New Arhi FF: Desert Heat Thread #2 *New Th, p 152* - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Congrats on the new thread!

🤣 I originally wrote congrats on the Taj list! 🤣 instead of congrats on the new thread. I read Taj and Karan Wahi - and everything became a mess in my head 😆

You mentioned KW, KVB and IK... That is good enough for me

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Congrats For Thread #2 ! :D
Thank You Soo Much For The Treat... It Really Was a Surprise!
I Loved The Letter Written By Khushi, and the Way You Portrayed Her Point of View Was Truly Touching. <3
Can't Wait To Read Further, I'm Eagerly Waiting For The First Chapter. 😊
Take Care 😉

*Zahra*
Edited by ..Zahra.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Firstly congrats on the new thread !!!!! 🥳

Secondly I just read ur pm !!!! The excerpt was beautifully written !!! The way you described how she went to her house and wrote the letter !!!! Brilliant !!

You have described what goes on in a 8 years olds mind perfectly !!! The letter brought tears to my eyes !!!
The way she asked them to come back and how she was confused about what's happening !!
How she's taking the chain and keeping the letter in its place in hope that they will come back and see the letter !!!
The last part where she wears her mothers chain and how she feels that her mother's scent was embracing her !! That broke my heart because she is so young that she doesn't even realize that her parents are no more !!! The letter showed how vulnerable she is !!!
Can't wait to read more !!! Thnx for the pm !! Update soon !! Your note and the characters have made me more excited to embark on this journey of historical romance in the deserts !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratz on d new thread
thanks 4 pm
the letter is so heart touching, so emotional
I really feel bad for Khushi, letter itself shows how innocent n young she is
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked Anjali but no problem I understand that she gets annoying in the show. ( I actually like Daljeet more than I like Anjali) 😆

I am now off to read the prologue again to find the hint about Arhi's meeting.😃

Can't wait for chapter 1 and I am eagerly waiting for Teri Meri also!

Congrats on the New Thread. Hope you gets lots and lots of comments and that you have to open many more threads for Desert Heat! 😆

Edited by Maira96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Congratulations on the new thread!
Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on the new thread. looking forward to chapter 1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congraz to the new thread. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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New thread! I am excited for you to update already! eeep!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1st congrats 4 new thread
Thanks 4 PM
Very emotional update feels very bad for Khushi she is so innocent .
Plz update soon can't wait 4 next update.

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