ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T1(PROLOGUE/CHP 1- 5)

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Gayuraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#871

Hai
super updates yaar
story is moving 4ward in an interesting way
loved it.

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Juliet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#872

awesum cncept...
i read ur other wrks too...dey were too gud...
fan ho gai me to...
hope khushi manages everythng
plz pm me nxt tym u update
thnx :)

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Riima_Azraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#873

can't wait for the next chapter

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#874

Arati, it is such a great pleasure to read ur stories.. I've only just begun this, finishing only the prologue and chapter 1, but I can already foresee what a colossal one this is going to be... I loved the intensity u exhibited in the prologue.. Though as per ur say, it doesn't have much to do with the story... But it,never the less, gave it a mysterious beginning... Chapter 1 was so interesting in many aspects... 1st was that Aman, is Khushi's PA, and not Arnav's... Shyam, is a certified b*****d, and Khushi already outsmarted him in the beginning itself...(loved this). And the fact that she's already holding a high profile position in the company is adding up all the required spices to make this a very intriguing read indeed...

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#875

Ok, so these r the things I've been thinking about after reading chapters 2-5...

- Arnav, though arrogant and uncompromising to the rest of the world, shares a very special bond with his grandfather and a good compassionate one with his PA, Lavanya...

- Khushi is a very strong woman, but extremely loving and warmhearted in her dealings with everyone around her, (except of course, her father).

-Khushi and Arnav share a past, though a brief one, which had a lasting effect on her, but probably didn't even make a scratch on him...

- Khushi's father is a jerk and a womanizer... Garima Gupta was lucky to be rid of him... Khushi has no respect for him and holds him in contempt... Serves him right... He's a b*****d... And I don't blame her for treating him like a piece of shit...

- Arnav's assumptions regarding Khushi were all proven wrong... His ego has taken a jolt, but his respect for her has intensified... He's intrigued by her... She's a mystery he'd probably love to unravel... His general characterization of the rich women population had to take a backseat in Khushi's case..

- there is definitely something cooking... This to me sounded like Arun Mehra was planning on sabotaging Khushi's image in public, to show the world that she's not the suitable choice and candidate for the position given to her?????

Finally, I love ur overall knowhow of the working of the corporate world... Ur story till now is very captivating.. Loved the pictures of A&K's attires. Very very chic and sexy...

This is arati at her best... MUAH... LOVE U...

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Arati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: Denaid
Ok, so these r the things I've been thinking about after reading chapters 2-5...
- Arnav, though arrogant and uncompromising to the rest of the world, shares a very special bond with his grandfather and a good compassionate one with his PA, Lavanya...
- Khushi is a very strong woman, but extremely loving and warmhearted in her dealings with everyone around her, (except of course, her father).
-Khushi and Arnav share a past, though a brief one, which had a lasting effect on her, but probably didn't even make a scratch on him...
- Khushi's father is a jerk and a womanizer... Garima Gupta was lucky to be rid of him... Khushi has no respect for him and holds him in contempt... Serves him right... He's a b*****d... And I don't blame her for treating him like a piece of shit...
- Arnav's assumptions regarding Khushi were all proven wrong... His ego has taken a jolt, but his respect for her has intensified... He's intrigued by her... She's a mystery he'd probably love to unravel... His general characterization of the rich women population had to take a backseat in Khushi's case..
- there is definitely something cooking... This to me sounded like Arun Mehra was planning on sabotaging Khushi's image in public, to show the world that she's not the suitable choice and candidate for the position given to her?????
Finally, I love ur overall knowhow of the working of the corporate world... Ur story till now is very captivating.. Loved the pictures of A&K's attires. Very very chic and sexy...
This is arati at her best... MUAH... LOVE U...

Haha...Bang on dear! Though i won't comment on the mystery part...yet ;)

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Nina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#877

Wow..just started reading this! Good work so far!

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shubhi15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#878

Has read all your complete FF's...
N loved all the stories... 😊
Must say u r awesome writer... 👏
Recently came across this one...
Read all the parts in a go...
This on is as good as them...
Specially loved this strong Khushi...
Looking forward to read more... 😊
N Pls pm me with future updates...

Edited by shubhi15 - 12 years ago

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#879

A lot many people asked me to read your stories:)

And I would like to thank all those people or else I would have missed an awesome story like this. Though I have read only prologue and chapter one but I can say this with confidence that you are one of the brilliant writer here:) Your language, grammar, vocabulary, everything is just perfect.

Coming to the update, I loved reading a smart Khushi. you know I used to wonder that why people never write a story in which Khushi is as powerful as Arnav? Finally I got one story and that too awesome.

I loved the way Khushi outdid shyam.

Looking forward to know more about ASR:)

Going to read chapter 2:)

Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago