ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T1(PROLOGUE/CHP 1- 5)

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Arati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Chapter 2

What an amazing introduction to The Arnav Singh Raizada..!! ASR, name says it all. I just loved the way he dealt with the man Pablo.

I liked this, he is kinda sweet to Lavanya, not exactly sweet but not all arrogant and rude. I am loving this Arnav.

LOL..He is to babysit that girl. He has no idea what kind of girl is Khushi, has he? I am eagerly waiting for ArShi to meet.

Hey! Thanks dear..Glad u liking this FF...the characters are a little bit diff ...and I've always liked a strong and confident Khushi...so all my stories have her as an equal to Arnav wherever possible :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#882

Chapter 3

Though no ArShi, I enjoyed it thoroughly. I really loved it<3

Arnav is a jerk, rude, arrogant in short exactly the way as I like him :P I like Arnav's Dadu. He looks like a wise old man.

The best part of the update was flashback. My Lord!! he actually said that to Khushi?! He is a complete jerk, presumptuous is absolutely correct word for him. I hope Khushi knock some sense in his mind. he is in for a surprise.

Looking forward to the explosive meeting of theirs in next chapter:)

Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#883

Chapter 4

Now this is what I call nehle pe dehla update. I am in love with this Khushi. Mr. Arrogant is having a tough time😆

Khushi came before him?! this thing pleasantly surprised me. Good going Gupta..!! I loved it when when Khushi answered all his questions.

I want to know more about Khushi and her father's equation. this is really interesting.

PS: ASR is not that bad, he has a heart😃 I loved the way he talked to Lavanya. Mr. Arrogant is understanding too at times:)

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#884

Chapter 5

Khushi answered all the questions perfectly. Didn't loose her calm and most importantly impressed ASR.

I was eagerly waiting for some revelation about Khushi and her father's relationship. Now things are quiet clear as in why does she hate him. The thing she said when he was introducing himself with Lavanya surprised me. She is feisty and that is what I am loving about her.

Like ASR, I am wondering too who is Sujoy Gosh? Interesting.

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surrazdan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#885

just started readng d story... looks nice...

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#886

Fantastic concept and wonderfully written

just start reading this story, character sketch, teaser and prologue was amazing...👏

and also read 5 chapters, they were fabulous...i already reading ur story between the lines, but i can't hold myself reading ur other works..wow loved the way u write out arnav and khushi characters, both r confident and strong , intelligent ...👍🏼

loved the auction scene, arshi's conversation on meeting,,their together press conference...arnav is very impressed from khushi's confidence and answers to the media...now looking 4wd to the rest of the story..😊

Edited by chandni00 - 11 years ago