Dear Tina,
Your contract killer has come out very well, better than your serial killer in your other FF. He is cold, detached, and thorough. After all, it is all in the day's work for him.
As for his next target, I had thought it would be someone for whom Aisha cares a lot, and not Aisha herself, for I seem to remember the man who orders the killings saying that he wanted to torment Aisha as much as he could. But now it appears, if Aisha is indeed so very beautiful, to be her. Or perhaps Riya? But is Riya very beautiful? Wasn't she supposed to be just cute?
Well, I think you have taken full advantage of the author's privilege to confuse the readers!😉 Have fun, and I am keen to see how long you can continue this without revealing the identity of the intended second victim.
Shyamala Aunty
Chapter 6B
Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago
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