Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 35

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Posted: 18 years ago
ana dear the part was very damn nice... the way junaid & laaj are getting closer.. laaj ki confusion about her feelings for junaid... me loving each & every bit of it...junaid & laaj are spending time with each other in each others company.....it's just simply too gooddddd..me loving it totally... ab dusari taraf laaj ka darr... junaid ki pareshaani for laaj.... rehan & jannat also worried about laaj....they all fear yug... then they make a plan.. phir agli subah laaj ki nervousness..uske aasoo... junaid uska hosla bada raha hain saying about his plan.. he has given her a micro phone so that she is in constant touch with bilal , junaid & rehan.. then junaid ke samjhane par laaj sammaj jaathi hain... these all were just very goodddddddddddd........ me liked it very much.. the way you presented it was very damn nice.... 👍🏼
tho now laaj has reached yug's office.. & yug is like another flower in his garden..uski tho main.. jaan se maar daloongi yug ko agar usne koi bhi ulti-seedhi harkat ki tho... usse tho main chodoongi nahi.....mujhe us yug pe itna ghussa aa raha hain ki poocho mat..... 😡
dear waise for the next parts i have a predictions aur woh yeh ki junaid aur laaj ke beech koi baat ko lekar ghalatfaimi hogi woh dono ek dusare se ladenge..rute rahenge... issi beech yug laaj se zabardasti karne ki koshish karega.. tab junaid aake yug ki baand bajayega aur laaj ko bachchayega... then laaj aur junaid ke beech thode romantic moments honge... woh dono ek dusare se apne pyaar ka izhaar karenge.. this is my guess.....tho ana dear tum kya kehthi ho ??? 😉
ab please continue soon..me cannot wait for long for the next part... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey wow ana dear finally u contd... 😊
very very nice part.... 👏 hehe lol 😆
ok so finally laaj also strtd feeling smthng smthng 4 junaid... 😉 interesting... 😆
m sure if at all dis yug tries to do nythng 3 guys will save her... 😃 lol
plz cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Partner u rox buddy just awesoem part 👏 ab itna achha pasrt likha hai to ab w8 nahi hoga zyada try to post the next part soooooooooon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: KulBin

hey wow ana dear finally u contd... 😊
very very nice part.... 👏 hehe lol 😆
ok so finally laaj also strtd feeling smthng smthng 4 junaid... 😉 interesting... 😆
m sure if at all dis yug tries to do nythng 3 guys will save her... 😃 lol
plz cont soon.... 😊



hey bina jii
glad to see u
ya she is...................but confused soul...................like always😆
lets see what will yug do

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana dear the part was very damn nice... the way junaid & laaj are getting closer.. laaj ki confusion about her feelings for junaid... me loving each & every bit of it...junaid & laaj are spending time with each other in each others company.....it's just simply too gooddddd..me loving it totally... ab dusari taraf laaj ka darr... junaid ki pareshaani for laaj.... rehan & jannat also worried about laaj....they all fear yug... then they make a plan.. phir agli subah laaj ki nervousness..uske aasoo... junaid uska hosla bada raha hain saying about his plan.. he has given her a micro phone so that she is in constant touch with bilal , junaid & rehan.. then junaid ke samjhane par laaj sammaj jaathi hain... these all were just very goodddddddddddd........ me liked it very much.. the way you presented it was very damn nice.... 👍🏼
tho now laaj has reached yug's office.. & yug is like another flower in his garden..uski tho main.. jaan se maar daloongi yug ko agar usne koi bhi ulti-seedhi harkat ki tho... usse tho main chodoongi nahi.....mujhe us yug pe itna ghussa aa raha hain ki poocho mat..... 😡
dear waise for the next parts i have a predictions aur woh yeh ki junaid aur laaj ke beech koi baat ko lekar ghalatfaimi hogi woh dono ek dusare se ladenge..rute rahenge... issi beech yug laaj se zabard asti karne ki koshish karega.. tab junaid aake yug ki baand bajayega aur laaj ko bachchayega... then laaj aur junaid ke beech thode romantic moments honge... woh dono ek dusare se apne pyaar ka izhaar karenge.. this is my guess.....tho ana dear tum kya kehthi ho ??? 😉
ab please continue soon..me cannot wait for long for the next part... 😃




hey suri dii

ur comments like always rocking........................😳
no thanx 4 such superb comments
me glad to know that u like it
😳

yr pridiction is quite nice...................well some will be true n some is not...............but u will check that later jiiiiiiiiiiiiii😉

luv u

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

Partner u rox buddy just awesoem part 👏 ab itna achha pasrt likha hai to ab w8 nahi hoga zyada try to post the next part soooooooooon 😊



hey dear
no thanx kitkat partner
me will try to post yaar
as k wedding hai aik
most probably till night or tomorrow

k

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey nice part cont soon.



no thanx jyothi
luv to know u like it

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 22

laaj was sitting very tensed...........she was talking to the guys through the microphone which was onher one ear.........seemed to be her mobile's .........so no one can suspect her.....

laaj:mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai
bilal:(sitting in the lounge.........showing as waiting 4 someone.........)don't worry guriya.........nothing will happen.......we r here..........u r safe baccha

laaj:bhai phir bhi

bilal:just relex

junaid:yaa..be relex.............or haan jab yug aaye tau have a smile on ur face k...........otherwise he will get that something fishy.........n we don't wanna have a chance

rehan:control urself...........we r here with u.......n if u feel like anytype danger just press the button....althoudh i don't think something like that gonna happen as he will do nothing in first meeting.........but only will try to impress u by his talks........k...........be carefull phir bhi

all said once:BEST OF LUCK

laaj get some courage by there talks n now was fully in control.........as b4 her body was shivering n her hand hairs were stand staight.........

sometime latter the door opens.........n a guy enters

laaj turns around n saw the real giant yug goenka(played bu yuv of saarthi)

yug slowly move towards her a she stand up

yug:hi.........i m yug goenka..........he extend his hand

but

laaj:asslam-o-alikum............she said this an take her both hands down

yug feel insulted but say nothing just kept a smile on his face..............n move toward his seat

yg:so miss laaj..........i came to know taht u were quite ill.............how r u now?

laaj:ya............actually my health was affected badly......(junaid hear this n get pissed as he thought that only coz of him laaj was in that stuation...........while bilal was confused as he didn't know that but say nothng)...........thats why i was asking 4 a one week leave.............but got only 3 days leave........well i m quite well now

yug:smirking........put his hands on table n said.....what could we do..........u know that the show is in 3-4 days...........n u have to rehesal

laaj:yaa thats too true

yug:ok miss laaj..........in the basement.......the rehersals r going on.........u can go n do u prerparation.......the dresses will be shown to u tomorrow.........its quite traditional u know na

laaj:yes sir

yug:ohoooo..........don't call me sir........everyone else called me yug.........only yug

laj:no sir.........there should be a diff b/w an employe n boss.......don't ask me cross those diff........as i thought in every relation.....every work there should be a limit...... n i personally don't wanna cross that limit.....hope u don't mind

yug:(thinking..........attitude haan)with a smile.....oh no not at all...........u can go

laaj left that placen yug was burning in anger.....

yug:how dare she said me no...........yug goenka never hear no on anything...........u have to repay this

n than he smiled with a thought

laaj was going to the basement which was from they way of lounge.

bilal stand up as he saw her..........and she hugged her having tears in her eyes

bilal:hey kia howa?..........tapping her head.....

laaj:bhai...........i can't handle this man......itnay din iss k under kaisay kaam karoon gii

bilal:don't u worry guriya hum sab hain na............main junaid rehan jannat.......we r there to help u every min k.......now clear these tears n go to the basement..........waise bhi............who receptionist..........kaisi lagi tumhain........

laaj see towards the receptonist(receptionist was quite fat n having freakled cheeks)

tumhari bhabhi ban k kaisi lagay gii

laaj:bhai...........stop flirting k.....warna main waqai appi ko kahon gi k unh k saath app ki bhi shadi karwa dain

bilal:with a pleading look......aray yaar marna hai kia............kyoun mujhay latkanay k plans bana rahi hoo

laaj smiles n bilal got a smile too to see her sis smiling 4 which he has make this joke

laaj moves towards the basement n bilal went outside n sit in the car n said

bilal:i m worried about her.........abhi bhi ro rahi thi

rehan:ya we listen............we have to do something to make her smile

junaid:ya..............n i got a plan

ok guys
wait 4 the plan
me will back soon

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part....gujd job....keep it up yaar.....da story z really interestin...keep it up......gud job ........
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: group_1223

nice part....gujd job....keep it up yaar.....da story z really interestin...keep it up......gud job ........



no thanx aisha
hope u will like it further

😳

lolz
ana

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