His Desire-The Blessing&The Curse-Linkto#2PG1 - Page 63

Originally posted by: bunnylovessunny

This is my first comment on your story and I'm honestly regretting that I didn't comment before. No, not because I was silent, but because I didn't come across this beauty before :D Oh how I wish I did!

Man you ROCK! You have a way with words! Simple and sweet and yet so stylish and sophisticated. I've read every word you wrote here and I must tell you you write exceptionally well. I can understand and relate to what you write. This is one hell of an intriguing concept and I've enjoyed every single chapter to my heart's content!

Bravo!

I somehow love your Arnav and Khushi, they are different. Especially your Arnav, his darkness is sexy and I just LOVE it! Khushi on the other hand turned out to be the ironic fickle minded beauty. Dude the world knows Arnav and Khushi are meant to be besides Arnav OR Khushi, or sometimes both of them! :D

Simply superb! I love this story and I'm gonna stalk! :D

Please update fast :D

ps: I'm purposely not commenting on the way you've moulded your story OR your characters because as a reader I believe that if you've created something you deserve to shape it up the way you like and honestly you've done an exceptional job in narrating this one! :D

so I have no complaints, I've loved what you've written till now and I'm sure you'll not cease to surprise me further! :D

Originally posted by: aaaziiz

Hey:)

I am thrilled that you think that my story is different...and I COMPLETELY agree with you that this story is full of hypocrisies.Thank you for giving a very sincere and genuine review for this storyFirstly, in this story,Arnav's cruelty hasn't been adequately portrayed as yet( in my opinion) and there will be further incidents where ,hopefully,I will be able to make my reader's absolutely hate him.Your statement is completely right, Khushi isn't a saint at all.She has a grayer side to her as well which isn't all that nice...and in the 12 chapter's that I have written there isn't any one action of her's that proves her love.Those will come later. As for Khushi acting innocent, it's actually a private satire for my own personal amusement.I mean, aren't the female protagonist's ALWAY'S innocent? I just had this idea of creating a twisted,innocent Khushi who isn't really naive at all.Sooo..yeah that's all I have to say.

Oh,and I shall send you a P.M for sure😛

Originally posted by: saara76

Waiting for new update

Originally posted by: aycma98

Tsk. tsk. Trying to make me hate Arnav now, aren't you??? But you know it's hard feat. I would rather trust a person who is upfront about their issues, than someone who hides behind a shadow. We have all seen Arnav's ruthless behavior, and I don't think it is getting any better, but I would rather see that and be satisfied, than seeing Khushi's angelic facade. This in fact, is making me dislike her more than Arnav. I'm glad you liked my comment! :)

Originally posted by: angeldream14

awesome

he is back in her life

khushi still loves him

in every relation she trys to find him

wht is he plannig

Originally posted by: kinjalcp87

Nice update.why arnav is behaving like he don't know khusi.

Originally posted by: Semanti

Finally! I'd been waiting forever.

Anyway, coming to the chapter-- I really like how you're revealing layers of the characters one at a time.

None of them are all white or all black-- not remotely straightforward. You can't really like or entirely dislike any of them. Arnav Singh Raizada's magnetism is hypnotic. I sense that even as a reader. Khushi had no chance of resisting the full force of his intensity. Yet, I also sense how very dangerous he is. I would NOT want to cross him.

The question you asked about Khushi's affections is one that I've been asking from Chapter 1.

I think that she wants Arnav JUST as much as he wants her, just that she's in eternal denial (especially after whatever it is that Arnav did).

She doesn't quite understand her primal connection to him.

Akash-- I just feel awfully sorry for him and Payal. They're doomed from before they've even begun.

I dunno, I never liked Vivek Rathod much so he doesn't really have too much of my sympathy. His arrogance blinded him to the fact that he had picked up a lightning bolt by its tail.

Originally posted by: farha5556

awesome update,loved it,arnavs and kushis past was awesome,love this possessive arnav very much,poor vivek he over and loved that aakash will get a new life.

Originally posted by: LaxshaLOVEArshi

Very nice update ! Khushi, I only hate her !