Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 32

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

👏 Gr8 part partner ab zyada w8 na kerwana

thanx chocki patner
u r such a darling
😛

lolz
ana

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana dear...tum na ek dum toooo goodddddddddddd ho...
me totally fida over your writing.. you are simply the best... you totally rock.... the part was awesome..intresting...very damnnn well written.. i liked it very much....👏
tho joh shaks aaya tha woh laaj ka bhai hain..bilal...aur woh junaid ka dost bhi hain.. ek baat boloon ana dear yeh baat tho junaid ke liye sone pe suhaga hain...... 😉
tho ab mahrukh ki shaddi ho rahi hain..woh bhi agle hafte....yeh tho achchi baat hain... 😃 lekin dear ab yeh junaid ke mann mein kya confusion bas gayi... ki J aur laaj ki shaddi ho rahi hain....yeh achcha nahi hua... 🤢
lekin dear on second thoughts junaid ko confusion hui yeh achcha hi hua.... patah hain kyun ?? woh isliye kyunke ab shayad junaid jalan ki wajah se apne dil ka haal laaj ko bata de woh bhi jaldi se.... me sure junaid bohat jald laaj se apne pyaar ka ikraar kar dega.... 😉
ab continue soon..me waiting very eagerly for you to continue...... 😃

no thanx suri di
ur comments r always inspirable
luv it
haan jii bilal ka hona tau hai sonay pay suhaga
don't worry jii...................yeh J hi abh iss confusion ko khatam karay ga
k
luv u comments jii
i m soo KHUSH k app ko part accha laga
try to write soon

lolz
ana

Originally posted by: nikhat_niki

hey ana bohot accha hai
yeh "j" ne toh jealousy paida kardi

hey nikki
thanx yaar
j hai..............tau jealousy tau hogi na
hehehehehehe

lolz
ana

Originally posted by: group_1223

nice part....gud job man....keep it up.....

no thanx aisha
me trying to keep it up

lolz
ana

Originally posted by: parvathicanada

nice part ana 👏

no thanx parvati dear
luv u dear


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ana

part-20

Laaj n all went to bur-dubai 4 shopping……………laaj go through many shops but find nothing attractive…………..at last………………they all leave the place n went to a nice shopping mall ………………laaj wanna buy a superb dress to gift mahrukh n a suit 4 J……………..so as they enter shopping mall…………they divided into two groups…………..laaj n jannat went to the women section to buy a suit or sari 4 mahrukh…………n junaid went along with rehan n bilal to buy a suit…………but bilal gets a call n left 4 a moment

In b/w……………..junaid was looking quite upset n sad………….rehan has a hint but was not sure of that

Rehan: junaid k shoulder pay haath rakhtay howay……………….tum usay bata kyoun nahin detay

Junaid:confused…………………kissay…………..or kia nahin batata main???

Rehan:make I-know-u look…………. mujh se chupanay ki zaroorat nahin…………..doosti ki hai tau dost ka haal bhi mujhe patah chal jata hai

Junaid:he knows that he guessed right but wanna ignore………kia yaar…….kia baat kar raha hai

He start looking at some suits to ignore him

Rehan:mujhse nazrain churanay say kia ho ga………………mujhe patah hai k tum LAAJ ko pyaar kartay hoo

Junaid:stunned………..n have a how-do-u-know look……………….what?

Rehan:smiles on his reaction………………..bhai saheb……………hum bhi shadi shuda hain……………..yeh sab jantay hain………………..jannat se kehnay k liye bhi itnay hi pappar belay thay…………..likin aik tum hoo……………bailna tau kia abhi kuch masala bhi nahin dala

Junaid:smiles ……….matlab kia hai

Rehan:junaid meri jaan…………….inh larkiyon ko na har baat batana hoti hai………..dil main rakhnay say kuch nahin hota

Junaid:likin kabhi kabhi lafz bhi zuban ka saath choor detay hain……………or tab sirf aik ankahin hi hotin hain jo hamary dil ka khal samnay walay say bayan kar patin hain

On this rehan starts singing da song

Rehan:haan jii………haan………..akhir………..ankhain bhi hooti hain dil ki zuban……….bin bolay kar deti hain halat yeh pal main bayan………….likin meray yaar………….inh ankhoon ka kaam pehlay samjh main aata tha sab koo………abh nahin

Junaid:matlab

Rehan:irritate on his matlab…………….matlab matlab………….yaar tujhe tau 18 century main paida hona chahiye tha…………..aj kal main meray masoom bhai kia kar raha hai

?????: kaun kia kar raha hai

they both turned on this voice n find bilal there

bilal:making a suspicious face………….haan jii tau kaun kia kar raha ahi

rehan:looking at junaid……………..bata doon kia

junaid:jaldi main…………….array nahin…………he wanna stop him but he moved on n stands with bilal

rehan:baat yeh hai…..ahem ahem bilal…………….k app k iss dost ko aik larki say pyar ho gaya hai…………likin janab kehnay say dartay hain…

bilal:make a blank face…………….have I heard right?………..he put his finger in his ear to verify that they r open…………

rehan n junaid laughed at his act

bilal:I m shocked……………..yeh junaid……………..jiss ko larkiyoon say kooft hoti thi…………unh say kosoon door bhagtay thay…………..aj aik larki k pyar main

junaid give I-will-see-u look to rehan

bilal:looking at rehan…………….tau phir tau miyan rehan………..(put a hand on his shoulder)……………who larki waqai kuch especial hogi…………jiss nay iss I-don't-like-girls typo guy ko bhi apna deewana bana diya……

junaid:smiles…………..kia yaar tu bhi na………………

bilal:main bhi na kia………….…..sahi kaha na…………..waisay rehan jii…………kia main us larki ka naam jaan sakta hoon

junaid heart beat stop on that n colour of his face get pale

rehan was enjoying his situation as he never seen him b4 like this……………….
Rehan:haan haan…………(thinks…………abh kaisay bachoo gay miyan junaid)smiles……… uska naam hai…………

Junaid:try to stop him………rehan

Bilal:kia howa

Rehan:what now yaar

Bilal:I think he wanna tell me

Rehan:haan haan zaroor………………

Junaid went towards them smiling n say to rehan in a low tone………

Junaid:tujhe tau main abhi dekhta hoon

Bilal:kuch kaha kia

Junaid:looked at him…………array nahin………i was just saying k rehan abh batanay ka faida………….as k us larki ki shadi kahin or ho rahi hai

Bilal:making a sad face……………..oh what a sad news………

Rehan:looking at him to confirm it………….is it

Junaid:making a sad face………….ya

Then they buy a suit n tie 4 J n went in search of the girls

JunaidLthinking……………kia baat hai…………..apnay hi hatton apnay na honay wali biwi k honay walay husband ka suit select kia……………….my luck.

Then the find them n laaj take out a suit of grapes colour which he choses 4 mahrukh

Laaj:to bilal…………….bhai yeh appi pay kaisa lagay ga

Bilal:great…………….she always like this colour

Rehan:good choice laaj

But junaid doesn't say nething

Laaj:looking at him now……………..kia howa junaid tumhain accha nahin laga

Junaid:smiles 4 her………….nahin nahin……………bohut accha hai
Laaj smiles on that

Laaj:to bilal…………bhai J k liye suit select kia……………

Bilal then shows her the suit n she like it too …………….n say

Laaj:J or appi jab aik saath inh dresses ko pehen k aayein gay tau kitnay cute couple lagain g na

Bilal:hmmmmmmm………………appi hum sab ko choor kar chali jain gain…………I will miss her

Laaj:make a sad face but had a smile on it………………hmmm………..

Junaid:can't understand there talks……………likin tumhari appi tumhain choor k kyoun jaye gi

Laaj:array buddhu……………appi ki shadi k baad vidai bhi tau hogi…………tau who nahin tau or kia main chor k jaoon gi ghar……………she hits his head slightly

Junaid:what……………junaid has an expression of shock n happy at the same time

Laaj:confused………..what what?

Rehan was on a side laughing at junaid's situation

Junaid:nahin ………….who actually………..kuch nahin

Bilal:what r u saying yaar………….we all r confused

Junaid:controls himself……….nahin kuch nahin

Laaj:remembering mahrukh………..appi waqai lucky hain jo unhain J jaisa patner milla

Bilal:hmm………………n I know k who appi ko khush rakhay ga

Junaid:thinking……………..yani……..i was wrong…………laaj is not gonna leave me………….hip hip hurray

Ok guys
Next: laaj went to the rehersals n meetin with the deadly man
Hehehehehehe

Lolz
ana

ana dear you are such a sweetheart... tumne apna promise nibaya... i mean story post karne ka promise...... muahh..... 🤗 the part was very nice.. junaid ki confusion , rehan ka usse chaidna , phir bilal ka bhi usse tease karna... alll were very cute & funny... junaid ne jab kaha ki apnay na honay wali biwi k honay walay husband ka suit select kia..... this dialogue was shooo cute , sweetttt........mujhe tho junaid ki halat par hasi aa rahi thi.... 😆
you know what ana dear mujhe laga ki tumhe junaid ko aur satana chahiye tha.... mazaa aatha hahahaha.. just kidding... 😆
ab finally junaid ke saamne yeh baat aa hi gayi ki laaj ka j is going to be her appi's going to be husband.. yeh baat tho achchi hui confusion durr ho gayi.... 👍🏼
tho ab last mein junaid sochtha hain ab usse laaj nahi chodke jayegi.. he is happy & says
hip hip hurray... yeh tho bohat achchi baat hain.. is baat pe tho humein bhi hip hip hurray bolna chahiye... kyun ana dear ???😃 the part was cute , sweet , funny , wonderful , tooo good , awesome , fantastic , coolll
in short zabardast... 👏
ana dear ab jaldi se continue karna... me will be waiting for the next part eagerly..... 😃

ana nice part
pls jaldi next part likho sabar nahi ho raha

cool part ana👏 finally the misunderstanding is cleared 👍🏼 plz make junaid confess his love 😊 & cont soon 😊