SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14*

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

kamakshi23

@kamakshi23

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Hey Sakshi...

Double Updates...good good yaar...

Chap 5-

Swayam Khushi- nyc to see the FRIENDSHIP bond...

Flashback was like Goshh Shivam...YEWWW...irritating...

Sharon's ager pain...acha hua sab bhadaas nikal di usne...but tehn Shivam...

it was nyc ki Swayam told Khushi abt sharon...n his feelings...khushi is so understanding...

Aftr flashback...

Sharon's pain was awesumly penned...

Swayam Khushi married...!!!

Simmi Sharon...Swayam tensed...

Guds update...

Chap 6-

SwaRon met at Party but fr so less tym...

Nyc that Sharon shared abt Shivam to Khushi...

Khushi knows Shivam...howww ?????

Hope Khushi reveals this to Swayam...n we get our SwaRon...

Shivam tortures Sharon...Arggghhh!!

SwaRon komilwao yaar..

Fab updates...

update nxt son...

Ruby...

Edited by kamakshi23 - 12 years ago

Quote

Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Swayam's married :-( phew him and Khushi are just friends :-)

I feel really bad for Sharon :-( I hope things get better for her

I really want to know more about Khushi I mean how she knows about Shivam and that :-) I hope she helps Sharon get out the mess and I also hope she helps SwaRon get together

In general nice updates :-)

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Wow Very nice update yaar:-D:-D
Loved it:-):-)
Waiting for the next part:-):-):-)

Quote

ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

SHIVAM ATTACKK>>>.

update sooon... thnxxx fr d pm

Quote

Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Hey Sakshi.

Firstly I am really sorry for being so late. But what do I do I am hell busy. Kuch na karke itni busy hu toh think. What will be my condition otherwise😆

Anyways I can blabber a lot but what I am here for is to review the update. Oops updates.

I mean seriously you updated two at a time. Like what has got over you, girl? Seems like someone is more than free.

Okay now seriously coming to the review. And I mean it this time. But I cant help it something nor the other comes up and I start on blabbering for it.

So here Swayam and Khushi were initially talking about Sharon. So Khushi knows about it. Good future mein koi problem nahi hogi, at least not from her side. And we have Shivam to ruin the needful. He is such a 🤬. I try so hard not to take a word of shit out of my mouth but I really cant help it. His character irks me. He is a jerk worth nothing but getting beaten up. But no one does that favour.

I kinda liked the way you described entire flashback. Well penned. Khushi and Swayam got married 😲 like inhe toh baksh deti. Swayam ko toh kunwara chod diya hota. Ab dono ki remarriage karwayegi. Hadh hai. Okay enough of this silly cribbing. Then the video chat when Sharon calls Simmi while she is busy with Swayam and Khushi on the video chat.

Party scene was really well written. I liked the way you made both the girls gel along. In short sautan bani saheli🤣 {lagta hai I am darn affected by the daily soaps.😆}

Now my question is how does Khushi know that creepy Shivam. Ab kaunsi mystery unfold hone wali hai. And please make sure yoi dont kill readers with the mystery.

Okay. I guess I have bored you enough. Update the next soon or else this mystery would eat me up.

Quote

Sneha_Shantannu

@Sneha_Shantannu

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Classy chapp...

Sory fr shrt comnt..but m inactive re...

Reveal soon ki how Khushi knew Shivam !!!!

Sammy.

Quote

ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

demand complete plzzz update

its a nic nd some different plot plzzz update

pm me when u update plzz

Quote

704537

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Awesome updt choti...lovd it...thnk u🤗

Quote

sanjana shekhawat

@ky2fanfictions

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

wow
wow
wow!!!
superrr happy
a treat 4 us
two chappy 2gether!!
loved it soo much...
awesum updates...
khushi's character is awesum...
sharon ki help...wow!
she's good
n u tooo 😆
love u soo much