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vrushanharshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

next update plz [ 👏 hands jodti hu]

plz update next chp

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Marium

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Finally, i read chapter 6,7 and 8 today. I will read rest tomorrow or day after tomorrow for sure! 😳 I know you are angry at me for not reading and commenting but i had a fever and right now my knees have a high time freaking injury as i slipped quiet badly in my washroom.

So, yeah coming to the update i somewhere got to know that Khushi will die or something in chapter 5 but you did this entire story a little twisting turn and i love it! Loving that Swayam and Khushi has such an amazing and friendly bond and thank God Khushi came to know about Shivam, the world's number one bas***d.

I cry for once feeling that how helpless and scared Sharon must be feeling with Shivam and whatever he did to her, just suck. I wish he dies or something! Poor, Sharon! I really wish to see Sharon getting a bit strong as she still have the entire property to her name which is the matter of fact and if she tries than she can show Shivam that what a creep he is. Though, i think she is scared that he might hurt her family, right? Well, than she obviously can't do anything. I feel so bad for Sharon! I am noticing one thing which is that you are writing quiet nicely nowadays, more then ever. Not like you wrote bad back but now, you are improving.

The part where Swayam thought more about Khushi was my favorite because it looked practical and realistic and if Swayam would have immediately panicked about Sharon more then it looked a bit weird because after it is Khushi who is closet to him and his wife not Sharon, yet. 😳 I love realistic and practical things, as i know positive point out are allowed so i must advice to not use extra-romantic words so much. Look, every FF should look touching and not so sweet that it feels like yuck or eww reaction neither so cold that it starts feeling boring. I think you should cut down 40% of cheesy words or line from your writing style for this FF and add more of humored and practical points to it. Though, fun, joy and cuteness factor should be there without a doubt but all i am saying is that change these things in your writing in romance or tragic criteria, alright? I hope my advice will help and you didn't mind it.

I am loving this story so far and wish to see more and more interesting and humored tracks and scenes in this story. Your story and you both are really progressing and i am so happy for that. Sure, going to read this story regularly whenever you update and i am so so busy all the time still i will definitely try to comment whenever i can. This story rocks, but please when you update na? then please font ka size thora kam kar, lagta hai abhi abhar ajayega screen se! 🤣 Make Sharon a bit strong, a bit and independent!

PS: Keep writing! I will comment for chapter 9,10 and 11 soon.

-Marium

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Kabira ❤️
Awesome song selected and the way you penned it, it was really commendable. I could see and feel it. That was something really cool you tried and succeeded! 👍🏼
Then sharon swayam brave talk was nice. He helping her out with all the issues comfortably was nicely shown.
Keep it up.

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anandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Sakshi i want an update ...jaldi..

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Lubna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Sorry for the late reply!!!

It was awesome update!!

and the song was a cherry on top!!!

poor sharon she lost all hope...

thank god swayam showed up on time...

im glad that now they are friends!!

i hope their lives do change!!

great update!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!!

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

After a long time...updating the FF..hope u all remember this story !

A Recap of the whole story- Sharon-Shivam marriage...Swayam just as a friend of Khushi...which later becomes his wife... Swayam Sharon meet in Simmi's party...Swayam attracted towards Sharon..started liking her little... Tells everything to Khushi...both become best friends... Days after Sharon finds uncomfortable with Shivam...who stats tortutring her...Khushi..Shivam n Sharon meet in the party by Shekhawats...in which Swayam was at a high post...similar to his Father... Khushi knows about Shivam..n consoles Sharon...

Later..Swayam n Khushi went to Goa for relaxation...Khushi revealed the truth of Shivam to Swayam...

Both decide to save Sharon...Return trip of Goa leads to their Accident...meanwhile Shivam misbehaves with Sharon... Khushi in danger...Swayam takes help of Simmi n Nilesh in saving Sharon...n also of Ankita(1^st wife of Shivam)..Khushi dies in the days between... Court case was done by Nilesh...n Shivam was sentenced to death... Sharon n Swayam alone..take out their feelings...Swayam misses Khushi...n also Sharon heartbroken... Simmi doesn't find Sharon at home after the case... Swayam reaches Sharon's place n consoles her and advice her to not take wrong step...!

NOTE- Sharon is unaware that Swayam was behind the plan to arrest Shivam..! She only is aware of the fact that...Swayam was there in court as he argued with Shivam...!

Swayam is a year elder to Sharon..Sharon is 22 n he is 23... Simmi is same as Sharon n Nil is 23...as Nilesh n Sim are couple so Simmi is aware of Swayam n all are in same college except Sharon...

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Next chap! Sorry for any mistakes...
N wanna dedicate this Chapter to Shubhi...here u go my Charger..!
A Very Very Happy Birthday ! Specially for YOU...!

As soon as Swayam went...she sat on the bed...and...
Sharon*to herself*- Shayad Swayam sahi tha...but ab meine ek disicion le liya hai... Khud ke liye jeena na...koi kitna bhi kahe...I'll not be dependent on any...and will not allow any person to hurt me..Everyone will now come through a diffent Sharon...not the Fun loving but a serious and tuff Sharon...except some... The saying is true- Koi kisi ka nahi hota...sab apne liye jeete hain... so will follow the same... the independent Sharon Rai Prakash...or just Sharon.!

She picked up her phone and called Simmi...
Simmi- Hey..Sharon...
Sharon- Yeah...I am safe...
Simmi(concerned)- Gosh ! Are you perfect...?
Sharon- Hmm...Simmi...
Simmi(found odd)- Umm Sharon..where are you?
Sharon- I am safe..just meet me tomorrow near the Beach..
Simmi- Yeah..fine..at 12pm..
Sharon- Ohkay...take care...bye...!
Simmi- Ohkay...u too...

***
Swayam was relaxed that Sharon listened to his talks and understood... He went to his room...
It was late so he just slept...!

Next Morning:
Swayam- Mom...
Nandini- Haan...Swayam yeh lo breakfast...
Swayam had his breakfast...silence was there...
He got up after having it...and was about to go when...
Nandini- Swayam...vo Dad ki medicine le aana...ye lo list...
Swayam- Mom...Dad theek hai na...?
Nandini- Haan but he is weak...vahi heart problem...
Swayam- Ohh...Mom please take care...Mein Office jaane se pehle hi de dunga...

Swayam went to College...
***

Sharon was here with Simmi..
Simmi- Haan..Sharon...
Sharon- Vo..meine yeh batane ke liye bulaya ki I have decided to continue my studies...
Simmi- That's good Sharon...but...
Sharon- I know tum puchogi ki College and all...so It's St. Loius...!
Simmi(happy)- Wow ! Amazing...Our College...We'll be together...
Sharon- Tum to..Out of India...
Simmi- All cancelled...Permanently India..!
Sharon(smiled)- Thank you...
Simmi- Let's go...College...
Sharon- Sab honge ?
Simmi- Ahaan...no...aaj Holiday hai...n come na...I'll show you the College...and kal se classes...
Sharon- Yeah !

***
In College:

Swayam,Nilesh,Rinni,Rey,Tanni,Aashi are Seniors...
Simmi,Amar,Vicky,Neha,Bharat are juniors...
But all are in D3 team..so are close friends... Sharon will be there in juniors now !

Sharon n Simmi enetered...Sharon liked the Campus...
both were walking in the corridor...

Simmi- Hey..Sharon tum yahan Corridor ghumo..I'll be back in 10min...nilesh is calling.! And please hold these stuff...
Sharon- Ohkay...!
Simmi went after handling her the books.n files n bag... Sharon was walking around the Corrider...
She was going straight when some boy collided with her...She in turn fall down on the floor and also the boy...
Sharon- Uff...what the hell man...
The boy- Hey...meri galti nahi hai...
Sharon shot her head up and faced him...showing finger...
Sharon- Don't shout...you'll have to pay for it...
Boy- Huh...pagal ho tum...
The boy got up and went away...
Sharon- Hey..you..listen...hey...huh..that boy...huh !
She started collecting the stuff...and looked up...
She found someone...looking at her...
Sharon ignored and was about to get up when that person stretched hand as to help her...
Sharon- I can do it myself...
Boy- Bohot saara stuff hai...
Sharon- I said I can do it myself..Swayam...just don't need anyone...
Saying this she got up...and followed her route...hesitatingly...

Swayam found it weired..he shrugged his shoulders...
Someone tapped his shoulder...he looked back...
Swayam- Hey Simmi...
Simmi- Heya ! Tum yahan aaj College mein...
Swayam- Umm...haan...VP se milna tha...D3 team ke bare mein...
Simmi- Ohh !

Simmi heard some girls n boys talking about the collision...
Simmi- Waise kuch hua kya abhi...sab kya batein kar rahe hai...?
Swayam- Haan...vo Sharon...
Simmi- Kya hua ?
Swayam- Sharon se ek ladka bhid gaya tha to...she fell...with the stuff and also they boy...and She...
He was cut by Simmi...
Simmi- Acha...koi baat nahi...ye sab hota rehta hai...pehle bhi uske saath aisa hua hai...vo ignore karti hai...sorry bolke chali jaati hai..nothing much...ye log itni baate kar rahe hai..I thought something great...
Swayam lost somewhere...
Simmi- Hey...you there...kya hua ?
Swayam- nah..Sharon kuch nahi bolti ?
Simmi- Vo Siren rarely hi banti hai...
She laughed...and so Swayam faked smiled...
Simmi- Mujhe Sharon ko College dikhana hai..I'll go...you carry on...
Swayam- Yeah fine...!

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Sharon asked a girl the way to Washroom..and as indicated she went there...
Sharon*to herself*- Mujhe aisehi behavior rakhna padega...I'll have to...I just can't be normal... This shell will be forever... but still I should have said sorry...meri hi galti thi...I was walking straight but not looking straight... no...Arghh ! It's tuff but...

Her thoughts were disturbed by Simmi
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Swayam went to VP's cabin...where he talked about some Cultural events and all...
He came out of the cabin and went to Rehearsal hall...
He sat on floor and thought...
Swayam*thoughts*- What is happening...ek taraf ghar mein Dad...ki health...dusri taraf Promise..mein kaise handle karun...aaj Sharon College mein aayi...Simmi ke saath...I suppose she joined our College...weired hai Simmi ne kaha Sharon is calm in these type of situation but what all saw was not lie... she was furious...and no help...she stood by herself...and walked hesitantly...! Sharon ke bare mein ek baat kehna difficult hai... I'l have to go deep..but mera dimag..arghh...saath hi nahi de raha hai... What to do..no one is there jisse help le saku...shayad Simmi...Nilesh...but not so early...! And now I need to focus on the cultural event taking place in a month...n also I'll have to do something for my Family at this state...unko meri zyada zarurat hai...!

He just closed his eyes and took a deep breath...n mouthed sorry Khushi...n Sharon...

***
Simmi- Sharon..tum yahan ho and mein kab se tumhe dhund rahi thi...
Sharon- Umm..vo..dress kharab ho gayi thi...
Simmi- Acha..chalo tumhe rehearsal hall dikhati hun...
Sharon- Hmm...

They moved to Rehearsal Hall...Swayam saw them coming from far away...he stood up and went outside...
They didn't notice him...
Sharon- Dance...
Simmi- Yeah...Sharon...your's..mine..passion.. Dance...
Sharon- I miss Dance...
Simmi- But ab aur nahi...you'll also Dance...
Sharon- Huh...?
Simmi- See...mere friends...jo ki ab tumhare bhi hai...(Gang) are in one group D3..despite being Seniors/juniors...we are D3...
Sharon- D3...??
Simmi- it's Dil...Dosti ...Dance...and now ab tum bhi hamare group mein rahogi...
Sharon- Mein...?
Simmi- Are don't worry...Swayam is the Cultural lead so I'll tell about your dance to him...and then will talk to VP...
Sharon- Are you sure...they'll allow...?
Simmi- Yeah...be positive...and I'll talk tomorrow only...
Sharon- Hmm...
Simmi- Acha..let's go...
Sharon- Hmm...

Sharon and Simmi went back home...and Swayam also...
***

The next morning...whole gang was present there...except Sharon and Simmi...
Vicky- Guys...Simmi nahi aayi ??
Rinni- Haan...meine 5min pehle phone lagaya tha to usne kaha 10 min mein aayegi..
Vicky- Ohh.. acha guys..tab tak kuch order karte hain...
Rey- Hmm..fine...
Rey asked everyone about what they wish to eat...
Rey- Swayam...tu kya khaega ??
Swayam gave no response...
Rey- Swayam...
Still no response...
Neha tapped his shoulders...he looked to her...
Swayam- Umm..haan..Neha...
Neha- Vo Rey kabse asking kya eating tum...??
Swayam- Rey...mujhe kuch nahi khana...
Rey- Hey...aisa nahi chalega yaar...
Swayam(pleading look)- Please...you guys carry on...
Rey- Okay...
Rey went to give order...just then Simmi arrived...with Sharon...
Simmi- Hey guys...!
All looked there...and were amazed...
ViHa- Sharon...wow...
and a smile krept on their lips...Simmi n Sharon sat there with them...
Sharon- Hy guys...
Swayam was surprised not to see Sharon here...but was surprised seeing her dress up...
She wore Kurti yesterday and usually in party n all whenever he saw she was in Saree...but now...neither in suit nor any long top..she was in jeans n top..with stilettos...Which was little akward for Swayam...and also Simmi...

Swayam shooed away his thoughts...
Simmi- Guys...now she will be with us...
All except Swayam- Wow...yayy ! He only smiled...
Rey came..

They had their food...
Swayam- You all carry on...mein RH mein hun..
Without listening to anyone's reply..he straight away went...

Nilesh- Guys...we should also go for Rehearsals...
Simmi- Yeah...mujhe kuch important baat bhi karni hai...
Rey- Fine...lets go...

They moved to rehearsal hall...and were amazed yet upset...except Sharon... She got confused as to what happened to everyone...
Sharon- Simmi...what happened tum log Swayam ko dekh kar aise looks kyun de rahe ho ?
Vicky- Swayam..! Swayam Dance..nahi kar raha hai...!
Rinni- Haan...vo khali baitha hai floor pe...earplugs ke saath...and even not listening songs...
Nilesh- Vo aisa hai hi nahi...jo Dance na kare...songs na sune...
Rey- Guys...he is hurt yaar... So let's cheer him up...what say...
Smile played on everyone's lips...
Tanni- Yeah !

Everyone entered...
Rey- Hey...Swayam...tu baitha hai...chal let's dance yaar...
Vicky- Haan yaar...bohot kha liya hai...
Neha- Mera Babu...bura feeling for you...
Simmi- Seriously...Rey...not good haan...
Rey- Mein..meine kya kiya...??
Nilesh- Saale...tune hi to itna khilaya...har order double kar diya...

Swayam was sitting and watching all this expressionless... Rinni indicated Simmi about this...
Meanwhile...
Simmi*to Sharon*- Umm...kya Karen...Swayam is still not in mood...
Sharon- Hmm...aisa karo...tum group dance ki baat karo...
Simmi- Let me think...!

Rey- Abe...yeh kya kar rahe ho...oye dur...
Vicky- Aaj to tu gaya...
Simmi- Guyss...! Stop yaar...tum log shaant ho jao...mujhe ek important baat karna hai...
Rey(confused)- Kaisi baat ??
Simmi with eyes indicated that I'll handle'
Simmi- Umm..Swayam...
Swayam was behind so she turned to face him... Swayam stood up...
Swayam- Yeah...?
Simmi- Let us settle down first...

All of them settled in a circle...
Swayam- Simmi...now tell...
Simmi- Jaise kit um CS ho and Sharon hamare College mein aaj hi aayi hai...
Swayam nodded...
Simmi- And...she loves Dance...it's her passion...so kya ye hamare Dance team ka hissa ban sakti hai ??
Swayam- Dance...! I mean Wow...cool...vaise bhi we have 11 members (Tanni is also the part) so it will be great we'll have 12 members...
Neha- Wow...now hamari team full complete...happy na ?
Rey- Yeah...amazing..Sharon dance wow...
Everyone cheered...Sharon smiled at this...
Swayam- Guys guys guys...wait...mujhe VP ko batana padega and Sharon ka naam include karwana padega...D3 team mein...
Simmi- To...abhi jao...
Swayam- Ohkay...so Simmi and Sharon...do come with me...

In VP's Cabin...
VP-So..are you sure...Sharon match kar paegi D3 level ko...Swayam???
Swayam- Yeah Sir...
Sharon- I'll try to be perect Sir...
Simmi- And sir...she had been awarded for Best Dance many times...
VP- So...Congratulations...Sharon...you are member of D3 team...!
Sharon smiled...and lightly shook hands with VP...

3 of them came out...
All for Sharon- Yeahh !!!!

Hey Guys..Scroll down For The Next Chapter...

They all went up to the Rehearsal Hall...
Nilesh- Wohoo..
Sharon was smiling continuously on the fact that She in in the Team..D3...and also that everyone is so happy...
Everyone Congratulated her...
Boys shook hands...Girls hugged her...
At last Swayam came towards her...and...just spoke..
Swayam- Congratulations Sharon..Welcome into our College and also D3 Team...
She smiled...but a thought came into her mind that why he only didn't shook hands and any thing...just spoke...
She just shooed off the thoughts...

Rey- Umm.so..what's next huh ?
Amar- D...se...Dil...
Bharat- D..se...Dosti...
Nilesh was to speak but just hit Swayam by his shoulders...
Swayam- Hmm...and D...se Dance... and smiled...
Nilesh- Yoo...

Swayam- I'll show you the routine...as Sharon is new so she'll have a look...then you all Dance...
All smiled...
Simmi- Hey...what..You all Dance...tum ??
Swayam- I am not in my best mood...so...
Rinni- Koi bahana nahi chalega...
Taani- Haan...agar aap nahi Dance karoge to hum sab bhi nahi...
Everyone- Haan haan...

Sharon felt good about how close friends they are...and are in unity...and how much they support each other...so as such normally she also spoke Yes...
Swayam heard it...but still his mind...was not supporting...
Simmi- Please...Captain ji...
Neha(pouting)- Please...Swayam...you dancing na hamare saath...
Swayam- Acha..baba...okay...friends ke liye...kuch bhi...

All shared a group hug...
They watched the Routine..and Swayam made her understand about every position... She got it very well...
Sharon- You all are amazing...
All clapped...n cheered...

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(Shubhi...double dhamaka...! )

Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

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All got ready for the Group Dance ...
Sharon learned the main steps and Swayam made all stand in their respective position..
(This is not the Event Dance..Swayam hasn't told about it to anyone)

Song played was Dhoom Machale...
All were enegetic...Sharon in between forgot the steps but still managed to match the steps followed...
Swayam was dancing in full mood...Dance was medicine for them...
As there were no moves in which Boy n Girl have a lift or something...so Sharon was comfortable...
After the end of Dance...

Bharat- Kya Dance kara yaar Sharon...faadu...
Simmi- Aah...seriously it was good attempt...
Sharon- Itna acha nahi kiya tha...thanks to you all...
Rey- It's okay Sharon..you are good one...
Swayam(serious)- Guys...ek baat kehni hai...
Vicky- Oye...Swayam...itna serious mode pe kyun hai...koi problem hai kya...?
Swayam- Guys...vo...(cheeringly) ham ek..Dance Event ka offer hame aaya hai..guyss !
All were surprised...
Gang- Yeahh !!!!!
Nilesh- Abe..ye news tu abhi bata raha hai...?
Swayam- Sorry...bhul gaya tha...Dance karte waqt yaad aaya...
Rey- Kab hai ye Event...??
Swayam- Dates abhi nahi aayi hai...but within a month...
Amar- Ohh..matlab daldi hame tayaali shulu kalni palegi...(Ohh...matlab jaldi hame tayari shuru karni padegi)
Rinni- Haann...ab ?
Swayam- Hey..see aaj jo abhi hamne Dance kiya...vo acha tha...uski help se ham baaki ka routine set karenge...what say ?
Taani- Yeah..but sirf Group Dance hi hai...??
Swayam- Umm...nahi..isme 2 solos and also 2 duets hain..
Rey- So...yeh to decide karo...kon karega ?
Swayam- Solos ke liye...I think Taani...as Classical ?
Vicky- Great...!
Taani- Okay...
Simmi- Second solo...Aashi...
Rinni- Haan...good..
Aashi- Mujhe dar types lagta hai...to nahi...koi aur types kar lo...
Rinni- Umm...Bharat...
Amar- Haan...sahi hai...
Bharat- Are...faadu dance karunga...
All laughed...
Swayam- So it's decided about solos...Bharat n Taani...now Duets ??
Rey- Simmi n Nilesh...
Nilesh- Hum...? Simmi...?
Swayam- Are its good yaar...
Simmi- Okay...to fir next kon...?
Neha- You and Sharon...
Sharon- What ! Mein...?? No..
Vicky- Please yaar Sharon...hume pata hai tum kitna acha dance karti ho...please...
All pleaded her...except Swayam...
Swayam- Will you ??
Sharon- Umm...I..I'll...try...
Rey- Good...so ...Sharon... you try okay...and agar confirm ho jaata hai...to...fir final...
Swayam- Ohkay...so if now ?
Sharon*in mind*- Abhi..I mean sab hai yaha ! Kuch galati ho gayi to...par karna to padega... *to everyone*- I don't mind...
Rey- So..let me on the music...

The music started... *Khuda Jaane*
Firstly it was only Swayam's part...then after it was Sharon's... then Swayam asked her to hold his hand... She lightly kept her hand...

Simmi- Ek baat mein bolu..Sharon ko hesistant feel ho raha hai...so I think inhe Dance karne dete hai...hum bahar chalet hai..
Vicky- you are right..let's go...

Rey indicated this to Swayam and all went out...Swayam nodded...
Sharon had to twirle and bend down...on his hand...
She did twirle...and also bent...Swayam sensed something weired...
She came up...and immediately left his hand...and moved back...
Sharon- Vo...
Her eyes became moist...
Swayam- Sharon...
Sharon- Vo..mein...nahi...abhi nahi...kar paungi...I...
Swayam- Hey..I understand...

She moved and sat resting her backlon the high mirror...Swayam came and sat beside her...at an distance...
Sharon- Mujhse nahi...nahi...ho raha...
Swayam- Just relax...it's okay...
Swayam realized the uncomfortableness and fear in her...
Swayam- See...I know...so...baad mein...
Sharon(faced him..n little weired)- Kya..kya baad mein...?? Tum aisa nahi keh sakte..I don't know..ki mujhse kabhi ye hoga ya nahi..samjhe ! And jo meine face kiya hai...vo...kaise kiya hai...tum kuch nahi jaante.,,.,so please...kuch mat bolo... mein nahi chahti kisi ka ehsaan...
Swayam was shocked...at her loud voice and changed behavior...

Swayam- Hey...mein samajh sakta hun...(remembers khushi) zindagi mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai...and kabhi...bhi...
Sharon looked at him...he was lost...She remembered about Khushi...and felt bad for what she spoke out...
Sharon*in mind*- Meine kuch zyada hi bol diya...Khushi...uski wife...ohh...and ye meri badi mistake hai so mein apna fake ego is baat pe nahi laa sakti...I have to say sorry...Itna rude...nahi...
Sharon- Vo..I am s..sorryy...
Swayam- Hey..don't be...it's okay...
Sharon- Mein...helpless feel kar rahi hun...nahi chahti kuch...kuch bhi nahi...
Swayam- You have to move on...in Life...
Sharon- I don't want to...mein jaisi hun...thik hun...
Swayam- Agar kabhi tum chaho to mujhse baat kar sakti ho...friend ke taur par..I'll help you...
Sharon- Fr..friend...mein...
Swayam- So...?
Sharon- I'll try...kyoki...c
Swayam- It's fine...so...take your time...
Sharon- Hmm...thanks...and baaki sab ko bula lo...
Swayam- Hmm...

All came in...
Simmi- So...is it final...?
Swayam- Thoda time lagega...
Rey- Ohkay...so...fir...abhi vaise bhi time hai...baaki routines prepare kar lete hain...
Nilesh- Haan...it's fine...
All were satisfied and went to attend classes...

In classes...
Simmi messaged a text to the gang except Swayam n Sharon...
It read...
Guys..hume pata hai ki Sharon aur Swayam ka mood acha nahi hai..so just to cheer up mood... aaj party karte hain... College ke paas vo Cled hai...waha par...is it okay ?

All were okay with it.so thus it was decided...Simmi then messaged both Swayam n Sharon about it..
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Sharon- Simmi...party ? No..yaar...
Simmi- No excuse...you'll have to...thodi der ke liye !
Sharon- But..
Simmi- But vut kuch nahi...hum chal rahe hai..saath mein.. and abhi mujhe jaana hai apne ghar mein aati hun tumhe pick karne..so tayaar rehna please...around 7:30...
Sharon- Okay.. bbyee...

Simmi was happy that Sharon agreed...here in Swayam's house...
Rey- Hey...chal na yaar.kya tu bhi...
Swayam- Tu...samjh na yaar..
Nilesh- Dekh tu chalega to tujhe acha bhi lagega...yaar...
Swayam- Tum log samjhte nahi ho...
Rey- Acha thik hai...jaldi aajaana ghar...
Swayam- Thik hai to fir...shaa 7:30 bje mil tu hume Club mein...
Swayam- Okay...

Swayam hugged Rey n Nil...and they both went to their home...

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All gathered outside the Club...
Vicky- Let's go...and Dhamaka karte hain..guyss.!

All came inside...there was no one except some 2 or 3 girls boys...as Simmi booked it for some time.the Ground Floor..
but the Upper was loud with music...and Songs...

All sat in a circle on chairs... and started to play games... They all were enjoying...Swayam was missing Khushi...a little...
but to show everyone he was happy he smiled...and laughed...

After some time...they went to Drinks Corner... It was separate one... Girls only Soft Drinks...but for boys it was Wine...and soft ones...
Boys were in limit...they were aware of girls being here...and also health and all...

While Sharon was having Coke...tears formed in her eyes...which were filled with hatred and anger and hurt... this all reminded her of the Party which Shivam had...in their house...messed up...
She coughed thinking about this...

Simmi- Hey...you okay...?
Sharon- Uh..yeah...yeah !
Simmi- Hmm...you want another like Fanta or something ?
Sharon- Hey..no..it's okay...
Simmi smiled...

There was high loud music playing upstairs...
Bharat- Kitna jor se bhajate hai be...saale kaan kharab ho jayenge...
Aashi- Hmm...aap sahi types bol rahe ho...
Taani- Umm...ek idea hai...aisa karte hain...songs unke..but...
Neha- But...Dance hamara..
Rinni- Haan...ye acha hai...mazaa aayega...
Rey- So...Dance...Dance n Dance...

All moved to the Dance side...
Song was "Party On My Mind"

They were enjoying like anything...the other people watched them...and clapped for them...
Girl- Kya dance hai inka yaar...wow...
Boy- Jhakkas hai...hum to kuch nahi hai inke aage...
Girl- Awesum guys...

After some time they also joined...
They danced like maniac for some more dances like song was..."Party abhi baaki hai" n "One..two..three...four..."

After that they came at halt...all sat...sweating...
Rey- Refresh ho gaye yaar...
Simmi- Yeah...enjoyed a lot...kyu Sharon...?
Sharon- Hu...haan...
Smiled just to show that she was happy...She didn't danced much..just slowly...

Some boys from upper floor came down...and saw the Gang...
Boy1- Abe...dekh to zaraa...yahan hai kon...booking karwayi thi...??
Boy2- Haan be Raj...chal puchte hai kisi se...

Here...in the D3 Gang...
Swayam- Guyss...mujhe thoda jaana hai..so mein chalta hun...
Amar- Itne jaldi...? Abhi to silf 9 ho raha hai...hum to yahan aul time ke liye the...
Swayam- Haan...guys...Dad ki thodi health thik nahi hai...so...
Rinni- Ohh...it's okay...

All stood up to bid him bye...
They were standing in a group...Swayam was behind Sharon...
All were discussing about College...and also Swayam was talking with Rey about Event...

Raj(Boy1) called the Bar tender...
Raj- Kon hai ye log..?
Bar T.- Sir..ye College students hai..and party ke liye aaye the...
Boy2- Abe..ye to hum samjh gaye kuch aur pata hai..?
Bar T.- Nahi...

The other boys of the group noticed the D3 members... When they got a shock...
Boy3- Raj..rajj !!!!
Raj- Kya ???
Boy3- Vo..dekh...waha...

They indicated to some people in D3 gang...
Raj- Acha...to aadarshwaadi log khade hai yahan to...aur dusre ka kya kehna...chhutkara kya mil gaya to maze udaane chale...
Boy2- Oye Bar Tender...sunn...
He came to him...
Boy2- Vo...jo khade hai na...unko...*** jaa ab...

He spoke something to the Bar Tender...which he followed...
Bar tender went to D3 gang and offered them Drinks...
Swayam refused it and just bid everyone bye and was going out...when the Raj's group noticed him and clutched their fingers into fist...!

The Gang members...some had that Drink bot some didn't... Sharon firstly refused but then some thought made her have the drink...rest girls had only orange..

Raj- Ye bohot bhaari padega ab...
Boy2- Ek teer se do nishane marne ka samay aa gaya hai...
Raj- Saale...panga liya bhi to kisse...S..Shivam...se...vo nahi to ab hum hai...na... Shivam's Stabbers...!

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Sakshi...

Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago