SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14* - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaRon_rocks

38+ likes are done so tym to update 2 chapters😈😆

Updates were fab..now plz make swaron be atleast friends😔

(sry for the small , lame and late comment..update soon)

-Veronica



Only one update will be there..!! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updates..sharon's feelings were nicely penned down..
waiting for next part.. specially swaron
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Posted: 12 years ago

Next Update is here
Sorry for the Grammatical mistakes.
Enjoy..!!


Recap- Sharon Khushi meet , Shivam torture , Swayam Khushihalf talk about Shivam



Swayam- Dad, now..in 2 hours?? Aapne subah kyon nahi bataya ???
Rajeev- Are.Subah mein batane wala tha but tum Khushi ke sath college gaye theand fir mujhe yad aaya islie meine tum dono ko abhi bula liya
Swayam- Oh..
Nandini- Khushi, jao tum Packing kar lo
Khushi- Ji Ma
Swayam- Chalo..mein bhi aata hoon

Khushi and Swayam went into their Room
Khushi was packing the bagwhen
Swayam- 2 din ka hi tour haibut fir bhi tum mera Laptop rakh lena..
Khushi- Thik hai..aur kuch ?
Swayam- Nahi , acha mein aata hoon Shower leke

He went to take a shower

Khushi packed the stuffHe came out..

Khushi- Meine saari packing kar li haitum check kar lo..kuch reh to nahi gaya hai na ???

Swayam- Haan fine..

He was checking all the stuff

Swayam- Vaisekal tum kuch batane wali thi mujhe raat ko ???
Khushi- Umm..haan Swayam..vo Shivam

She was about to say something when.
Nandini knocked
Khushi opened the door
Nandini- Packing ho gayi ???
Swayam- Haan Mom
Nandini- Vo..abhi tumlogon ko jaldi nikal na padegaOffice bhi jaana hai..
Swayam- Office ??
Nandini- Hmm.,Rajeev ko tumse kuch kaam hai.
Swayam nodded.and Nandini went out
Khushi- Aisa karte haihum is matter pe Goa mein hi baat karte hain
Swayam- Ohkay fine

***

They reached Goa.(by road)
They booked Room in the Hoteland firstly took rest for sometime

Swayam's father made them go to Goa as they wanted Swayam to get some relaxationas he from weeks was so busy that he hardly took restCollege with Office work
Work load was too muchKhushi helped Swayam as a very good friendin the works which she could handle.

***

In Mumbai:

Sharon was resting..on bedwhen Shivam came back from Office
Shivam- Babeshow was your day my Jaan ????
Sharon- No response
Shivam- Sharon ! (Shouted)

She looked back.
Sharon- Hmm..???
Shivam- Mujhe attitude dikha rahi ho ???Ek bar mein kyon jawab nahi diya hun ??
Sharon- Mera naam jab bologe tabhi sunungi na.

Shivam held her wrist
Shivam- Acha !! Sharon..mujhe jawaab de rahi hai vo bhi Attitude mein..nah babes..you have to suffer.
Sharon- Leave me..Shivam(screamed)

Shivam left her all sudden.She in mind was shocked as what happened to the Torturuous Shivam!
Shivam- Go out.!! Dinner chahiye , go fasttt
Sharon- Huh.

Without saying anything she went to the Kitchen
Shivam*In mind*- Wait and watch Sharonaaj ki Raat tumhare zindagi ki sabse Yaadgaar (memorable) Raat hogijust WAIT n WATCH

At Dinner Table:
Shivam- Bring me water

She stood up and brought water for him.
Sharon- Yeh Lo
Shivam- Hmm..rakh do yahan( rudely )

They had Dinner..
Sharon was going upstairs when she fell down from stairs
she became unconscious
He was damn Happy.he picked her in his arms.and went into Bedroom

***

Swayam- Haan , tell
Khushi- Vo..Shivamis not a good person
Swayam- But how do you know ??
Khushi- Couse when I lived with my friend Ankitain hostelshe was in relationship with Shivam
Swayam- Hmm
Khushi- ThenShivam used her just for Moneyfor this He MARRIED her
She was soo weak.he used to beat herand she was all helpless she told her parents but then he KILLED them
Swayam- He killed ???
Khushi- Yaa (she had tears in her eyes)
Swayam- Bechari Ankita.
Khushi broke down in tearsSwayam hugged her..
Swayam- Heyrelaxaisa karte hai hum ye topic abhi break pe rakhte hain..thoda bahar chalo..you'll feel good
They broke the hug..
They went to some tourist place in Goa

***

WARNING: This part is not to hurt anyone's feelings. Purely fictional.

In Bedroom.

Shivam placed her on the bed
Shivam- My gorgeous babes
He caressed her cheeksand leaned on herstill not touching her body
He came downrubbed his hands on her Shoulder.nape
By this he fully leaned over her..
She was half conscious..so felt some weight on her.. she tried to open her eyesand saw the Blur figure in front of her.
Sharon- T..t..tu..tum

Next momenther eyes opened in shock.

Sharon- Sh..shivammm !
Shivam- Awwbabesyou have a beautiful figure.just want to have you
Sharon- LeavemeSh..shivam !(she shouted)

He suddenly placed his lips on her.She was so helpless.she controlled herselfshe did not responseda bit also
He bit her lower lipwhich cause the blood to come..She was in pain.as when she fell from stairs her head got injured and blood was flowing from there
She pushed himhe fell back on bedbut then grabbed her hair
She shouted in pain.
Shivam- Nonot that easy
He pulled her
Shivam kissed her cheeksher lips , made his way to Shouldersthen up to her chest but Sharon slapped himHis anger knew no bounds
He placed a kiss just above her cleavage which made Sharon screamon top of her voice but Shivam was cheap.

He slapped herand placed a bite on her nape.
She cried..only scream..shouts and cries were over the time..after that she didn't had courage to speak a bit she went numball paleall loose..

He didn't made her HIS.as his passion was just to take money and enjoy feeling her and leave herShe was just 'use and throw' for him !!

She became unconscious , he left her..his desires metbut not to forgetthe main reason Grab the RaiPrakash Propertystill he was carving for this

***

After a Day , in Hotel
Swayam- Khushihum one hour se niklenge..tum sab saamaan pack kar lo.
Khushi- VoSwayam
She was sounding bit disturbed.
Swayam- Khushi ! ?
Khushi- Mujhe tumse bohot zaruri baat karni hai.
Swayam- Haan bolo
Khushi- Vo kalmeine tumhe bataya than a ki Shivam ki wife
Swayam- Ohh..yahaanye batao Shivam abhi uske saath rehta hai???
Khushi- Nahi ! Vo AnkitaNagpur mein rehti haiShivam usse ab baat nahi karta..
Swayam- Ohhmatlab yaha Shivam akela rehta hai
Khushi- Uske Mom Dad yahan nahi rehte butvo akela nahi rehta.
Swayam- Huh??
Khushi- Apni wife ke saath rehta hai
Swayam- What !!! Means2nd ??
Khushi- Haanaurvo
Swayam- Are you fine Khushi ?
Khushi- Umm.vo..uski wife.ShhSharon hai.

Swayam stood up..in shock.!!!
Khushi also

Swayam- Aa..are you serious????
Khushi- Haan Swayam!! Sharon ka husband Shivam hi hai
Swayam- Meansvo..
Khushi- Swayamvo Party me mein Sharon se mili aur fir usne mujhe uske husband yaani Shivam se milwaya
Swayam- To kya Shivamab bhi ???
Khushi- I so feel ki Sharon is uncomfortable with him

His phone rang.
Swayam- Hello Mom.
Nandini- Kaise ho tumlog ??
Swayam- Thik hai mom
Nandini- Kab nikal rahe ho ???
Swayam- HanCar mein baith hi rahe hai.
Nandini- Beta.jaldi hi nikloraat ho jaegi bohot..fir darr bhi laga rahega..
Swayam- Ji..Mom nikal hi rahe hain.
Nandini- Thik hai..bye

Call ended.

Swayam- Hume abhi hi nikalna hoga.

In Car(Way to Mumbai):

Khushi- Swayam..meine islie hi uska no. le liya hai ki kabhi zarurat pade.
Swayam- Hmm

He was shockedhe was not in mood to talk.
Khushi- Swayam..

She shook him
Swayam- Umm..haan..!
Khushi- Kahan kho gaye ??
Swayam- VahiSharon Simmi ke party mein bhi disturbed lag rahi thi.
I hope she is fine..there with HIM.
Khushi- Hmm..
Swayam !!!

***

Shivam- Sharonacha hua tum paani lene chali gayi..aur meine usme pills mila di thi.

Agar nahi jaati na totumhe wahi se utha karconscious haalat mein hi..tumhara__

He laughed
Shivam- You are a helpless chick Sharon RaiPrakash
Tum ab wahi karogi jo mein chahunga
Tum ghut ghut ke jiogiHar pal tumhe marna padegaaisehijaise aaj

***

In Hospital:

Doctor- Jaldi is patient ko OT mein shift karofast.aur ise bhi

Nurse- DoctorIs patient ki haalat bohot critical hoti ja rahi hai.please
Doctor- Ohkay!!

Doctor went to that person
Doctor- Jaldi blood ka intezaam karo.aur Dr. Mehta ko bulao..fast !!
Nurse- Ya

She ran towards the Blood store
Dr. Mehta was called
He was attending the other.

***

Hope you all liked it...
Now keep guessing..the NEXT part stuff...
Shower your comments...n please HIT LIKE...

PS- Plz unres ur pending comments..pleaseee...

Love,
Sakshi..







Edited by sakshibshah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres!!
*for the 4th tym!! gosh if this tym the post doesn't gets edited na...den forget that i hv resed!!😡😡*
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Ahmazing update!!😃 Luved it throughout!!❤️
swayam n khushi on a holiday!! Kash khushi ki jagah sharon hoti!!
But khushi is too sweet...kitni concerned hai sharon k liye!!😊
swayam ka reaction on knowing about shivam.😳😳
he is so much concerned n worried!!
jaldi se uss chee-vam ka kuch kar!!😡😡

how can shivam be so cheap?!?!?!?!
argghh!!!😡😡😡
hate him!! poor sharon...!!😭😭 uska fayda uthya!!
uske close aaya!!😭😭
chee..kitna cheap h shivam!! sirf paiso k liye ye sab!!😡😡
bichari sharon...pata nhi kab tak tu use uss shivam ka torture jhelne degi!
kuch kar iss shivam ka..!!
bhaga ise yahan se...nhi to tujhe maar dalungi!!😡

jaldi se swaron ko friends bana...fir close friends bana...n then kuch aur..!!😳
uff...pata nhi kab tu swaron ko saath me karegi..its alreay the 7th part!!😭

superb update...!!
amazingly written!!😳
luvd it!!❤️❤️
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Edited by d3fan4eva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing FF loved it
please continue soon
read it all in one go..
amazing...
do pm when you update the next time...

and your other works as well
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Posted: 12 years ago

UnRes

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Strawberry 🤗

Sorry sorry itna late unres karnekeliye but mein kya karti yaar mein bhool gayi 😔 anyway coming to update...as usual it was super amazing...really loving ur writing style yaa...mind blowing :D Loving Khushi's character, the way she is concerned for Sharon and Swayam's reaction after Khushi's told him about Shivam and Sharon, he was so worried 😳 Hope to see Swaron togther in this FF soon 😳

Ohh godd i feel lyk killing dat Shivam yaa..he is soo cheap...ufff he came close to Sharon arghh just hate him, i m just waiting ki tu usko FF se kab gayab kardengi..maar dal ya jail mein dal but iss FF mein se hatta 😡 m feeling very bad for Sharon 😭 hmm...hope Swayam and Khushi will help Sharon sort out all the problems n hope dat Shivam just gets out of their way...uff

N last part of the update was confusing...Doctor...nurse...who's d pateint? 😕 m totally confused and tujhe bhi yeh update yahi end karna tha nah?? hope everything will be fine...umm...ab jaldi se next chapter update kar warna teri kher nahi 😛

Luv u...muahhh ❤️ ❤️ 🤗

Edited by --Simren-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update i hate shivam in this update how can someone be this cheap and disgusted
anyways glad to know that swayam comes to know about Shivam's truth hope swaron ab jaldi se mile thnx for the pm
do update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
niccc. ...waiting 4 nxt... and shivam was sych a cheep...


tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bit sad abt sharon bt nw swayam knws abt sharon...hope he help her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
shivam 😡
mera mann karta hai iska khoon kar du idiot

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