His Desire-The Blessing&The Curse-Linkto#2PG1 - Page 64

Originally posted by: Mfm_06

I just stumbled upon this story &read it in one go ... it mi8 b a dark story but it's really worth reading ... The characterizations here r just 2 good ...& many may find Arnav here ruthless, jealous but u know what ... I'm liking his character much more than Khushi ...

Though it seems that Arnav has forgotten her due to some reasons ... But let's c what happens next ... W8ing for d nxt update ... Update soon😊

Originally posted by: Mxk3444

So I just finished reading this fanfic and I absolutely love it. I started off reading this story and I thought it to be a little weird that a little kid is already so emotionally attached to a seven year old girl but as I kept reading I was so intrigued. This fanfic is amazing I absolutely love it but what's bothering me is why Arnav doesn't remember her... Thanks for the update :)

Originally posted by: casker

loved the update.

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

his transaction from friend to that something else was thoroughly disturbing for me (because i am thinking from khushi's pov at tht time)

her broken commitment i would like to know in detail abt tht and not to forget his broken promises.

Originally posted by: apoorvaarnav

omg!!! i am speechless!
you are one of the most underrated writers!! i will publicise this i swear!!
i donot like this over bearing possesive arnav! khushi was right when she broke away! i think arnav has amnesia!!

Originally posted by: meem17

Wow ...u are brilliant
Absolutely fantastic...every chapter was journey. ...
Loved the over possesive arnav...many write abiut hi possessiveness
But u have gone far and beyond...u were able to capture the actual asrlike the way I wnted...pls buddy and pm me me when u next update

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

Update after really long time, but totally worth the wait.

I LOVED the way you described Akash's personality. I think I can somewhere relate to it, and to see it being put in words was a whole new revelation. Kudos for that.

As for Khushi and Arnav's relationship, I know Khushi might have been suffocated to an extent with such possessive man. Her side of story was so well etched out. Now I can't wait for their secret issue and Arnav's memory plot to unfold.

This is one chapter that I know I will read again and again for the sheer beauty of words, depth of characters and your fluid languid writing style.

Don't make us wait this long for the next chapter :)

Originally posted by: pixiegirl

Finally!

But you kept your promise :) You told me that you would update around the 3rd or the 4th of April & you did. Me happy :) I just hope that you won"t make us wait this long for your next update. Arrre yaar we have short memories, at least I do, & I forget what happened previously if there is such a long wait, also kind of lose the essence of the story if you know what I mean... I would hate to do that since yours is such an unique story told so intensely that it would really be shame...

I've told you this before, saying it again, I just love the way you write. The zillions of metaphors & analogies you use is amazing. You paint the characters & their feelings in so many shades, that you pretty much cover every facet of their personalities & thoughts...

Loved the way you described the characters & their feelings to such painstaking detail in this update as well. You said Aakash will always remain sick & needy in your story... Sucks :( Poor Payal, she will have to be very strong, hope she is that...

Up until now, I am a little confused about Khushi... She is not the goody two shoes she usually is portrayed as in the show & other FFs. Your Khushi seems to be a bit of rebel. Why would she kiss Vivek Rathore on the LIPS when she is NOT dating him, only to spite Arnav?? I didn't get that. Sorry, I have to agree with Arnav there. She promised him she would be his only yet she seems to be a bit on the promiscuous side, am I right?? What kind of a girl is she really? Simply don't get her... It is one thing to feel stifled & claustrophobic with overbearing love that Arnav had for her, but to sleep around or kiss around other men just to experiment?? Beats me really. 😕

You should tell us soon how Arnav developed amnesia where Khushi is concerned, it is becoming quite frustrating to guess all the time... Because, I for one did not understand why would Arnav crush Vivek Rathore if he really has forgotten Khushi... Me not getting it at all...

Update soon :)

Originally posted by: mitzi11

super super update