An ArHi Fairy Tale#3*Happily Ever After*Completed - Page 3

part 14
awesome...
fantastic...
loved this fairy tale dear...
so beautiful...
all is well...

fantastic... Loved the "Happily Ever After"
but would have loved to see a day in the life of our King and Queen 😉
Just a genuine fan request

That was Brilliant...in the list of my fairy tales...it tops :D...I just loved loved loved it...simple,interesting and oh so amazing.You wrote beautifully...awesome detailing,pace,scenes...FANTASTIC.👏
Gonna miss it.

R. To be frank, i m practically kicking myself mentally for not following the story after the 5th chapter cos of my deteriorating interest in fairytales and lack of time due 2 exams. But when i resumed reading the story i fell in Love with this baby of urs. It is beautiful, magical, lovely, balanced n perfect...!! Loved all the beautifully laid out characters. Arnav is truly a prince charming, the kind that sweeps you off ur feet, in every way possible chivalrous, magnanimous, loving, devoted, handsome, beautiful n the list goes on. Khushi is a sweetheart, lovely, brave, selfless, mature, beautiful, loving, determined, forgiving and again the list goes on n on making her a queen in the truest sense. Lavz has to be the sweetest person half human to ever live. She is a true friend, loyal, compassionate n loving. Akash n anjali are sweethearts, Period. Loved how u have depicted the role of karma in a person's life with the end of kay. Loved ur genie twiggy n her sense of humor. The true lovez first kiss was awesome. Their first kiss on the balcony of their palace infront of their subjects as man n wife was beautiful, inspired by the royal weddings of britain and our own disney i guess. The best happily ever after ever This is going 2 top my fav fairytales list. Loved it damnit!!!

Ahh its been such a wonderful ride! Am glad to be able to read your wonderful writing.and to boot fairytale arshi style! Who wouldn't want to read that? Such a feel good story that I am a little sad it ended.

Awww new thread...res

The true love's first kiss..it had to be had to be there. but, what was most delightful was the jeanie.. definitely from the my most fav fantasy show ever on TV.."I dream of Jeanie"...loved this character and its description...

loved the ending ..it was really Happily ever after..this story bought back fond memories...thank you!!!

Res
CONGRATS ON NEW THREAD WHAT AN EPIC JOURNEY WAS IT

Awesome Update n superbbb ending...
Oh god Saiyu what a perfect grasp u had on the tale superb... Normally I am unable to comment properly on the ending coz it made me little emotional. But loved it every bit of it... Wht happend to K was muahhh she deserved it... In the last update u brought the last magical creature too n thts genie(if u think of fairytales otherwise may be there r more or not)... So true lover's first kiss did its part... Haha it was hilarious when Anjali,La n Akash peeked in and then after seeing the love birds kissing they shut da door n looking at everywhere except each other... I bet they would have turned perfect shade of pink in embarassment... Then da wedding n perfect style of fairytale in it... All disneyland movies swam before my eyes... Awesome job done... Akash n La kissed too chalo ji now it is a HAPPILY EVERAFTER ending... *clapping* Hope to see another story soon

It was perfect...

No epilogue..and the story ended...very sad...but beautiful update and wonderful story