An ArHi Fairy Tale#3*Happily Ever After*Completed

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Farah

@farah53

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I love fairy tales...I do.. I have always done...& I always will...

Oh..What a fairy tale ending to a fairy tale!!!

Part 13

I loved how you describes Arnav's restlessness at seeing Khushi lifeless...Maybe that's how beast had felt watching Belle lifeless in his mansion at the beginning..Not that he is the beast..He was the prince.. From the very beginning, he was!

& I loved how you depicted that whole sequence in front of a stone Anjali..Where Arnav breaks down & Khushi witnesses it & unbeknownst to both of them,Anjali witnesses the whole thing..

& I loved the whole fast-paced progression after the clock struck 12...Oh, the drama!& the anti-climax!...Amazing!!

Part 14

So the curses & counter-curses took place..& a genie appeared...

& I must say for all the vagueness in his description, the Devil seemed mighty scary to me...Seriously scary!

& true love's first kiss...Let me just sit for a while & sigh on that!!!!!Mind-numbingly awesome!

& once they started, they couldn't be stopped!!Besharams!

& the coronation, the wedding, the introductory wave at the balcony..So very Will-Kate, the modern day fairy tale!!!

& then there is the biggest fairytale of all, Arnav-Khushi!!!!Whenever these two expresses their love to each other, a fairy tale starts & culminates for me...Right there, right then...So this, Saiyyu, was one of the most magical fairy tale I have read in a looong time!!!!!

God bless you, deary!!!!!

Edited by farah53 - 12 years ago

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

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UNressing Finally!!! am sooo Sowwii!!

OK even if I say 'I love it' a MILLION times it still wouldn't justify HOW much I ACTUALLY love this story!!

my Favourite form of fiction is Fairly tale!! n WHAT a fairy tale this been! everything was just PERFECT!! EVERYBODY got their 'HAPPILY EVER AFTER' ❤️

you are an awesome n VERY talented writer!! ALWAYS keep writing!!

can't wait t read what you have in store for us next! 😊

Edited by Riima_Azraa - 12 years ago

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

unres

yes that was a simple ending to a not so simple story 😊

and u did close all the loops beautifully!!

loved it

Edited by vandana73 - 12 years ago

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

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What an end to the fairy tale story. I love how you closed the loops of the glass shoe and its purpose; the apple that was used for a good cause indirectly backfiring on the stepmother. Twiggy the genie was too adorable; she being 'the romantic' chose noble and pure love. The inclusion of details like Twiggy is incomplete without the other shoe, the genies stay dormant till they sense the need, their powers and effects give the perfect magical quotient to the update. I like the mention of presence of evil as long as the world exists, even in the land of fairy tales.

Lavanya has Aakash, the royal couple are married; Anjali is aware that she will find her prince charming, each one has a wonderful partner for eternity. Their First kiss was beautiful, enchanting to say the least and marriage that proclaims them as man and wife leaves you delighted. While reading I realised that a few situations from the classic fairytales have made an appearance here. Biting the poisonous apple gave the Snow-white effect, running when the clock strikes twelve leaving a shoe behind gives the Cinderella effect, the genie in the story gives an Alladin effect and the breaking of eternal sleep gives the Sleeping Beauty effect.

I maintain when I say that writing a fairytale isn't easy and a certain skill is required catering to the requirements n you have done it so deftly. Now that FT has ended (sigh), I really don't want FS to end.

Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hi saiyoo

sorry yaar for late comments

but i was doing this small vm as my dedication to ur FF

the dreamy fairy tale has completed with love as theme i am overwhelmed dear

it was gr8

the chap is the best chap among all i loved

love is sacrifice khushi has shown it i loved it

i loved twiggy character he was awesome

pretty love story

cant thank u enough for this ya

here is my vm

this is my first try apologies for mistake and late

arhi fairy tale on rabbave

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LErgVOLc18E

my second version

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=29r5lcN8tQs

see and comment dear

Edited by devishree - 12 years ago

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

congo on new thread but completed nahinnn **in old hindi movie style*
will b waiting...
*edit*
Awesomeee.. This was just the perfect ending. Twiggy is a romantic and i adored her. The best part of ur fairy tale u didn't kept the evil in the story for long like a perfect fairy tale. And the kiss of the true love broke the curse.. hayeee.. Things started working out between akash and la too. Just perfecto. I am gonna miss this one a lott... 👏 👏👏 for writing it in such an adorable way.

Edited by simi58 - 12 years ago

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

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gosh i forgot i had nt commented here thank u fr remindin me
first of all congratulation on completing the story which was amazing i
loved it and i wish it never ended
bt yes the details were perfectnever expected a geniie here bt u did add it
And i love the fact that it reminded me so many fairy tales it was a mix of all of them
and u owned it i mean it was flawless even if we can regonize snoz zhite cindrella ...
It really felt like your story ... Gosh i simply dnt knw how to explain it XD hope u did get what ieant here XD
i cnt wait to see you back with a new FF insha allah and waiting fr the other update of finding solace

Edited by BaRul-lover - 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

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First off all, congrats on have the final chapter in a completely new thread on its own! :)

This truly was a happily ever after *sigh* I too have always love fairy tales since childhood, especially thanks to my Dada and Dadi and the immense love they shared and will always share. Dadi used to always tell me about her love story, which was no less that a fairy tale in my eyes<3

I thought it was cute how you obviously included your friends in this fan fiction ^_^ it was sweet!

The entire time I was reading and especially during the end the song, Raja Ko Rani Se Pyaar Ho Gaya, was playing in the back of my mind. I just love that song!

And it was a happily ever after for all, not just ArHi in my eyes! :)

Thanks for giving us all such a wonderful story. It'll always be in my heart as it is a fairy tale and it is ArHi :)

My reaction was the following after reading the last line :)

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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Arnavforeva

@Arnavforeva

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Loved the story! Was a perfect fairy tale! Except i dont know d end:( waitin to read d last chapter...can v know wen it'll b posted?

Edited by Arnavforeva - 12 years ago

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Denaid

@Denaid

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Congrats...new thread and all..but don't finish it here plz...it's such a beautiful story, written so lovingly..I really think u should give it some more of ur creative talent..waiting eagerly.