New Arhi FF: Desert Heat Thread #2 *New Th, p 152*

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Take_That

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Vow New thread! Congrats!

All points noted!
Can't wait to read the chapters!

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keshinee20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

congrats on the new thread!!! update soon!

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Coffee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Congrats on new thread !
Couldn't expect any lesser response than this and its just the beginning..! :D

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crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

congratualtions Dear! Just begun with the introuction of this ff...and u r already soaring high! It's so good to see this story being already loved so much tht...it reached its thread two...before the story could even begin properly...and not to forget...chapter first is yet to be uploaded! SUPERB!!

Awesome TINA!

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goldendame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Bookmarking as usual !!!

Great Going Tina ! I am loving it... also the cast sounds wonderful !

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fleurs

@fleurs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Congrats for the new thread 🥳

Sorry for the late comments

Thanks for the special treat... it was fabulous 😊

The letter was very touching - your words literally made me feel the pain of an eight year old losing both her parents but still looking forward for their come back

Tina, u've astoundingly portrayed a little child's yearning for parental love & how the innocent soul couldn't even realise that her parents were no more

While reading Khushi's letter to her parents, I could feel pain pinching my heart cause she is so small & innocent that she was unknowingly writing & hiding a piece of paper which will never be read forever and moreover khushi mentioning the address of the house she's moving to was very emotional

Khushi feeling her mother's presence on wearing the chain was beautifully written🤗

Looking forward for the first chapter

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

wow with just the prologue we have another thread cool

ahh you are concentrating on shameless and MG

of course teri meri is a big deal dear

but i shall be looking forward to this too

cant believe that you started this story am gonna enjoy it for sure

see ya soon again

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Congrats on the new thread before your first official chapter!

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farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Congrats for the new thread Tina... U made me cry Tina with Khushi's helplessness, her never ending tears and wait for her amma and babu ji to come back... He last desperate try to be in contact with them with that letter... Her last effort to feel her mother close to her by wearing her chain in her neck... It was a brilliant portrayal of an 8 year old girl's innocence that she can't comprehend what has happened to her patents and her feeble attempts to work things out in her own way... I couldn't control my sobs when she told her amma that how she made a mess of her hair while braiding them.

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Thanushiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

OMG I am soo happy ! New thread already ! Congratzz man ! Thankzz for the lovely PM ! Realy loved the teaser, Characterisation ! Amazing ! Made it easier for us in future ! Thankzzz u once again !