Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 31

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Yar partner abhi try vy chodo jaldi se cont karo
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ana dear please continue soon... 😭
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Dear chockl8 parner cont soon yar 😭
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part-19

laaj hugs him and he too

we see the face of the guy..................n he is none other than apurva agnihotri

laaj:app kaise hooo

the guy:main theek.................tum sunaoo..................iss duffer k saath kia kar rahii hoooo

laaj:ahan..............is duffer nay hi mujhay bachaya hai...................warna abhi tak main us yug goenka k jaal main phans gaye hoti

junaid who was confused come forward n say

junaid:tum donon aik doosray ko jantay hoo

both i mean the guy n laaj:nodding there heads in yess.............hmmhmmmmm

junaid:likin kaisay

guy:she is the girl to which i love the most.........................likin iss ka rank 3 hai

laaj:n he is the guy to which i love the most.....................likin inh ka rank bhi 3rd hai

guy:irritate…….hay watch out.................main 2nd pay hoon

laaj:making a face to him………….3rd pay..................my J comes first

(junaid jo abhi tak inh donon k relation pay confused tha abh yeh J kaun hai………iss pay bhi confused……………n after he thinks that J is a guy to which laaj love)

guy:more irritate……….J..............J ko tau main dekhta hoon....................i m on 2nd k

laaj:ok....ok..................donon hi 2nd ho......................abh theek

junaid:who was still confused..................likin what u guys r of each other

guy:yaar...............if u remember...................maine tumhain bataya tha k guriya pakistani famous model hai.........n she is my guriya................laaj

laaj:smiling…….n he is my one n only sweetest bro...............BILAL

BILAL:looking at junaid………hay junaid.....................tu itna confused kyoun dikh raha hai................batay tau tha na

junaid:making a ur-mistake look………bataya tha.........................likin agar real naam batatay tau zyada accha na hota........

bilal:accha yaar sorry....................looking at rehan n jannat......................apnay friends say introduce nahin karwaoo gay

junaid:hitting his head a bit.........................oh haan..............sure

then they move towards them n junaid introduce them with eachother

bilal:likin guriya...................tum junaid say kaisay milli

laaj:making an irritating face.......................bhai...................stop calling me guriya..................i m a big girl now

bilal:ok.....ok..................baba sorry................abh bataooo

junaid:smiling…………..yaar hum flight main millay thay.............n after that he tell him the whole story

bilal:held his hands………..thanx yaar......................aj tumhari wajha say guriya hamaray saath hai

junaid:iss main thanx ki koi baat nahin.................yeh tau hamara farz tha..................kyoun rehan

rehan:han kyoun nahin...................or waisay bhi laaj meri college friend hai so iss main koi bari baat nahin thi.................or waisay bhi hum apni behnon k liye kuch na kar payee...................likin laaj k liye zaroor karain gain

they all get sad

bilal:wanna cheer them up........................likin yeh kia...................yahan pay aye hoo likin no masti

laaj:nervous.......................bhai app loog jaoo main yahin pay hoon

bilal:no jii noo.....................aj app ko tau bethna hi paray ga......................bachpan say main or mahrukh bethtay rahay hain.......................or tum in swings say sirf mahrukh ki wajha say bachi hoo........................likin abvh nahin......................abhi tau main apna badla poora karoon ga

laaj:bhai no....................no

she stands up as bilal was proceding to him....................n she ran but bilal caught her

bilal:no guriya.................aj tau mahrukh bhi nahin tumhain bachanay k liyee

as he was taking her to the roller coaster again ......................laaj cells ring

she pick it up

laaj:hi appi.................perfect timing pay call kii........................patah hai bhai mujhay ride pay bethanay walay thay

mahrukh:what....................bilal................wahan kia kar raha hai..................usay phone doooo

bilal:marwa diya yaar

laaj hand over the phone to bilal with a smile

bilal:hello

mahrukh: angry…………………..yeh ia ho raha hai

BILAL:apnay balon main hath phertay with a grin…………………kia …..kia ho raha hai appi?

Mahrukh:tum wahan kia kar rahay hoo……………..or tumhain patah hai k guriya ko rides say darr lagta hai………………phir bhi tum usay betha rahay hooo

Bilal:who appi………….sorry………….nahin bethata k…………or main yahan alain aya tha tau junaid…………..app ko patah hai na us ka…

Mahrukh:haan………guriya nay bataya tha……………..junaid ka kia

Bilal:actually who mera friend hai tau jab maine usay phone kia tau us nay yahan bulaya……………..or yahan aa k dekha k guriya bhi unh k saath hai

Mahrukh:ohh….ok………….accha tum guriya ko tang na karoo or usay phone dooo

Bilal:ok……………and handover the phone to laaj

Laaj:saying to bilal…………..abh aaye na kabzay main……………bilal make a face to her………….n she takes the call

Laaj:jii appi

(in the mean time……………the other go 4 the ride)

Mahrukh:accha baat sunooo……………..tum kab tak aa rahi hoo wapis

Laaj:appi………………hopefully next week main…………….kyoun

Mahrukh:actually………….(blushing)………….tumharay J aaye howay hain……………shadi ki date fix karnay

Laaj:quite happily n teasing her……………..ohhoooooooooo

Mahrukh:blushed more……….. tau mama nay kaha k tum se or bilal say pooch loon………

Laaj:became senti…………mama nay kaha

Mahrukh:she too became serious………………haan

Laaj:having tears in her eyes………….tau app next week ki date rakh loo………………main aa rahi hoon

Mahrukh:tum roo kyoun rahi hoo…………….guriya mama tumhain bohut miss karti hain……….bus kabhi apnay emotions tum se express nahin kar patti

(they all were coming back………………..n laaj don't wanna show them the tears)

Laaj:janti hoon……………accha appi mujhe jana hai bye

Mahrukh: ok………………..apna khayal rakhna

Laaj:app bhi

N both cut the call

Bilal came to her n ask:kia kaha apii nay

Laaj:u know what bhai…………….J aaye howay hain…………..shadi ki baat karnay

Bilal:what

Laaj:haan…………or next week ki date fix kar rahay hain

Bilal:that's good

Laaj:ok bhai……………..chaloo………….humain next week wapis jana hai……….or janay say pehlay mujhe shadi ki bohut si tayariyan karni hain…………..abhi shopping pay chalain

Bilal:dartay howay ………………no

Laaj:kyoun

Bilal:tumhari shopping bohut lambi hoti hai…………………plz plz………..main nahin

Laaj:lift her eyebrow……………………bhai

Bilal:ok…………meri maa……………..na lay k gaya tau appi say phir dantt khilwaye giii

Laaj invites jannat to help her in shopping n others to

But as k junaid don't know who is J…………..so usay laga k J se laaj ki shadi honay walli hai n he became upset

Laaj n all were move forward but junaid was stick to his place

Laaj turns n asked him to come

Laaj:junaid………………aoo na

Junaid:nahin laaj……………tum loog jaoo…………………mujhe aik imp meeting k liye abhi nikalna hai…………so can't come

Laaj:pleading……………….plz

Junaid:laaj…………….(n was about to say but laaj looking at her with pleading face n say…………plzplzplzplzplz)

Junaid can't say no now so he also went with all of them, heart broken.

ok gys
enjoy

lolz
ana
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hey
kia kissi ko accha nahin laga

lolz
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey
kia kissi ko accha nahin laga

lolz

Aray nahi my chocklaty prtnr aesa nahi hai yara dont think like that😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 Gr8 part partner ab zyada w8 na kerwana
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Posted: 18 years ago
ana dear...tum na ek dum toooo goodddddddddddd ho...
me totally fida over your writing.. you are simply the best... you totally rock.... the part was awesome..intresting...very damnnn well written.. i liked it very much....👏
tho joh shaks aaya tha woh laaj ka bhai hain..bilal...aur woh junaid ka dost bhi hain.. ek baat boloon ana dear yeh baat tho junaid ke liye sone pe suhaga hain...... 😉
tho ab mahrukh ki shaddi ho rahi hain..woh bhi agle hafte....yeh tho achchi baat hain... 😃 lekin dear ab yeh junaid ke mann mein kya confusion bas gayi... ki J aur laaj ki shaddi ho rahi hain....yeh achcha nahi hua... 🤢
lekin dear on second thoughts junaid ko confusion hui yeh achcha hi hua.... patah hain kyun ?? woh isliye kyunke ab shayad junaid jalan ki wajah se apne dil ka haal laaj ko bata de woh bhi jaldi se.... me sure junaid bohat jald laaj se apne pyaar ka ikraar kar dega.... 😉
ab continue soon..me waiting very eagerly for you to continue...... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ana bohot accha hai
yeh "j" ne toh jealousy paida kardi
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part....gud job man....keep it up.....

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