Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 38

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part 26

it was the final day.........it was the last day 4 Laaj to be with that stupid yug........she didn't even wanna spend thsi day with yug but she had too...........junaid and bilal come along with her and sit in audience.......while rehan sit outside in car.......(if any emergency happen)

on the other hand we see a building.........as we go inside the building.........we see a cabin......fully dark..........only a table lamp was lit and a chair was there on which someone was sitting.........and is in deep thoughts

we hear a knock on the door and a man enter after 2 min......

MAN:madam

G: Mr.Mehta........i don't want anyone to disturb me right now

M:thats ok madam but Mita is here

G:Meta.......ok let her come in

the man leaves and after some time a girl entered.....

G:so Meta......what is the report

M:madam.........today is a big day for yug goenka......as his new fashion range is comming out

G:ahan........anything else

M:yes maam.......i have a big news to give u

G:what

M:maam ......yug is now a days after a model name Laaj and he had plan to have her 4 tonight

G:what...(his tone was really shocked).....what a characterless man he is.........and that girl

M:maam........she is from a respectful family and isn't his kind of girl........and that is what making him to be with her

G:never gonna let his dreams fulfilled.......ok mita.....u can go.......as Yug is ur boss........and being a secretary u must be there.......be carefull......don't let him feel strange about u

M:i m maam.........Bye

Mita leave and the girl turn his chair and now we can see her.........she is Luveeza(playing by my sweet partner......R.S)

Luv:with anger in her voice........YUG GOENKA.......what u had done to my friend........i will never let u do that to another girl..........those memories are still fresh in my mind........and i will never forget that

a tear was about to roll down her cheeks but she closed her eyes and remember the past

Flashback:

"Luv......luv"......... agirl come running towards her "what happened Maya"

Maya: luv............i have found the man of my dreams...she said with full joy

L:really.........who is that stupid man.......she was too happy and was teasing her

M:luv.........plz don't say him anything dear.....she make a face.........he is exactly that what i want....he know everything about me.......what i want......what i like

L:ahan.........ok dear........tell me his name

M:his name is.......as she was about to tell her a phone rang and she immediately left but luv was very happy on seeing her friend that happy

but after some days.........she called Maya......but she wasn't attending her call.......she call at her mob........but she wasn't attendng that too.........she scared.......as Maya can forget her shoes......but not her moob at home.........Luv take out her call and went to her house........and knocked at her house.......Maya's mom open it and said that Maya is in her room and isn't come outside after lunch tomorrow..........and they didn't distrub her.......she also said that she was looking tensed of something.......

Luveeza move to her room and knock but no answer.....she knocked again and aain but no ans and in last Maya's bro hear luv voice and come to Maya's room and break the door.........and were shocked to see Maya's body hanging with fan

her mom and dad were shocked and her dad got heart attack of that and after his death.........maya's mom got paralytic attack........and in some days........a happy family seem like a family who never see a happiness in there entire life

after maya's death.........it was found after postmartem that she was pregnanat........Luv get that it must be coz of the guy about whom Maya told her about some days ago........

Maya's Mom was now Luv responsibility as Maya's mom treat her like her own daughter

one day........when Maya's mom went to sleep.......Luv come to Maya's room and start searching of her mob....she didn't found that and was about to come out of the room when her foot slips and she fell down and see to her right and found the mob under the side table........it was seem like someone had throw it down in anger and battery was placed outside........she fix the things and found the mob was wrking and find a msg

"Maya.....i can't take the responsibility of ur child......as i have to look at my future.....my career is more imp........and u were a doll to me.....to which i played and now.....u r not the girl of my work.....so just leave"

Luv blood boil on reading this but the person name was not there........she note the no and give it to one of her friend to find who's it and find thats it was of yug

Flashback ends

L:she wipes her tears......Coz of u only........i loose my friend........i loose my trust........i loose my trust over love.......over any guy.........and u are enjoying there........i will kill u Yug........if u will play with anyone else......i will kill u

luv eyes were red........

it was the show time.........Laaj was scared.......but presence of junaid and bilal were giving confidence to her

the show start and models start comming up the ramp with beautiful and heavy triditional dresses and laaj too come up wearing one of them while junaid stand up to get a view of around.........

the show end and laaj went to green room to change to its normal costume but as she removes her earing she hear someone comes in and locking the door......

Laaj was scared to hell.......and turned and found yug there.......(note: laaj wasn't wearing her microphone so junaid and bilal were not aware of anything)

laaj:what r u doing here?

yug:take a long breath.........this frangnance of ur's take me too u........u were looking so good on ramp.....

laaj:why r u here? she says lodly in anger

yug:why r u angry my love.....see no one is there.....only u and me......lets be one.(he said with a evil grin and move towards her while laaj start moving backward......

on the other hand

rehan:junaid ..........laaj kahan hai(through microphone)

junaid:she went to green room to change

rehan:who is with her

junaid:how could i know

rehan:u mean to say neither u nor bilal is with her

junaid:no...........junaid get the point and rush to green room.........oh shit

laaj was continously moving backward and through some bottles on him and one of the bottles give him a cut on his hand and blood comes out from his hand

yug:this cut is n't big enough from that cut which u give to my heart

and yug run to him and junaid was there outside tried to opening the door........and as it open he found yug completely covering laaj while laaj on seeing junaid push him and run to junaid and hug him and stated crying

junaid eyes became furious and yug eyes were too

yug:hey u.........what r u doing here

junaid:thats what i wanna ask u.......who the hell t u doing here? he was hugging laaj and his eyes were burn with anger

yug: why should i tell u.........who r u......and how do u realate to her

he pointed towards laaj

junaid:i love her.......juanid said loudly and laaj look at him shocked......

(hey don't get confused..........she knew that he is in love with her but don't know that he will express it in such way)

hey guys
my bro came
so i have to left this part right here
but will post other half tomorrow

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