Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 37

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

awesome parts ana dear 👏 this yug is so dangerous. i hope he won't hurt laaj 😊 😊 😉 i can't guess what their plan is 😕 so plz post the next part soon 😊 😊



no thanx parvati
just see the yug yaar
me will try dear😕

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey ana lovely parts ab jaldi se cont kardo na yaar



hey joyothi
kia karoon yaar
papers jaan nahin chortay
but promise
o will post till sun😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part-24

The lights were off……………

Laaj:jannat yeh itna andhera kyoun hai
Jannat: haan……….roko main light chalati hoon

As jannat turn on the lights……………..Every body in the house say surprise

When laaj look down she found Mahrukh and J there

Laaj run towards her and hug them both……………she was seemed too be too happy……..Junaid, Rehan, Jannat and Bilal were happy on seeing her happy

Laaj:smiling widly……. app loog yahan………..kab……….mujhay kisi nay bataya bhi nahin

Mahrukh: smiling…………..abh tum tau humain bhool gaye hoo………….likin hum tumhara birthday kaisay bhool saktay hain

Laaj:surprised…………..birthday………..mujhay tau yaad bhi nahin tha k aj mera birthday hai

J: tabhi tau hum yahan aaye hain…………..ta k tumhain yaad dilain……..

Mahrukh:or yeh sara plan Junaid ka tha

Laaj: junaid ka

She turn towards Junaid and don't find him………..

Laaj:junaid kahan gaya

From back junaid call: main yahan

Laaj turns and see him coming with a cake, with a lit candle on it and with knife

Laaj:move to him……………..thank u Junaid

Junaid:well yeh shukariya tum baad main ada karna……………abh jaldi se cake katoo….tumhari birthday ki preperation main hum nay subah se kuch nahin khaya

Laaj smiled and move towards him……………..all gathered around her as she was gonna cut the cake

Before cutting da cake laaj see here and there

Mahrukh: kisay dhoond rahi hoo

Laaj: dii…………..mama nahin aayein

Mahrukh: sadly…………who laaj tumhain tau patah hai k mama ki tabiyat theek nahin rehti tau…………

Laaj: she was hurt but don't want to let other sad……………….koi baat nahin

Rehan: trying to change the topic………..jaldi katoo na……………mere pait main chohay naach rahay hain

Laaj:accha peto ram jii

Laaj blow the candle and cut the cake…………………everybody sings Happy Birthday 4 her

She took a piece and went to mahrukh to give her a bite

Mahrukh: nahin laaj……………tumhain yeh sab se pehlay junaid ko khilana chahiye…….akhir yeh sara plan ussi ka tha

Laaj agree to her and went to junaid and give him a bite………….in return junaid too feed her a bite of cake………..then laaj move towards Rehan and then jannat……..then she come to mahrukh and then J……………as she move to bilal……….and give him a bite………in return Bilal was too giving her a bite and as she open her mouth to take it……….he apply all the cake on her face…………

Laaj: Bhai…………..yeh kia kia app ne

Bilal:badla liya……………..(bilal smiled and all other too smiled)

Laaj:bhai app ne accha nahin kia………….laaj went to table and took a tissue to clean her face and then laaj took a piece of cake silently in her hand……

Bilal:wickedly…………..yaad nahin meri b-day pay bhi tum ne aisa hi kia tha

Laaj:turns and take her hands back to her…………….who kia hai na bhai………..mujhe aap ko tang karne main bohut maza ata hai……(she started moing towards bilal)

Bilal: ahan………….maza atta hai………………tau tum abh yeh soch loo k mujhe bhi yeh kar k bohut maza aaya (laaj was constantly moving towards her and reach near to him)

Laaj: bhai…………….tau app apni inhi meri sharatoon ki yaadon main aik or yaad daal lain

Bilal:confused……….. who kaun si?

Laaj: yeh (saying this she fastly take her hand from behind and apply all the creamy cake on his face……………bilal was all shocked and his mouth was opened while all others were laughing)

Bilal: guriya ki bachi

Laaj running away from him and bilal was followed him……………..firstly they were running in the hall…………..around the sofa's and all the members but after about 2-3 min laaj run upstairs………………..bilal followed her…………..she ran into her room and closed the door…………..and on that bilal who was running with great speed can't stop himself and his nose strike with the door

Bilal: ohhhhhhh(he shout in pain)…………his nose become red…………and he start messaging that while laaj was giggling inside……………Laaj ki bachi tumhain tau main nahin chooron ga

Laaj: bhai……………..she screamed from inside……………..choornay k liye pakroo tau

Ok guys
Know that a small part
But promise as my paper ends I will write a long part 4 u guys

Next: bilal take revenge……………..and the bad mans evil plans

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ana so nice of u dat u contd.... 😊
very cute part.... 😛 heheh
no probs.... all the best for ur exams.... 😊
will wait for ur long parts.... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Gr8 part partner 👏 haila laaj ne pehle junaid ko cake khilaya 😳 cho chweet 😳 chalo ab jaldi se cont kerne ki koshish kerna will be w8ing 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: KulBin

hey ana so nice of u dat u contd.... 😊
very cute part.... 😛 heheh
no probs.... all the best for ur exams.... 😊
will wait for ur long parts.... 😉



hey bina jiii
so nice to see u
well me gonna write it

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Posted: 18 years ago


hey golu
thank u dear
😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

rocking part ana dear 👏



hey paru
luv u dear😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

Gr8 part partner 👏 haila laaj ne pehle junaid ko cake khilaya 😳 cho chweet 😳 chalo ab jaldi se cont kerne ki koshish kerna will be w8ing 😃



hey partner
no thanx dear................me gonna coont dear

luv u 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
part 25

laaj b-day was come to an end but Bilal planing of taking revenge started................before going to sleep he was thinking what to do..............and she end up with a plan and went to sleep

it was 6:30 at the moring...........laaj was sleeping peacefully as the timing of rehersals was around 12 noon..............the house was quite that even a pin can make a noise...........

in that we here someone's footsteps voice..........

he was moving through the corridor but stop in front of one of doors

then he slowly open the door and we hear the screaching of door voice...........then he move towards the bed which was there in the middle............he has something in his hand.............

as he reach near the bed he went towards the feet side of laaj and slowly start pulling it off...........as it was uncovered till the neck........laaj got irritated during sleep and push the blanket on her again............

the man didn't give up and sit down on the floor and again started pulling it off............and this time he succeded as the blanket was off till her waist............

then the man stand up and move towards laaj and stand beside her........and started tickling her.........laaj was irrated and change her side but the man again started ticking her and this time laaj slowly open her eyes..........

she look above and and see a face having long teeth that was coming out from his mouth, the red eyes and a strange nose.............

laaj was hell shocked and shouted loudly

laaj:nooooooooooooooooooooo(covering her ears with her hands)

and started running from there.............but a she reached to door............she hear someone laughing

someone:hahahahaha.... 😆

later than the man rowling down on the floor and started laughing like hell 🤣

laaj turn back and she the man was removing the mask...........and oh my GOD...............that was bilal

laaj was firstly stunned and then later when she come to her senses ..............she was angry at him..........

hearing laaj voice...............all gathered there...........but didn't understand anything as laaj was standing in the door and bilal was laughing like hell

junaid:tensed..........what happened?
mahrukh:why did u screamed?........she was feared.....while tehmoor was holding him

Jannat: laaj.............tell us what happened........and why Bilal is laughing.......

laaj didn't said anything and went towards him.........while bilal was more active than her and stand up and started running.............

firstly on bed, then around the room, then he came out of the room and coming down from stairs almost jumping and then started running throughout the main hall.............

laaj was consequently following him but at last..............she was tired and sit down on the sofa...........while others were just enjoying this cat and mouse race and a small smile were coming across there lips.....

but they didn't still understand what happened.........

bilal:went to laaj...........r u defeating?

laaj:no.........and stand up but her feet was aching as that was strike to something...........and she sit down again

all come down and asked what happened to them........so early in the morning

bilal told them the whole story and all laughed a bit and laaj to..........on her dumpness

bilal:now do u like that..........

laaj:well bhai.........as it was about for fun.......it was ok.........but my feet is paining........she make a strange face

bilal: got serious.........is it hurt?

laaj nod in yes.

bilal quickly went upstairs and get olive oil and started massaging her...........all were first angry to bilal but on that.........all got a smile and went towards there room

bilal:while massaging.........is it feeling better?

laaj:tears come in her eyes........no

laaj remembers..........from the time she got senses.......she always found bilal and mahrukh fulfilling her every desire..........mahrukh was a mother to her and bilal.........none da less care for her like a father..........

both mahrukh and bilal life is laaj...........they luv to irritate her because when she is irritated.......her face expression always are so cute that they love it........

after about 15 min..............laaj try to stop him.....

laaj:bhai..........stop............its ok now

bilal: r u sure?

laaj:yes bhai

bilal:can u walk?

laaj:yes

laaj stand up but was not able to walk.........so bilal asked her to sit and again started massaging her feet.........after an hour.........laaj asked him to stop and asker him to let her to the room as might that will help her feel better

laaj put one hand on his shoulder and then they move towards the room and bilal make her lay in the bed and cover her with blanket and wish her sweet dreams and went to his room............

around 10:30..........laaj woke up and her feet was feeling much better.........she take a bath and change into a really nice blue jeans and kurta, wear matching accesories..........and went downstairs 4 breakfast

all were there.............except bilal........laaj asked others but they said that he has not woke up till now............all said might be he didn't go to sleep while making that plan..........all got a smile on there face while thinking about the plan but laaj feels that there is something else...........

laaj did breakfast and junaid and rehan take her to the rehersals hall and decided not to disturb bilal...........and take there position..........but this time.........junaid sit in the lobby instead of bilal to have an eye on the location

on the other side..............bilal.........to whom everybody think is sleeping..........didn't sleep 4 a single min.........and was crying silently.........he never want laaj to be hurt...........always try to protect her from the evils of world..........but right then..........he was responsible of that pain which he give to laaj

no-one has take his affection of laaj seriously as he never let other feels like this...........but from inside.........laaj and her sis mahrukh mean everything to him........

coz he always treated laaj as a doll of glass..........which can be break with a single stroke

mahrukh..........as her parents..........coz after the age of 4..........he never ever felt her mother love but found that love from mahrukh and thats why he respects her........

around 12:30, when bilal didn't come down..........mahrukh went to his room.........and found that he had covered himself with blanket.........she saw that and was about to come down again but she hear the voice of someone's crying

mahrukh went to bilal.........and pull of the cover and saw a crying bilal

mahrukh got frightened coz she had never seen him crying...........she sits near to him

mahrukh: what happened bilal.........why r u crying

bilal sit down and hug her sis

bilal:dii............coz of me......only of me.......laaj got that pain.........i never meant to hurt her........but don't know how that happens.....

mahrukh: u didn't hurt him

bilal:i did dii...........i did........still crying and hugging

mahrukh: bilal............stop crying........do u know what thing is more imp for us .......ur sisters

bilal:what(he break the hug)

mahrukh: u.........u and ur smile..........laaj pain didn't hurt her that much which will this thing make her feel(she said indicating towards his tears)

mahrukh: if she finds out that coz of her.........u were crying.........she will surely be hurt more........do u want to hurt her more

bilal node in no

mahrukh: then wipe these tears(she wipe her tears......) and now..........plz smile.........coz ur face surely tell others that u were crying..........and it don't look good that u r crying.......such a big boy is crying......

she pinch his nose that make bilal to smile

mahrukh: now thats like my brother..........she smiles too.........and by the way..........don't u care for laaj

bilal:quickly.........i do dii?

mahrukh: then why do u left her alone with that monster yug............junaid and rehan are there to help her but still she was feeling alone not to have her brother there

bilal:oh yaa.............i will just go there

bilal run towards te door but mahrukh called him from behind

mahrukh: hey stupid.........plz wash ur face first.......otherwise she will surely got to know that u were crying........

bilal:oops yes

bilal went towards washroom and mahrukh flt blessed 4 having such a sweet bro and sis

on the other hand

we see a room where yug was sitting...........playing with his pen

yug:Miss laaj...........u r too beautiful.......and yug like beauty........and can snatched everything to have that beauty...........so u will be with me........just wait.......i m gonna be ur master.........on the final day of show...........u will become mine........forever

and then he laugh like hell

but on the other hand..........we see someone has listened his planning.........

someone: will never let u do this..............u have to pay 4 all ur sins MR. YUG GOEINKA

bilal reached the rehersal house and take her micro-phone and informed laaj that he is there.........junaid to listened that and both got happy

ok guys
abhi itna hi
i know that is not too long.....but long from my other parts
will post next part soon
next: the new entry........what yug's plan..........will laaj be rescued

4 knowing that wait 4 the next part

lolz
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