Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 29

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Posted: 18 years ago
ana very very nice parts.... 👏
emotional 😭 & tragic too.... 😕
but gr8 gng... 👏
do cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ana yar jaldi se cont bhi ker do aur kitna w8 ker waogi?
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Posted: 18 years ago
guys
me will post tomorrow

so sorry 4 being late

but aj kal uni bhi hai or ramzan bhi
so don't have much time

but tomorrow i promise that i will post

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
Yar Ana ye aap ka KAL kab aayega?
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Posted: 18 years ago
part-18


laaj and all went to HILLY FUN CITY, ALAIN to have fun

as they enter JUNAID recieves a call

junaid:hello......................hello..................... hello

junaid:excause me............

he left all of them and move a bit far 4om them as k signals nahin aa rahay thay
junaid:hello

someone:hello janab

junaid:kaun

someone:ahan abh tau dost ki awaz bhi bhool jaye ga

junaid:extremely joyfuly..........aray tuu

someone:jii haan

junaid:kahan hai tu yaar?

someone:bhai hum tau yahain hain........................app nay hi anay ki khabar na dii

junaid:likin tujhe kaisay patah laga k main..........

someone:bhai! hum nay apnay jasoos charoon taraf pehlaye howay hain

junaid:acha abhi kahan hai

someone:yaar alain aya hoon......................aik deal k silsalay main

junaid:accha.......................itefaq say hum sab bhi wahin pay hain.....................tu yahan HILLY FUN CITY main aa ja......hum sab yahin hain

someone:hum sab......................kaun kaun?

junaid: yaar maine tujhay rehan or jannat k baray main bataya tha na

someone:haan...

junaid:bus woh or pakistani famous model........................LAAJ

someone:in a meaningful tone.......................laaj...........ahan.............. ...woh teray saath kia kar rahi hai

junaid:actually woh rehan ki friend hai so abh meri bhi

someone:intresting...................ok chal main aa raha hoon................1 hour main k

junaid:k.................jaldi ana

he droped the call and walk towards the other where all three of them were chatting

rehan:kiss ki call thi

junaid:aik surprise hai...................one of my bestest friend will be here soon

all:k

they leave there things on one side and firstly decides to have rides

rehan, jannat and junaid decided to have a rollar coaster 1st

but laaj denys as she hates hights

junaid and all convinced her to take it only 1 time

laaj and junaid sits on the front seat and rehan and jannat on the back one

laaj:in a low voice and closing her eyes..............junaid

junaid:hmmmm............looking at her

laaj:mujhay darr lag raha hai

junaid:in a low a sweet voice...........laaj

laaj:hmmmmm

junaid:meri ankhoon main dekhoo.....................and i promise tumhain darr nahi lagay ga

his style was so convencing k laaj slowly open her eyes and looked in his black eyes

and were totally engrossed in each other.............................both didn't know what they should called there feelings.......................but they really feel something new and superb in there hearts

the ride moves to its top and a pic was taken by the camera...................then the ride moves towards down and then take a full round and then moves up and down but....................it didn't have any effect on themm................evan the noise making by the peoples didn't effect them

they had fully forget the world

in the end, jannat and rehan make them came to the world

rehan:looking at something and then had a strange smile on his face..................talk to laaj.....................kyoun laaj.........................dar tau nahin laga

laaj:quite sharmofied...................nahin

at the scene laaj and junaid were walking forward and rehan and jannat after them..........................rehan showed something to jannat

jannat smiled and said

jannat:nahin nahin rehan...................kaisi baatain kar rahay hoo......................junaid jiss k saath ho usay daar kaisa

both were quite embarrased

rehan:smiling...................haan haan woh tau nazar aa raha hai

junaid:shocked and confused..........................nazar aa raha hai .......................matlab?

then rehan and jannat spotted towards a stall on which the pic, which were taken above on the ride, were sold....................and now there was a huge crowd as k junaid n laaj ki pic aaye thi...............jiss main woh doonon aik doosray ko hi dekhay ja rahay thay.......................and the crowd was observing there love

laaj feels quite embarssed and junaid was blushing...................haila

then rehan wents to the stole n buy there and 3 pics of laaj and junaid pic................

n give 1 to laaj, other to junaid and kept the third one 4 themselves

junaid:abh yeh teesri tu nay apnay liye kyoun rakhi

rehan:usay chertay howay...............dekh abh jab meray bachay hoon gay tau tu tau unhain yeh pic dekhanay wala nahin.......................tau main hi dekha doon ga................unh k chacha ki romanvi dastan ki aik jhalak.

junaid:dekh aisi koi baat nahin..........................woh tau bus laaj ko dar lag raha tha.......................main tau bus uski madad kar raha tha

rehan:accha yaar.....................mujhay patah hai............................u don't need to explain nething k.....................main tau bus tujhay cheer raha tha

after that they were about to move when someone again called him.....................but not on phone this time.............................face to face

someone:mujhay bulakay......................abh khud kahan chal diye junaid

they all turned back

junaid:abay tu aa gaya

but before k junaid usay hug karay laaj us admi ko ja k hug karti hai

and all remain confused

..................................abh app loog confused na hooo

jo hai main app ko next part main bata doon gii
k

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
yay...i m da 1st one 2 comment after a long time...dis part was soo ocute...i cudn't stop smiling....jus wonderful....gud job ana...n i wonder hu dat new entry is....i hope ke koi vilin na ho....
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part. But who is this new entry??? cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
ana dear zabardast..i love it..me tho fulltoo fida over your story..it is totally awesome...mind blowing.
mind blasting... coolll... super cooll.. fantastic... excellent... brilliant... superb.. dhassu... jhakaas.. bindass. par excellence...damn goodddd..... 👏
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junaid ka laaj se kehna ki uski aankhon mein dekho.. laaj aur junaid ke aankhon ka milna.. hye..hye.. main mar jawa.....very shweettt & cutee... 😳
ab yeh naya entry kaun hain joh junaid aur laaj ko jaantha hain..me thinking.... 😃 ab please next part jaldi se continue karo me will be waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Ana dear gr8 part 👏

chalo ji ham confuse nahi hote per agla part jaldi likhne ki koshish kerna😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ana dear cool part 👏 really too cute also... 😛
wen Rehan & Jannat r teasing them.... 😉
hey but now whose dis jise laaj bhi jaanti hai???? 😳
kya solid scene pe end kiya hai part.... 😕
ab zyada wait na karna aur jaldi se next part post karna plz...... 😊 m too eager too knw..... 😃

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