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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: Frozenfire
😃😊THANKS FOR THE PM .,AWESUM UPDATE LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE

More will be up soon, and your welcome:)

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: Frozenfire
😃😊THANKS FOR THE PM .,AWESUM UPDATE LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE

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thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

wooow that was amazing great characterization there is a thin line between obsession and love and u have written it so well that it feels more than perfect i love arnavs character cos he justifies and is unapologetic about he is and overwhelmed and feel bad for kushi both are equally right in their stance thannku so much for coming up with a unique concept i can feel that the intensity in this is gonna get electrifying by the day awaiting a new update soon and i prmosie to comment can i get a pm for the next update

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khizzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

thankyou for updating i love your work

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ayushma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

I am so glad to stumble upon this FF. It's completely different, its raw and edgy, yet at times it found this story to be very hypocritical. The characterization of protagonists were very dark and cold.

Throughout the story, Arnav's cruelty were constantly being thrown at us, his anger, his ruthless behavior, his jealousy and his Midas touch. Some behavior took him towards brighter lights, while some snatched him back into the dark. Khushi kept repeating Arnav's cruelty, or how he is so dangerous to mankind, or how people like him should not be allowed to breathe. Yet, she's no different than him. While Arnav laid his feelings on her feet, she hid her feelings to prove how she is better than him. Arnav is a ruthless being, and his jealousy can be hell for the receiver, yet at times, Khushi took pleasures in his jealousy. That is the same quality she loved about Arnav. Yet, she acts like a saint.

I am still not convinced if Khushi really loved Arnav, not because she has been hiding her feelings, but she her acts does not support Aakash's claims. I feel like Arnav's memory is washed away. I would love to read more about this story. Do pm me with the updates! :)

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: akkasrk
wooow that was amazing great characterization there is a thin line between obsession and love and u have written it so well that it feels more than perfect i love arnavs character cos he justifies and is unapologetic about he is and overwhelmed and feel bad for kushi both are equally right in their stance thannku so much for coming up with a unique concept i can feel that the intensity in this is gonna get electrifying by the day awaiting a new update soon and i prmosie to comment can i get a pm for the next update

Thank you for your very sweet comment, you're absolutely right, there is a thin line between love and obsession and Arnav is on it's very tipping point.I am in love with his character myself,and I am thrilled that I can make my reader's feel the same..and yes, they will be explosive😉

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: msin
It's intriguing...

Thank youu😛

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: khizzi
thankyou for updating i love your work

Glad you like my story😛

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bunnylovessunny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#619

This is my first comment on your story and I'm honestly regretting that I didn't comment before. No, not because I was silent, but because I didn't come across this beauty before :D Oh how I wish I did!

Man you ROCK! You have a way with words! Simple and sweet and yet so stylish and sophisticated. I've read every word you wrote here and I must tell you you write exceptionally well. I can understand and relate to what you write. This is one hell of an intriguing concept and I've enjoyed every single chapter to my heart's content!

Bravo!

I somehow love your Arnav and Khushi, they are different. Especially your Arnav, his darkness is sexy and I just LOVE it! Khushi on the other hand turned out to be the ironic fickle minded beauty. Dude the world knows Arnav and Khushi are meant to be besides Arnav OR Khushi, or sometimes both of them! :D

Simply superb! I love this story and I'm gonna stalk! :D

Please update fast :D

ps: I'm purposely not commenting on the way you've moulded your story OR your characters because as a reader I believe that if you've created something you deserve to shape it up the way you like and honestly you've done an exceptional job in narrating this one! :D

so I have no complaints, I've loved what you've written till now and I'm sure you'll not cease to surprise me further! :D

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: aycma98
I am so glad to stumble upon this FF. It's completely different, its raw and edgy, yet at times it found this story to be very hypocritical. The characterization of protagonists were very dark and cold.

Throughout the story, Arnav's cruelty were constantly being thrown at us, his anger, his ruthless behavior, his jealousy and his Midas touch. Some behavior took him towards brighter lights, while some snatched him back into the dark. Khushi kept repeating Arnav's cruelty, or how he is so dangerous to mankind, or how people like him should not be allowed to breathe. Yet, she's no different than him. While Arnav laid his feelings on her feet, she hid her feelings to prove how she is better than him. Arnav is a ruthless being, and his jealousy can be hell for the receiver, yet at times, Khushi took pleasures in his jealousy. That is the same quality she loved about Arnav. Yet, she acts like a saint.

I am still not convinced if Khushi really loved Arnav, not because she has been hiding her feelings, but she her acts does not support Aakash's claims. I feel like Arnav's memory is washed away. I would love to read more about this story. Do pm me with the updates! :)

Hey:)

I am thrilled that you think that my story is different...and I COMPLETELY agree with you that this story is full of hypocrisies.Thank you for giving a very sincere and genuine review for this storyFirstly, in this story,Arnav's cruelty hasn't been adequately portrayed as yet( in my opinion) and there will be further incidents where ,hopefully,I will be able to make my reader's absolutely hate him.Your statement is completely right, Khushi isn't a saint at all.She has a grayer side to her as well which isn't all that nice...and in the 12 chapter's that I have written there isn't any one action of her's that proves her love.Those will come later. As for Khushi acting innocent, it's actually a private satire for my own personal amusement.I mean, aren't the female protagonist's ALWAY'S innocent? I just had this idea of creating a twisted,innocent Khushi who isn't really naive at all.Sooo..yeah that's all I have to say.

Oh,and I shall send you a P.M for sure😛

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