keep writing more

Quote

Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Oh boy. You have NO idea how much I love this. This is exactly how i imagine Swayam and Sharon finally cutting the chase, giving in. You know the best part about your writing? Its very Swayam and Sharon. You write true to their characters. And thats an awesome quality to have in a piece of writing- being true to the characters.

You're very talented. Looking forward to reading more of your writings! Please write more! :)