SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14* - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awsum amazing i luved it alooot
But ab swaron eik dusre ke kab feel kerna start kereinge plzzz am w8ing sooo much becoz i luv this ff alooot
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...finaly u updated...
n ek saath do do... 😊
both chaps wer awesom
shivam gaya toh uski gang 😡
hope d swaron lovestory moves aage..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both d updates r Lovely
Swaron r in their vulnerable state nd gang try to cheer up them.
Sharon creating shell aroun her, so no one hurt her.
Sharon in D3 team nd preaparing dance in which sharon rudely behave with him.
But swayam never mind about her behaviour.
In club shivam's friend will try to do somethink whth gang.
Lovely updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both updates are niice ! 😊
Curious to know what happens next and how swayam and sharon finally come close... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
both the chapter was superb and fabulous well written...
wow sharon join the college of swayan and now both are friends
and gang are to try to cheer them up to get out this bad state...
finally when everything got to normal... i hate that shivam gang...
i hope they do not create more mess up with them...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee updates 👏
loved ittt😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Sharon changed
Raj planning to take revenge from them
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Posted: 12 years ago
i didnt get pm😔

both the updates r nice😊
Wow Sharon resumed her college n now part of dance team
but creating shell around her
Hope swayam nd sharon fell in love asap
shivam gaya to uski gang aa gayi😡
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres on age 52
finally 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

I know many of you still are unaware of Chap 12 n 13.. cz I didn't sent PMs but my friend did..
Thanks Harshi (vrushanharshi)

So here's the link of Chaps..it was double update...
Page hyperlinked
Chap 12 n 13- Page 52


Sorry for Grammatical mistake n spell..didn't rechecked...


Sharon had that Drink...and kept the glass on the table beside..
The Shivam Stabbers laughed their heart out...They were enjoying it...

The whole gang(D3) decided to go home...
Simmi- Hey Sharon..let's go...
Sharon- Huh...? (confused)
Simmi- What..? Let's go home...I'll drop you...
Sharon- Umm..nah...I will go by my own...
Vicky- Are Sharon..bohot raat ho gayi hai...
Sharon(diva)- To..??
Vicky- To saath mein chale jao...
Sharon(angry)- No..mein akele jaa sakti hun...
Simmi- Sharon par...
Sharon- I said na I'll go...so I'll go...mujhe jab jaana hai jahaan jaana hai mein chali jaungi !
Kisi ki help nahi chahiye mujhe...

She said and faced sideways...Simmi just shrugged her shoulders and
Simmi- Ohh..okay Sharon...bye then...
Sharon- Bye...

Simmi and Nilesh went... The rest of the gang decided to go...when Rey received a call...
ey- Tumlog niklo...mein aa jaunga...

Rest of the gang went out..and still Sharon was in thoughts and it seemed like she was searching someone...
On Call..
Swayam- Hey !
Rey- Hann dude...
Swayam- Are puri gang ko inform kar ki kal aisa time manage kare ki thoda late bhi ho jaye to zyada problem na ho... Rehearsals karne ke liye hamare paas time bohot kam hai..
Rey- Thik hai...mein bata dunga..
Swayam- Chal bye..

Call disconnected...
Rey saw Sharon standing there... He called her...
Rey- Sharonn...
Sharon turned to her left..
Sharon- Yeah ?
Rey- Vo kal thoda zyada time tak rukna pad sakta hai College mein so be prepare...
Sharon- Okay...fine...vaise kab tak ?
Rey- Utna idea nahi hai...
Sharon- Thik hai thik hai...

Sharon's eyes travelled to a person... she just had a eye conact with that person and nodded to herself and went out of the club..
Rey also went out...
He informed everyone about the late schedule for next day!

Next Day, College !
Sharon came early and directly went into the Class...
The rest of them went to their respective classes...

Simmi firstly searched for Sharon and found her in class... She came and sat beside her...
Simmi- Hey..
Sharon- Hello...

Simmi was about to speak some thing when the Lecturer arrived..and started teaching...

***
Swayam went to Rehearsal hall...as he had to do much work so that the Dance be the best !
He made many sketches so that each and every dance step be clear to all the gang...
He decided the timings and all...but still he is not a machine na that he'll do each and every work very fast !
As there was no ACS who could help him in doing the work..

Swayam- Abhi aur bhi kaam hai..bas puri gang concentrate kare tabhi kuch ho paega and it should be with great enthusiasm !
Hope sab kuch thik ho... God please...!

***

Here Sharon was fully concertrating on what the he was teaching.. Simmi at a point called her as she wanted to talk to her..
Simmi- Sharon..llsten...
Sharon- Later Sim..plzz...Sir is here...so.plzz..
Simmi- Ummm..okay !

Class ended ! Sharon before listening to Simmi told her that She wants to be alone for sometime...
Simmi just nodded...

***

Juniors had only one classes but Seniors had three...so
All after attending their classes met in Canteen...
Taani- Guys.. Swayam kahan hai ? Aaj classes bhi attend nahi ki...?
Rey- Are..vo Rehearsal hall mein hai...kaam tha use..
Vicky- Itna time ho gaya...Nil tu bula na...
Nilesh- Acha ruk...puchta hun..

He called Swayam but Swayam refused..he said that He is busy and is in Projector room...till then the gang should go and practice after having meal... and when He'll mesaage then come to Projector room...

Nilesh told about this...to Gang..
Rinni- We should go and help him yaar...
Simmi- Nahi..Rinni...mat jaa...vo khud karega...and hame to pata hai na use koi kaam mein disturb kare to use pasand nahi hai...
Neha- Vaise...Sharon where she is ?
Simmi- Usne bola ki vo akele rehna chahti hai...
Taani- But use to College ache se pata bhi nahi hai..fir ?
Simmi- Are..vo aajayegi ache se...chill...!!

***
Sharon was walking alone and saw a boy and girl coming out of some place...
She went near it and came to know (that boy n girl told her) that it was Abondoned Corridor...
She went inside and sat on the staircase...
Sharon- Yeah..am doing right... everything is now good... ab I know sab kuch thik hoga...!
She was blabbering.. murmuring... She was in her thoughts... she used to do this every time she felt that she was lonely and whenever she used to be fake...For her this fake cover was normal now she felt that she is safe..no one will hurt her...!

***
Swayam messaged everyone to come to projector room...now !
Sharon also received the message... She opened it... and read...
She got up but realized that she was unknown to about that place...she replied him..
Swayam read...
"I don't know where is this.."
Swayam didn't replied but called her...

Swayam- Sharon ?
Sharon- I don'tr know where is Projector Room..
Swayam- Yeah I got that but where are you ? Not with the Gang ?
Sharon- No...I am in Corridor...
Swayam(confused)- Corridor ? Which one ?
Sharon- Umm...vo...
Sharon forgot the name that where she was...
Sharon- Vo...staircase one...some..umm..
Swayam- Ohh..you mean..Abondned..Corridor ?
Sharon- Hmm yeah yeah ! That only... Abondoned Corridor...
Swayam- Umm...come out...and go left to it...
Sharon- Ar...left..um...
Swayam*in mind*- Aisa karta hun I should only go and bring her,,,nahi to aur time lag jayega..hmm
Swayam- Hey listen...just wait am coming...
Sharon- Ohkay...!
He kept the call...

Here Gang came and Swayam excused himself for a minute...
Sharon was sitting on the staircase...when she heard the door opening... She stood up and turned back...
Sharon- Tum..huh...
Swayam- Hmm...Sharon...tum yahan kaise ?
Sharon- Mera mann mein jahan jaun...tumse matalb ?
Swayam- Hey...cool...down...just pucha nothing ekse..okay...now lets go...!
Swayam was heading towards the door when Sharon stopped him...
Sharon- Hey wait...!!
Swayam turned and- What ! ?
Sharon- Vo..plz kisi ko mat batana ki I was here...
Swayam- Kyon ? Sab puchenge to ?
Sharon- Vo mein answer kar dungi but plz...
Swayam- But tumhe yahan ka way kaise pata...?
Sharon- Vo..mein aise hi akele rehna chahti thi and is side walk karte karte aa gayi aur meine kisi couple ko yahan bahaar aate dekh so...mujhe pata chala...
Swayam- Ohh..wow...tumhe ek hi sentence mein do jawaab de diye !
Sharon- Huh...??
Swayam- Are leave it , now chalo late ho raha hai...

He turned back to move when he hit his hand to the door..
Swayam- Ouchh !
Sharon- Dekh ke to chalna sikha hi nahi hai na...Dumbo !
Swayam- Arghh...chale...
Sharon chuckled and both went...

In Projector Room...all were busy gossiping no one was interested in discussing about dance or related to routines...

Swayam and Sharon observed this... Swayam was irritated by their behavior... as the gang never utilized the time in rehearsing.. all wasted their time in either gossiping about their day routine or about how to play different pranks !
Sharon looked at Swayam..she understood that what it felt when no one is interested in their life's important task.. !
She moved towards Simmi... Simmi turned back when Sharon patted her...
Simmi- Guyss.. wait..
Gang looked at her... except Vicky and Bharat..
Swayam- Agar kisi ko dance ke alawa koi topic pe baat karni ho to please Canteen poora khali hai...Vicky n Bharat...!!!

Vicky Bharat looked at his frustrated look and just embarrassingly bowed their head down !
Rey- Sharon tum kahan thi ? And Swayam ke saath aa rahi ho ?
Sharon- Vo mein yahan aa rahi thi to Swayam mil gaya isliye hum saath aa gaye...
Swayam- Hmm...

Swayam controlled and calmed himself , he used to get irritated when someone didn't get serious related to any work.. he was rest very calm and composed... but was a pure Workaholic ! So dare anyone speak about anything else not related to the work when he wanted full attention...

Swayam- Guyss... hmm so meine kuch sketches prepare kiye hai jisse hume dance ke kuch important steps ko kaise karna hai perfectly samajh ayega , okay ! So first hum Group dance se shuruat karte hai...so just keep this with you and follow !

He gave each n everyone paper sheets in which he made rough sketches
all were amazed to see how perfectly he made a step clear and meaningful just by sketching..

Bharat- Bhai...kya sahi banaya hai be...
Vicky- Seriously yaar Swayam.. tu great hai yaar.. par Swayam...
Swayam- Haan kya hua koi problem hai kya...??
He came to Vicky and asked...
Vicky- Nahi..vo Sorry yaar...
Swayam- Kis liye ?
Vicky- Hum dhyaan nahi de rahe the...isliye.
Swayam(kept his hand on his shoulders)- Thik hai yaar...but aage se dhyaan rakh..
And smiled...

All appreciated Swayam for helping in difficult steps...
Swayam- To guys..next hai ki har ek person ko jo bhi steps mein problem hai plz mujhe bata de I'll try to get some good clips jisse tumhe help mile...aur hum ek dusre ki help kar saken...
Simmi- Umm..mujhe hai...
Rinni- Mujhe to bohot se steps mein hai confusion !... and pouted..
Swayam- Hey Rinni..don't worry..hum sabko koi na koi difficulty hai jo ki co-operation hoga to solve ho jayegi...
Rinni- Hmm...

The discussion went on for some time.. and thus they went to Rehearsal hall..
Swayam- Hey tumlogo ko koi problem nahi hai na late rukne mein..?
Gang- Nahii..
Swayam- Fine.so let's start !

They started their first routine and Sharon concentrated fully on dance.. She learned many steps which were new to her in very less time...
Swayam- Ohkay guys... group dance ke liye itna thik hai..abhi thodi der ke liye break...baaki ka day after tomorrow...
Rey- Parso ? Kyu ? Kal ??
Swayam- Kal saare solos honge... but ya ek baar jitna ho gaya hai utna karenge !
Simmi- Good..then..
Sharon(to Simmi)- Hey abhi kuch important h kya ?
Simmi- Means ??
Swayam noticed them...
Swayam- Kuch problem hai Simmi ??
Simmi- Haan..means ki abhi kuch bohot important hai kya ?
Swayam- Kyun ?
Sharon- Vo mujhe jaana hai...
Swayam- Umm...nahi abhi zyada kuch nahi hai..sirf thode solos ka discussion hoga...
Sharon- To can I leave ?
Swayam- Hmm..yeah..no problem...
Sharon just smiled lightly..

Swayam went and sat on the floor resting his back on the mirror..
Sharon took her bag and hurriedly went out bidding everyone bye...
Swayam stared at her... and thought...
Swayam*in mind*- Aaj finally I saw Sharon smiling..and also..*remembers the Abondoned Corridor Scene* she laughed..a bit but yes she did.. Shayad vo apna past bhula paa rahi hai... and also usne mujhe..arghh..Dumbo bulaya.. Siren Sharon.. huh... She is back... hope so jaldi aa ho jaye pehle jaise... and thus it will help her and also to us..the gang.. Dance Competiton hai...

He came back to this world when Aashi waved her hand infront of his face..
Swayam- Umm..huh..
Aashi- Kahan kho types gaye ho..
Swayam- Umm nothing... chalo practice...

He called the ones who have solos and others to practice the difficult steps.

***
Sharon was walking alone on the road..in thoughts... when her bag fell on the road...
She bent to pick the stuff...
Sharon- Arghh...what the hell...!
She collected the stuff and stood up...she was just to move ahead when someone called her...
She turned back...

Person- Hey...
Sharon- Tum vo ?
Person- Haan...
Sharon- Let's go..mein wahi jaa rahi thi...

***
Due to fever..I couldn't write much good ..Still I hope it was not much boring..
Do Hit Like n Long Comment...
Also comment for Chap 12 n 13 those who haven't !

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Love,
Sakshi..


Edited by sakshibshah - 10 years ago

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